[OOC] The Imperial Prisoner Task Service (Forgot to mention that this is a Star Wars RP)

[DepressedSoviet]

The Imperial Prisoner Task Service is a program designed to give proper use to dangerous or important prisoners under Imperial control. Military defectors, dishonorably discharged soldiers, captured alien criminals, and all other forms of scum and traitors are used in this program to perform tasks deemed too dangerous for military or intelligence forces. Operating in small groups, these forces are sent in under the strict control of a handler, and combat the Rebel Alliance and other threats to Imperial security. Successful missions are rewarded via reduction of sentence terms, enticing compliance from involved parties. The program is considered a grand success, and thus many new units are being formed. You are members of one such unit. Criminals gathered from Imperial prisons all across the galaxy, given a new life of service to the Empire.

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Okay, so now that the summary is out of the way, time for rules!
1. You know the drill, my word is law and all that. Just listen to me when I ask you to, and follow the guild rules, and we'll be fine.
2. Let me know if you have to disappear for a bit, just as I will if I have to. As someone with an occasionally sporadic schedule, I'm pretty forgiving if you just give me a warning first.
3. I am expecting plenty of language, grit, gore and violence, so be prepared for that. More promiscuous activities are allowed, but keep the details private and preferably off-site.
4. I'm stretching Star Wars canon a bit here, going into old EU/Legends territory as well, but try to keep your characters and activities within the common structure.
5. I expect decent writing, so no one-liners, excessive grammar issues, or 1st-person writing. I'm fine with short responses, just let me know first.
6. More Rules will be added as necessary.

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Okay, now its time for the character sheet:

Insert Character Name Here

Name:
Age:
Race:
Gender:

Appearance(Pictures are fine, but include at least a small written description):
Equipment & Clothing:

Personality:
History:
List of Crimes:

Enjoy, mention me or PM if you have any questions!

@frapet@Cam@The ghost in black@Eisenhorn OOC IS UP!!!!!

[Simple Unicycle]

Oooh, interested! I'll try to get a CS up today or tomorrow.

[The1Rolling1Boy]

Name: Lucas Nemo Hina
Age: 29
Race: Human with some cyborg tech
Gender: Male

Appearance: Lucas has golden blonde hair, a navy blue fridge, and dusty sky blue eyes that look like they have grey clouds in them.
Equipment & Clothing: He normally would carry around a couple of pocket knives that he sharpens and takes good care of them, he will either have his jacket tied around his waist or wearing it. When he normally wears a white collar shirt, a poorly tied necktie, his normal jacket and a pair of ripped and worn out jeans. When bored Lucas likes to chew on sharp items like scissors, or sewing pins.

Personality: He is not one for starting a fight unless you start talking negatively about him, Lucas also has a bad temper so he does have his outbursts. He is normally the quiet type slaving away on a computer, phone, or some type of electronic he can hack into and recode to do whatever he wants, plus he knows a good amount about chemistry and how things work so he also tends to be messing around with random items he finds to make some kind of bomb or some time of weird liquid out of milk, rat poison, and dissolved rock bits that he found while out on a walk that can probably make you unconscious for a month or kill you from the inside out by dissolving your insides.
History: Lucas had the parents that everyone would ask for and the childhood people could only wish for, but he didn't want anything to do with all of the toys and fancy clothes, the large amounts of money because of his father job, well actually he did care about that a little, and the big pool in the backyard. He never actually cared about anything, so when his parents went to bed he would seek out and burn all of the toys and study how the burned and what was the aftermath of them, he would then take the toys and put them in a container separated by the month they were burned. He would then take that and create something out of it, normally he would make a replica of a blaster his dad owner or a saber hilt but he would only use the really strong type for this work which is not very common to get after burning something, sometimes but rarely of something he saw on tv that sparked his interest in for example a person or new speeder bike.
List of Crimes: 1.) Poisoning and attempting to murder a sith lord 2.) killing his whole neighborhood including his parents with a bomb made out of two soda cans, gun powder, fireworks, and bath salt 3.) Hacking into imperial databases exposing military files they had hidden from the public 4.) Hacked into a droid and caused it to crash into a speeder bike causing it to crash into a transportation shuttle in front of it causing the shuttle to tumble and crash into a building where an imperial meeting was taking place.

[Eisenhorn]

Looks like its time to start on a CS then.

[DepressedSoviet]

@The1Rolling1BoyI, um, I forgot to put in the title that this is a Star Wars RP. You may want to adjust accordingly.

[The1Rolling1Boy]

@depressedSoviet Okay I changed it a bit to the best if my knowledge when it comes to Star Wars. I am a fan but I'm just not a maga fan to the point I kniw all of the different races abd different materials.

[Cam]

Name: Jarrde Holder
Age: 25
Race: Human
Gender: Male



Appearance: Jarrde is of a tall and slim, though not unmuscular build. Time in various prisons, rebel and imperial alike, has given his features a somewhat rugged and gaunt look. His brown hair is long and and generally unkempt.
Equipment & Clothing: Jarrde carries a collection of vibroblades, as well as a very cherished Verpine shatter gun. He dresses himself in a basic, but comfortable set of flight fatigues.

History: Jarrde Holder was once a junior officer of the Imperial navy. He had graduated from the academy with high marks regarding leadership and tactical proficiency. He was expected to be on the fast track, but alas, this was not the case.
Jarrde's criminal career began rather nobly by aiding the escape of a few dozen Wookie slaves. This earned him his first prison sentence with the Empire.
This didn't last long, however. By the pure chance of being in the right place at the right time, Jarrde has the good fortune to be liberate as a Rebel strike force came to rescue some of their captured comrades. Rather than joining the cause, however, he stole one of their ships and made way to the rim.
Out here on the fringe of the galaxy, he fell in with a group of pirates and made a career of it, targeting imperial and rebel alike. His military training served him well out here, as he grew rich plundering weak merchant vessels and under protected military supply lines. He eventually fell in love and married the group's captain, a pirate named Salina Ginn (Seen next to him in the provided image). Things were going well.
Although the good times can never last. As they were attempt to seize a valuable cargo freighter, they fell into a trap set by Imperial forces. Most of the crew was captured, but Salina was killed in the preceding firefight. Only Jarrde and a couple of others managed to escape. Alone and desperate, her turned finally to the rebellion for help. But old grudges from past crimes lead to inevitable betrayal. Jarrde was quickly sold out to facilitate a prisoner exchange with the empire. At the end on the line and back in Imperial hands, this is where the story begins.

Personality: Defiant, sarcastic, and somewhat arrogant, but not especially quick to anger. Becomes much more cold blooded, however, with the recent death of his wife.

List of Crimes: Various flavors of treason against the empire, conspiracy, piracy, forgery, and dozens of counts of murder.

[DepressedSoviet]

@CamHe's accepted, go ahead and throw him over into the characters tab.

@The1Rolling1BoyI'm gonna say he's accepted for now, but I'm going to be watching to make sure he'll fit the kind of RP I run. Nothing against you, just your writing style, while good, gives me a slight bit of concern.

[Cam]

@DepressedSoviet

I'd love to, thanks.

[The1Rolling1Boy]

@depressedsoviet May I know why my writing style conerns you? If I know why then maybe I can fix that problem. If you don't want to tell me that's okay, you just struck me with curiousity and confusion about what may or may not be wrong with my writing style.

[Cam]

@The1Rolling1Boy

Speaking only for myself, I notice some inconstancy within your CS, but that can be excused by the fact that you weren't aware that this was going to be a Star Wars game. For example: you mention something about a cell phone at one point, and later a soda can bomb. Obviously, these tidbits don't fit within the selected 'verse, and merit a more thorough edit.

Stylistically speaking, you do get a bit wordy at times. Why say, "dusty sky blue eyes that look like they have grey clouds in them..." when "cloudy, blue-grey eyes.." gets the point across just as well and flows much better?

I'm not trying to knock you down or anything; I just wanted to try and offer my own constructive critique. I don't know that these are the same concerns that DepressedSoviet had, but it's something to consider all the same.

[The1Rolling1Boy]

@Cam As I said before, I'm not a mega-fan of Star Wars, I only like the concept of it. But thank you for this information, I will definitely use this for further usage

[Cam]

@The1Rolling1Boy

Always happy to help.

If you'd like to do a bit of independent study before this gets moving, the star wars wiki is pretty comprehensive, and a generally entertaining read. I'll drop you a link below.

starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page

[Simple Unicycle]

I did it! Tell me if I need to add or correct anything. EDIT: Cal will keep the hat after all.

Cal Glewdis

Name: Cal Glewdis
Age: 27
Race: Human (Corellian)
Gender: Male

Appearance:

Cal Glewids

Stands at 6'1, and weighs in at 204 pounds. Has a rather strong build with a bit of flabbiness.

Equipment & Clothing: Clothes appear as seen in the photo, nix the hat. Has a DH-17 blaster as a side-arm and an E-11 blaster (stolen from a Stormtrooper during one of his smuggling operations) as his primary weapon. Both weapons are obviously confiscated, considering he's currently imprisoned.

Personality: Very talkative and loud, with a gung-ho attitude. Cal is against the empire for personal reasons; his father was killed in a protest on Corellia, and he figures that if he takes them down his father will be able to rest in peace. Anyhow, he likes to wisecrack, even at inappropriate times. One might think of laughing and joking as a way of coping with whatever shit he's going through; but really, he just likes to laugh and joke.
History: Cal was born on Corellia to Korali and Kreia Glewdis. He also had a little brother named Owen, who was four years younger than him. When Cal was 6, his father was killed in a protest. While this devastated Cal and he swore he'd never forgive the Empire for what it did to his family, little Owen didn't even remember his father enough to care.
And so, from that day forward, they were two brothers on opposite sides of the war. Cal hated the Empire and began doing work for the rebels, while Owen idolized the Empire. Cal left home at sixteen and began a career as both a smuggler and a rebel, while Owen eventually went on to become an officer of the Imperial Navy. On one of his outings with the Rebellion, in which they freed Rebel captives from an Imperial prison, Cal's ship was stolen by one of the people they freed, a man named Jarrde Holder. He's still pretty mad about that.
Cal was eventually caught and arrested, of course. They were proud to have caught the notorious Cal Glewdis, who reportedly smuggled thousands upon thousands of crates of spice and blasters without ever being caught. Who had a bounty of 50,000 credits on his head. Who did the Kessel Run in only 14 parsecs (the record being beaten by Han Solo recently. Cal is still angry about that, of course). So, he was locked up for what everyone assumed was gonna be a long, long time.
Until the Imperial Prisoner Task Service, that is.
List of Crimes: 308 confirmed counts of smuggling spice and weapons (that's not counting the unconfirmed counts), 4 confirmed counts of terrorism (working with the rebels, again not including unconfirmed counts), and 1 confirmed count of murder (the victim being an Imperial Officer, once more does not include unconfirmed counts).

[Cam]

@Simple Unicycle

Don't know why you'd ever want to ditch that rockin' hat, lol.

[Simple Unicycle]

The hat is awesome, but the man wants to feel the wind in his hair, dammit!

[Cam]

@Simple Unicycle

Give it to Jarrde then. Have you seen the man's hair?

[Simple Unicycle]

@Cam

I have seen it. Dude needs a haircut. But anyway, if you're serious about wanting the hat for your character, I can have Cal give it to you once the game starts up.

[Cam]

@Simple Unicycle

Nah, just kidding around. I kind of feel like turning this into a recurring joke like with Sherlock and the deerstalker, though.

[Simple Unicycle]

@Cam

Oooh, I like the sound of that. Look at us; we already have a recurring joke thought up and the game hasn't even started yet!