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Crimmy Oi brat, what're ye using that noggin for?

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@Suku Do you have a plot outline done, or some more OOC detail?
Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by Polaris North
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I suppose this should be good enough?

@Suku
Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by Masaki Haruna
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Masaki Haruna OLD TESTAMENT

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@Polaris North
On behalf of Suku, Co-GM coming through.

My review:
Appearance:
Reminds me of every bishie I love. ^^ *goes to read yaoi*

Character:
Finally, a disciplined character with awkwardness impending and the knack for justice. I've always wanted to see how this would play in an RP but we all know RPs die before it even develops. It's fleshed out and I wanna see more of it in the I.C. The Blood Power part had dark themes to it, nicely done.

Background:
Determination is what I love to see. Not blind determination and I believe Ryu has this. Overall I am just happy because you have made a quality character that is not shounen trope. Even as others may count it, all you need is the right execution. Keep your history brief, it will flourish in the RP. I rather see a brief background than a fleshed out background because if people know the contents, what's the point of showing? We need hype and shows. I believe you can deliver.

Abilities:
I will not say much but you have my approval. Feats in the IC.

Overall. You got my standards. You deserve more than an applause. :D

@Crimmy OOC will be taken care. Patience is a virtue.

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Thanks. I was really gunning for the dark themes when it came to the whole blood manipulation thing. I forgot to say that he doesn't like using it an would often refuse to use other people's blood.

Also makes me imagine what would happen if he levels up and how conflicted he will be with the whole morality thing.

I really do hope that the RP starts and lasts.
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worry not I was not idling away I been double checking what I want and how it would check to railgun cannon and the like @Polaris North
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@Polaris North I will make the perfect counterpart for Ryu aside from spamming the The Iconic Character of Every Raildex RP I have.
It will. We're working on the OOC right now.
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@Masaki Haruna

Should I be worried about that? I look forward to seeing the character though.

And good luck to the both of you.
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