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@VeilanK Good Cs. With your power, it is.....well, to put it simply, underpowered. Your original power is much better however you wouldn't really be able to heal with the rain, as that would require water manipulation. You can control snow, water, lightning, etc.

With you water breath, I will say you can use and control it, considering you are a water dragon and you can breath it, so then you can heal with that, you can also revive as long as they haven't been dead for too long. You will also be able to turn your water breath to an icy breath.
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@The One Alright, thanks. I'll get to editing the water stuff then. Want me to post it into the Character char once it's finished?
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@VeilanK Once you make the edits then yeah, go ahead.
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Power 1: Since he cannot breathe fire, Veilan is able to manipulate the stream of water that comes out of his mouth to have the abilities to freeze or slow his enemies. He can also mend wounds of his allies, and depending on how long the player has been dead, he can resurrect them.


Is that better, @The One?
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Name: Gordo
Gender: Male
Species: Dragon
Age: Not Hatched.
Appearance: In a very circular shaped, brown spotted, white egg.

Personality: He is impatient at being cramped in a small space inside the egg. But if he ever thought about it, he wouldn't remember a time he was ever patient. Rather he would always refuse to wait and simply take off on his own instead.

He is curious, as he loves to look at things, spending copious amounts of time, examining what the average dragon might only glance at.

He is a complainer. Anything goes wrong, and he'll mutter about it to himself if he hasn't an audience or vocalise his problems constantly to others around him. Good or bad to complain? He doesn't know, but complaining is almost instinctive to him...

Jealous guy, if he likes something/someone, and he can't have that thing or other dragon, he will try to get rid of the 'problem'... Don't covet thy neighbour. Don't be obsessive with objects, putting your love into them. "Yeah.... Gordo, more than likely wouldn't listen to that advice..."

Lastly, he is honest and will say it (as cliche as this sounds) 'how it is'.

Bio: Gordo, doesn't remember anything about his parents because he was always inside the egg, since as far back as he can remember. But he does remember, feeling himself be lifted high into the sky and then placed on a soft surface. It was comfortable to him and allowed him to fall asleep easily.

Far above Gordo, stood his parents, both covered in brown scales and fairly tall dragons. His mother would stay home, watching over the nest, protecting it. While the Father would hunt daily, each day going further and further out not only for food, but to explore more of the world he had yet to see.

Soon, his father stopped returning to the nest which broke his mother's heart out of worry. But she knew her responsibility was to her son and so, she did not take off in search for the father, instead she stuck to the nest, as its only protector.

When she had to go and get food for them both, she made sure the egg was not visible to the naked eye, and only left for the bare minimum amount of time she had to. At night his mother would sing Gordo a song that would always put him to sleep right away.

Power 1:(I guess he can use it after he hatches?) Blending in: He can change the color of his entire body, including his eyes to blend in with his surroundings, making it very difficult to see him, especially when he is standing still.
Type of Dragon:Western Dragon.
Family: Father is Spike and his mother is called Cera
Friends: None at the moment.
Sentimental Attachment: his mother Cera.
Other: He loves food. It seems like he never stops eating.
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@VeilanK Yeah that's fine however, that isn't a power, that's his breath. His power would be weather manipulation.
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@The One

Other: Instead of breathing fire, Veilan sprays water at others, and is able to alter the temperature of it. He can freeze, slow, or scald people with it. He can also heal his friends and resurrect them, as long as they haven't been dead for too long.

Power 1: Veilan is able to manipulate the weather, being able to create snow/rain storms. As a hatchling, because you can't really control/understand your power, the weather will change randomly. A downside to this power is that it drains a lot of the energy of the user, even with his energy boost from being rained on.

Changed some things around, just seeing how you like 'em.

Otherwise, some suggestions would be nice
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@VeilanK That looks good. As he uses the power he will come to understand it and able to use it more.
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@The One Alright, I got it copied down in a notepad, just gotta transfer it over the Characters then I should be set. If we really need, I'll eventually make a human character (Probably further down the plot line)
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How did i miss this??
i need to make a character..
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@Maria 127 Hey Maria. It should be starting in a few days anyway, I will be making my characters tomorrow.
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@The One I should be ready to start whenever. I'm just practicing writing atm to help me get better.

EDIT:

I forgot to mention that I may have tweaked my wrist. We are going to get it checked out now, and I'll try to keep you guys updated. I'll just be posting a bit slower if it is messed up.

-UPDATE

Doc said it wasn't too bad of a tweak, so he just said to take it easy for now.
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I'll try to get around to writing a new char or so in a few. Wrist is sore so I might wait until tomorrow or so. It's gonna be a human anyways since I think we have enough dragons now with about 2 people still needing to post their chars.
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Name:Kaz
Gender:Male
Species:Dragon
Age:Hatchling
Appearance: Silver western Dragon
Hatchling

Full grown

Personality: Kaz has no idea how to do any of his abilities so he starts off hanging around everyone else. He is completely comfortable talking with people though he prefers to hunt alone. Not knowing anything about his parents he feels lossed.

Bio:Hatches from a shell full of slime. He has no memory of his parents. Although he was placed in a hole that he could barely fit through and he has no idea why. He spends most his Hatchling life with the other dragons until he realizes his abilities.

Power: Pulse manipulatiion

Dragon type: Slime dragon- sprays slime/acid and has slimy exterior that's makes him harder to grip while moving

Family:None

Friends:None

Sentimental attachment:None

Other:doesn't handle ice well
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Also, @The One, I'm just wondering that because you noted the cave as a birth place if we're all born in it.
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How's this one I am also going to make a wingless fear dragon.
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@VeilanK I was wondering about that too.
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@VeilanK What? Wondering what? Did I miss something? Also I too will make humans, but not yet, since they won't come in for a little while.

@Raizin First, his name is Last? What?

Second, I'd prefer an image please. I can't really get an idea of what he looks like by three words.

Third: Your personality is WAY too short, like, seriously, really?

Fourth, no bio.

Five: You power is crap, it is weak. Pretty much useless...

Six: This is a casual Rp, if you want to join, then you're going to have to do WAY better than that.
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@The One autocorrect, I fixed it, and I will fix that. Just gonna take me a bit. My power is weak? How so?
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@The One I'm just mostly wondering if we were born in the same cave, (Which I'd doubt,) that's all.
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