[OOC] |[ ⚵ ]| Cloud Chasers |[ A Fairy Tail AU ]|

[Gowi]

[Guilty Spark]

Now to the people who expressed interest and haven't shown up yet:

@zellected @Kal-El @Sarcelle Renard @Guilty Spark @Aegis1650 @Neurovoid @Apollosarcher

Friendly reminder that the OOC is up. If you no longer have any interest or feel you can't participate for whatever reason, please let me know asap. You're all entitled to a spot, but we do have about three people waiting to see if they can join the RP.

@Leslie Hall

Sorry about that, I still love this concept I just don't have the time, so if someone's still waiting for a spot they can have mine. I didn't know the spots were being limited or I'd have dropped in sooner.

[Cello]

@Guilty Spark No worries! Thank you for letting me know.

[Crimson Raven]

@Leslie Hall

Not trying to rush you, I'm just genuinely curious, do you have a planned ETA for the IC?

I'm exited to get this started, so many good characters and so much potential here.

[Cello]

@Crimson Raven I think it ultimately comes down to the fact that a few of us haven't put up CS' yet. In fact all three of us GM's are guilty of that.

The best date I can give is probably Monday. But that's best case scenario. Though I don't plan on letting the OOC drag on longer than Wednesday. I have my draft of the initial setting almost ready to go over with the GM's.

In the meantime I should really get my characters ready.

[Dio]

I'd like to introduce everyone to... the Captain of the Cloud Chasers, Ambrose Dahalag!

guild master

Guild Membership Card

The giant man known as Ambrose Dahalag is what you look for in a leader. He is headstrong, brave, and fearless, and always willing to carry the burden of others on his shoulders. There are many out there who consider him weak for his generosity as a leader because of how he welcomes many magicians and wizards with open arms into his guild. Vetting and knowing who you are allowing into not only your guild, but your family too, without knowing who they truly are is a risk many are not willing to take. Ambrose sees it as the first test. His fatherly and paternal instincts tell him that those who would want to hurt him, his guild, and his family would do so outright instead of hiding behind facade, so that is why he opens his doors freely.

Morality and ethics run deep within the Pirate King. Knowing right from wrong is something Ambrose expects out of all those within his guild. He created the Cloud Chasers to help those in need no matter the cost as he saw that the Librarium was now abusing their power as they rose victorious after the War of the Faiths. Instead of peace and prosperity they brought out fear and suppression.

Ambrose, the fatherly and over-protective leader he is with high morals, will smite down those who stand in his way and those who choose to hurt his family.

“What you choose to do with your magic, that is what determines who you are.”

| N A M E : |
Dahalag, Ambrose

| N I C K N A M E : |
Ambby; Rose; Rosie

| T I T L E : |
Captain; Master; Pirate King; King of the Free Skies

| G E N D E R : |
Male

| R A N K : |
S Class

| A G E : |
51

| G U I L D : |
Cloud Chasers

| H I S T O R Y : |
Life didn't begin for Ambrose until after joining the founding father of all Sky Pirate Guilds, the Cloud Chasers. The guild itself was something so pure and full of brotherhood and family that Ambrose had to be a part of it. He joined the guild at the age of thirteen and hasn't left since. Everything he did before that was to work towards his one goal of becoming a sky pirate, one of the magnificent, heroic Cloud Chasers.

He was a part of the second generation of Cloud Chasers, an unruly bunch, but was taught to always stand for what was right in the face of the Librarium's path of fear. The Cloud Chasers are his home and his family and since the day they opened their loving arms to him so freely, he has done the same since as the third Captain.

Today the Captain of the Cloud Chasers can still be found taking up odd jobs, rebelling against the Librarium, protecting those in need, and creating freedom for those in Pandora as one of the Pirate Kings of the Skies.

| M A G I C & A B I L I T I E S : |
Hand-to-Hand Combat
Ambrose specializes in hand-to-hand combat or close-range fighting. His magical abilities are dispelling and defensive magics only, so he learned to use his fists as weapons as well as swords. He always carries a large broadsword by the name of Gala. Ambrose is known to have the physical strength unrivaled by almost no one.

Maximum Defense Seal - Caster Magic
A defensive Magic which involves the caster's creating multiple seals around them that are used for blocking an enemy's attack. It does however, take a while to complete the seals as the caster needs to imbue magical energy into the runes.

Dispel - Caster Magic
This magic allows its user to remove any spell from their afflicted target. More simply put, it causes an annulment of a spell.

Nullification Magic - Caster Magic
A magic used for nullifying any magical attacks and discharges it within an area away from the caster. The wizard of this magic has a radius, which varies depending on magical energy reserves, in which magic may be employed from against them. The magic itself is quite draining and only those with large and deep pools of magical energy sources can carry out the magic for long, continuous battles.

| M I S C : |
His guild mark can be found on his chest over his heart.

Sheet credited to Buddha.

[Sarcelle Renard]

@Leslie Hall, @Denny, and @Indra

Alright alright, after so much waffling I could have opened a 24 hour waffle shop, I am finally done with my CS. I'm not all that sure about its quality, as I've never gone for S class level characters before, so by all means tear me a new one if it isn't up to snuff (especially regarding my custom magic).

Any who, here he is:

Albert Faust

Librarium Registration Card

Personality

<sub>A perfectionist in just about every sense of the word, Albert firmly believes in the power of planning and sticks rigidly to strategies and fallback strategies that he devises. And although he is generally calm and collected, he has proven time and again to actually have a very short fuse when things catastrophically away from plan. But as long as things are going well, he is cordial and polite to both ally and enemy alike. Because even on the battlefield, the Saint holds himself and his men to very strict expectations of integrity and civility.

As one would expect from such a man, Albert is incredibly analytical and meticulous, almost to the point of obsession. If given the chance, he will personally calculate and measure every minute detail of a scenario before acting, although even he is aware that such an opportunity will likely never come. This goes one step further, as the Library Hunter spends far more time keeping his quarters immaculate than one ever should. Juno help you if you track so much as a grain of dirt into his sanctuary.

And while not overly religious himself, he still believes in the Librarium’s message of advancement and promise of order. But at the same time, he is not blind to the corruption and abuse of power that runs rampant in the outskirts of civilization, with such displays being one of the few things that can make him trade in his politeness for a sharp tongue and barely contained fury. And with such a strong sense of justice, even Albert wonders sometimes catches himself wondering if he truly is one the right side.</sub>

“ The most beautiful sentence ever conceived by man only contains four words: All according to plan.”

| Nａｍｅ: |

Faust, Albert

| Alias|Nickames|Titles: |

The Hero of Velen, The Phantom Blade

| G e n d er: |

Male

| R a n k: |

S

| Ａｇｅ: |

24

| Sector : |

Library Hunter, Saint

| History: |

The Faust name is not one that is held in the brightest of lights. A family of wealthy entrepreneurs, the Faust line has always had a history of gaining the most when those around them lose much. When the Decretius Librarium usurped the throne, it was the Faust family that survived the ensuing chaos and came up near the top, having been handsomely rewarded for helping the church’s bid for supremacy. And thus, for over a century the name has been associated with greed and power.

Enter Albert Faust, fourth son of the current head of the family. His time with his family was brief, as he exhibited a potential for magic at the early age of 8 years old and was taken in by the Librarium. Many suspected one that had been spoiled by such a luxurious lifestyle wouldn’t make it far in the church, but Albert would go on to show that not only did he have potential, but also a talent for magic. But that didn’t mean life within the church was easy for him, as he noticed out of the corner of his eye the looks of disdain others had for him.

By the time he was 18, Albert was offered a number of cushy positions within the church due to his family’s name, but the young mage insisted on becoming a Library Hunter for reasons that he refused to disclose. His first few years as a Library Hunter went by without much recognition for him, but his skill at magic was honed by the countless close brushes with death that came his way as he traversed the unforgiving landscape below Pandora. In fact, not many even knew of the estranged son of one of the most prominent figures of the land. That is until the day that a 21 year old Albert showed up in Velen.

Facts regarding the incident are murky, but the prevailing story that the Librarium supports is that Albert singlehandedly subjugated a rogue Sky Pirate Guild that had been extorting the small town of Velen. And for his heroic feat, the mage was given the title of Saint and was lauded as a hero of both the Librarium and the people. While Albert accepted the title graciously and wears the saber that was crafted for him at all times, his mood takes a strange shift when talk of his deed is brought up.

Since then, the Hero of Velen has been hunting down other Sky Pirate Guilds, seeking to preserve the peace that the Librarium has created. So far, he has successfully taken down a score of rogue Sky Pirate Guilds with the aid of local Cleric Knights. However, despite his deeds, the Faust name still hangs over him though, making the public’s opinion of him incredibly divisive.

| Magic: |

• Requip – The Knight: A form of Spatial Magic, Requip gives Albert access to a small arsenal of weapons that allow his fussy mind to pick the appropriate weapon and armor for whatever situation he finds himself in. And given his affluent background and status as Saint, he has access to a great deal of options.
  
  Albert is by no means a master of this magic, so he is actually somewhat slow when it comes to using it and is oftentimes unable to switch equipment once the fighting begins.
• Rift: Another type of Spatial Magic, Rift opens up opaque portals that connects two points in the world. An observant individual can tell when one of these rifts is about to be opened, as the spot it appears in will briefly surge in magical energy and a soft tearing noise will emit from that point. Once opened, these portals maintain a consistent shape and cannot be moved, either by outside forces or by Albert himself.
  
  This magic is limited by the fact that there is a maximum size the portals can be made into, for Albert it’s about 10’x 10’, not to mention that they can only take on circular to oval-like shapes. This magic also requires a great deal of concentration, so anything that can affect Albert’s senses or attention will in turn affect the speed and accuracy at which he can use Rift.

| Miscs : |

His saber, the symbol of his status as a Librarium Saint, is beautifully adorned and has Juno’s symbol embossed on the blade itself. While it is not usually his go to weapon, it is always at his side.

[Crimson Raven]

@Leslie Hall, @Denny, and @Indra

Alright alright, after so much waffling I could have opened a 24 hour waffle shop, I am finally done with my CS. I'm not all that sure about its quality, as I've never gone for S class level characters before, so by all means tear me a new one if it isn't up to snuff (especially regarding my custom magic).

Any who, here he is:

Albert Faust

Librarium Registration Card

Personality

<sub>A perfectionist in just about every sense of the word, Albert firmly believes in the power of planning and sticks rigidly to strategies and fallback strategies that he devises. And although he is generally calm and collected, he has proven time and again to actually have a very short fuse when things catastrophically away from plan. But as long as things are going well, he is cordial and polite to both ally and enemy alike. Because even on the battlefield, the Saint holds himself and his men to very strict expectations of integrity and civility.

As one would expect from such a man, Albert is incredibly analytical and meticulous, almost to the point of obsession. If given the chance, he will personally calculate and measure every minute detail of a scenario before acting, although even he is aware that such an opportunity will likely never come. This goes one step further, as the Library Hunter spends far more time keeping his quarters immaculate than one ever should. Juno help you if you track so much as a grain of dirt into his sanctuary.

And while not overly religious himself, he still believes in the Librarium’s message of advancement and promise of order. But at the same time, he is not blind to the corruption and abuse of power that runs rampant in the outskirts of civilization, with such displays being one of the few things that can make him trade in his politeness for a sharp tongue and barely contained fury. And with such a strong sense of justice, even Albert wonders sometimes catches himself wondering if he truly is one the right side.</sub>

“ The most beautiful sentence ever conceived by man only contains four words: All according to plan.”

| Nａｍｅ: |

Faust, Albert

| Alias|Nickames|Titles: |

The Hero of Velen, The Phantom Blade

| G e n d er: |

Male

| R a n k: |

S

| Ａｇｅ: |

24

| Sector : |

Library Hunter, Saint

| History: |

The Faust name is not one that is held in the brightest of lights. A family of wealthy entrepreneurs, the Faust line has always had a history of gaining the most when those around them lose much. When the Decretius Librarium usurped the throne, it was the Faust family that survived the ensuing chaos and came up near the top, having been handsomely rewarded for helping the church’s bid for supremacy. And thus, for over a century the name has been associated with greed and power.

Enter Albert Faust, fourth son of the current head of the family. His time with his family was brief, as he exhibited a potential for magic at the early age of 8 years old and was taken in by the Librarium. Many suspected one that had been spoiled by such a luxurious lifestyle wouldn’t make it far in the church, but Albert would go on to show that not only did he have potential, but also a talent for magic. But that didn’t mean life within the church was easy for him, as he noticed out of the corner of his eye the looks of disdain others had for him.

By the time he was 18, Albert was offered a number of cushy positions within the church due to his family’s name, but the young mage insisted on becoming a Library Hunter for reasons that he refused to disclose. His first few years as a Library Hunter went by without much recognition for him, but his skill at magic was honed by the countless close brushes with death that came his way as he traversed the unforgiving landscape below Pandora. In fact, not many even knew of the estranged son of one of the most prominent figures of the land. That is until the day that a 21 year old Albert showed up in Velen.

Facts regarding the incident are murky, but the prevailing story that the Librarium supports is that Albert singlehandedly subjugated a rogue Sky Pirate Guild that had been extorting the small town of Velen. And for his heroic feat, the mage was given the title of Saint and was lauded as a hero of both the Librarium and the people. While Albert accepted the title graciously and wears the saber that was crafted for him at all times, his mood takes a strange shift when talk of his deed is brought up.

Since then, the Hero of Velen has been hunting down other Sky Pirate Guilds, seeking to preserve the peace that the Librarium has created. So far, he has successfully taken down a score of rogue Sky Pirate Guilds with the aid of local Cleric Knights. However, despite his deeds, the Faust name still hangs over him though, making the public’s opinion of him incredibly divisive.

| Magic: |

• Requip – The Knight: A form of Spatial Magic, Requip gives Albert access to a small arsenal of weapons that allow his fussy mind to pick the appropriate weapon and armor for whatever situation he finds himself in. And given his affluent background and status as Saint, he has access to a great deal of options.
  
  Albert is by no means a master of this magic, so he is actually somewhat slow when it comes to using it and is oftentimes unable to switch equipment once the fighting begins.
• Rift: Another type of Spatial Magic, Rift opens up opaque portals that connects two points in the world. An observant individual can tell when one of these rifts is about to be opened, as the spot it appears in will briefly surge in magical energy and a soft tearing noise will emit from that point. Once opened, these portals maintain a consistent shape and cannot be moved, either by outside forces or by Albert himself.
  
  This magic is limited by the fact that there is a maximum size the portals can be made into, for Albert it’s about 10’x 10’, not to mention that they can only take on circular to oval-like shapes. This magic also requires a great deal of concentration, so anything that can affect Albert’s senses or attention will in turn affect the speed and accuracy at which he can use Rift.

| Miscs : |

His saber, the symbol of his status as a Librarium Saint, is beautifully adorned and has Juno’s symbol embossed on the blade itself. While it is not usually his go to weapon, it is always at his side.

@Sarcelle Renard

[Raijinslayer]

@Leslie Hall, @Denny, and @Indra

Alright alright, after so much waffling I could have opened a 24 hour waffle shop, I am finally done with my CS. I'm not all that sure about its quality, as I've never gone for S class level characters before, so by all means tear me a new one if it isn't up to snuff (especially regarding my custom magic).

Any who, here he is:

Albert Faust

Librarium Registration Card

Personality

<sub>A perfectionist in just about every sense of the word, Albert firmly believes in the power of planning and sticks rigidly to strategies and fallback strategies that he devises. And although he is generally calm and collected, he has proven time and again to actually have a very short fuse when things catastrophically away from plan. But as long as things are going well, he is cordial and polite to both ally and enemy alike. Because even on the battlefield, the Saint holds himself and his men to very strict expectations of integrity and civility.

As one would expect from such a man, Albert is incredibly analytical and meticulous, almost to the point of obsession. If given the chance, he will personally calculate and measure every minute detail of a scenario before acting, although even he is aware that such an opportunity will likely never come. This goes one step further, as the Library Hunter spends far more time keeping his quarters immaculate than one ever should. Juno help you if you track so much as a grain of dirt into his sanctuary.

And while not overly religious himself, he still believes in the Librarium’s message of advancement and promise of order. But at the same time, he is not blind to the corruption and abuse of power that runs rampant in the outskirts of civilization, with such displays being one of the few things that can make him trade in his politeness for a sharp tongue and barely contained fury. And with such a strong sense of justice, even Albert wonders sometimes catches himself wondering if he truly is one the right side.</sub>

“ The most beautiful sentence ever conceived by man only contains four words: All according to plan.”

| Nａｍｅ: |

Faust, Albert

| Alias|Nickames|Titles: |

The Hero of Velen, The Phantom Blade

| G e n d er: |

Male

| R a n k: |

S

| Ａｇｅ: |

24

| Sector : |

Library Hunter, Saint

| History: |

The Faust name is not one that is held in the brightest of lights. A family of wealthy entrepreneurs, the Faust line has always had a history of gaining the most when those around them lose much. When the Decretius Librarium usurped the throne, it was the Faust family that survived the ensuing chaos and came up near the top, having been handsomely rewarded for helping the church’s bid for supremacy. And thus, for over a century the name has been associated with greed and power.

Enter Albert Faust, fourth son of the current head of the family. His time with his family was brief, as he exhibited a potential for magic at the early age of 8 years old and was taken in by the Librarium. Many suspected one that had been spoiled by such a luxurious lifestyle wouldn’t make it far in the church, but Albert would go on to show that not only did he have potential, but also a talent for magic. But that didn’t mean life within the church was easy for him, as he noticed out of the corner of his eye the looks of disdain others had for him.

By the time he was 18, Albert was offered a number of cushy positions within the church due to his family’s name, but the young mage insisted on becoming a Library Hunter for reasons that he refused to disclose. His first few years as a Library Hunter went by without much recognition for him, but his skill at magic was honed by the countless close brushes with death that came his way as he traversed the unforgiving landscape below Pandora. In fact, not many even knew of the estranged son of one of the most prominent figures of the land. That is until the day that a 21 year old Albert showed up in Velen.

Facts regarding the incident are murky, but the prevailing story that the Librarium supports is that Albert singlehandedly subjugated a rogue Sky Pirate Guild that had been extorting the small town of Velen. And for his heroic feat, the mage was given the title of Saint and was lauded as a hero of both the Librarium and the people. While Albert accepted the title graciously and wears the saber that was crafted for him at all times, his mood takes a strange shift when talk of his deed is brought up.

Since then, the Hero of Velen has been hunting down other Sky Pirate Guilds, seeking to preserve the peace that the Librarium has created. So far, he has successfully taken down a score of rogue Sky Pirate Guilds with the aid of local Cleric Knights. However, despite his deeds, the Faust name still hangs over him though, making the public’s opinion of him incredibly divisive.

| Magic: |

• Requip – The Knight: A form of Spatial Magic, Requip gives Albert access to a small arsenal of weapons that allow his fussy mind to pick the appropriate weapon and armor for whatever situation he finds himself in. And given his affluent background and status as Saint, he has access to a great deal of options.
  
  Albert is by no means a master of this magic, so he is actually somewhat slow when it comes to using it and is oftentimes unable to switch equipment once the fighting begins.
• Rift: Another type of Spatial Magic, Rift opens up opaque portals that connects two points in the world. An observant individual can tell when one of these rifts is about to be opened, as the spot it appears in will briefly surge in magical energy and a soft tearing noise will emit from that point. Once opened, these portals maintain a consistent shape and cannot be moved, either by outside forces or by Albert himself.
  
  This magic is limited by the fact that there is a maximum size the portals can be made into, for Albert it’s about 10’x 10’, not to mention that they can only take on circular to oval-like shapes. This magic also requires a great deal of concentration, so anything that can affect Albert’s senses or attention will in turn affect the speed and accuracy at which he can use Rift.

| Miscs : |

His saber, the symbol of his status as a Librarium Saint, is beautifully adorned and has Juno’s symbol embossed on the blade itself. While it is not usually his go to weapon, it is always at his side.

@Sarcelle Renard

[Crimson Raven]

@Leslie Hall, @Denny, and @Indra

Alright alright, after so much waffling I could have opened a 24 hour waffle shop, I am finally done with my CS. I'm not all that sure about its quality, as I've never gone for S class level characters before, so by all means tear me a new one if it isn't up to snuff (especially regarding my custom magic).

Any who, here he is:

Albert Faust

Librarium Registration Card

Personality

<sub>A perfectionist in just about every sense of the word, Albert firmly believes in the power of planning and sticks rigidly to strategies and fallback strategies that he devises. And although he is generally calm and collected, he has proven time and again to actually have a very short fuse when things catastrophically away from plan. But as long as things are going well, he is cordial and polite to both ally and enemy alike. Because even on the battlefield, the Saint holds himself and his men to very strict expectations of integrity and civility.

As one would expect from such a man, Albert is incredibly analytical and meticulous, almost to the point of obsession. If given the chance, he will personally calculate and measure every minute detail of a scenario before acting, although even he is aware that such an opportunity will likely never come. This goes one step further, as the Library Hunter spends far more time keeping his quarters immaculate than one ever should. Juno help you if you track so much as a grain of dirt into his sanctuary.

And while not overly religious himself, he still believes in the Librarium’s message of advancement and promise of order. But at the same time, he is not blind to the corruption and abuse of power that runs rampant in the outskirts of civilization, with such displays being one of the few things that can make him trade in his politeness for a sharp tongue and barely contained fury. And with such a strong sense of justice, even Albert wonders sometimes catches himself wondering if he truly is one the right side.</sub>

“ The most beautiful sentence ever conceived by man only contains four words: All according to plan.”

| Nａｍｅ: |

Faust, Albert

| Alias|Nickames|Titles: |

The Hero of Velen, The Phantom Blade

| G e n d er: |

Male

| R a n k: |

S

| Ａｇｅ: |

24

| Sector : |

Library Hunter, Saint

| History: |

The Faust name is not one that is held in the brightest of lights. A family of wealthy entrepreneurs, the Faust line has always had a history of gaining the most when those around them lose much. When the Decretius Librarium usurped the throne, it was the Faust family that survived the ensuing chaos and came up near the top, having been handsomely rewarded for helping the church’s bid for supremacy. And thus, for over a century the name has been associated with greed and power.

Enter Albert Faust, fourth son of the current head of the family. His time with his family was brief, as he exhibited a potential for magic at the early age of 8 years old and was taken in by the Librarium. Many suspected one that had been spoiled by such a luxurious lifestyle wouldn’t make it far in the church, but Albert would go on to show that not only did he have potential, but also a talent for magic. But that didn’t mean life within the church was easy for him, as he noticed out of the corner of his eye the looks of disdain others had for him.

By the time he was 18, Albert was offered a number of cushy positions within the church due to his family’s name, but the young mage insisted on becoming a Library Hunter for reasons that he refused to disclose. His first few years as a Library Hunter went by without much recognition for him, but his skill at magic was honed by the countless close brushes with death that came his way as he traversed the unforgiving landscape below Pandora. In fact, not many even knew of the estranged son of one of the most prominent figures of the land. That is until the day that a 21 year old Albert showed up in Velen.

Facts regarding the incident are murky, but the prevailing story that the Librarium supports is that Albert singlehandedly subjugated a rogue Sky Pirate Guild that had been extorting the small town of Velen. And for his heroic feat, the mage was given the title of Saint and was lauded as a hero of both the Librarium and the people. While Albert accepted the title graciously and wears the saber that was crafted for him at all times, his mood takes a strange shift when talk of his deed is brought up.

Since then, the Hero of Velen has been hunting down other Sky Pirate Guilds, seeking to preserve the peace that the Librarium has created. So far, he has successfully taken down a score of rogue Sky Pirate Guilds with the aid of local Cleric Knights. However, despite his deeds, the Faust name still hangs over him though, making the public’s opinion of him incredibly divisive.

| Magic: |

• Requip – The Knight: A form of Spatial Magic, Requip gives Albert access to a small arsenal of weapons that allow his fussy mind to pick the appropriate weapon and armor for whatever situation he finds himself in. And given his affluent background and status as Saint, he has access to a great deal of options.
  
  Albert is by no means a master of this magic, so he is actually somewhat slow when it comes to using it and is oftentimes unable to switch equipment once the fighting begins.
• Rift: Another type of Spatial Magic, Rift opens up opaque portals that connects two points in the world. An observant individual can tell when one of these rifts is about to be opened, as the spot it appears in will briefly surge in magical energy and a soft tearing noise will emit from that point. Once opened, these portals maintain a consistent shape and cannot be moved, either by outside forces or by Albert himself.
  
  This magic is limited by the fact that there is a maximum size the portals can be made into, for Albert it’s about 10’x 10’, not to mention that they can only take on circular to oval-like shapes. This magic also requires a great deal of concentration, so anything that can affect Albert’s senses or attention will in turn affect the speed and accuracy at which he can use Rift.

| Miscs : |

His saber, the symbol of his status as a Librarium Saint, is beautifully adorned and has Juno’s symbol embossed on the blade itself. While it is not usually his go to weapon, it is always at his side.

@Sarcelle Renard

Alright alright, probably know by now that I like critiquing characters. Its just me.

Not much to say here, except for one very large problem, which I will get to.

Your history is good, your personality is good.

The problem lies in magic. I tried to make a portal user once, and the GM explained to me very politly that Portal, along with Time is one of those abilities that are just too powerful to give to the players even with severe limitations. They basically have the ability to bend space, and with that comes a host of unintended Reqired Secondary Powers. Like closing the portal on something, or passing through the border with it. The rift would act like the sharpest sword in existance, literally severing whatever at the molecular level. Or, my favorite, opening a portal beneath and above someone, essentially trapping them in an endless free fall, in which you only would have to close the portal after they hit terminal velocity and they go splat. Thats only two examples, with thought, you could come up with many more.

Requip-Knight is an iffy one. Swapping out armors is okay, one, if you detail every armor and weapon he has (So no "Ah ha! I have the perfect armor for this situation" three or four times), two, if you limit the armor and weapons (say to three armors, and five weapons' the armors are the important ones really).

Again, just my two cents, final judgment is, as always up to the the GM and Co.

[Sarcelle Renard]

@Crimson Raven On the contrary, that was the exact kind of criticism I was looking for. You brought up a lot of points that I didn't even begin to consider and made me realize that even for an S class mage the power is probably too good. I will also make sure to go in and specify exactly what kind of equipment he has, but believe me when I say that I was not going to pull any cheeky meta game nonsense, especially since I specified that he can't Requip mid-fight. I'll wait until I hear from a GM first, but I'll likely change the portals to something a bit more tame like Teleportation.

Thanks for taking the time to read through it.

[Crimson Raven]

@Crimson Raven On the contrary, that was the exact kind of criticism I was looking for. You brought up a lot of points that I didn't even begin to consider and made me realize that even for an S class mage the power is probably too good. I will also make sure to go in and specify exactly what kind of equipment he has, but believe me when I say that I was not going to pull any cheeky meta game nonsense, especially since I specified that he can't Requip mid-fight. I'll wait until I hear from a GM first, but I'll likely change the portals to something a bit more tame like Teleportation.

Thanks for taking the time to read through it.

@Sarcelle Renard

Teleportation is only a bit more tame. 😅

My advice is to just make sure you specify things like cooldown, distance, Magic consumption, ect.

[Sarcelle Renard]

@Crimson Raven Of course. I have no intention of making an auto-dodging, invincible god of a character, as nothing kills an RP faster than a Gary Stu.

[Cello]

I should just hire @Crimson Raven to review CS' for me.

@Sarcelle Renard No point in me offering my critique because it's the same and you're dealing with it.

I love not having to do extra work.

[Floch]

@Leslie Hall I suggest you put [ code ] [/ code ] on the CSs. It's so hard for me to copy paste and put codes over and over again lol

I hate to be mean @Sarcelle Renard but because I dislike Erza, I didn't bother reading your CS. After reading the last chapter of FT, Nakama Queen just made me realize how much I hate her. Nevertheless, I will review your CS. It's just that, it's cancer when I saw a glimpse of it because it's Erza's magic and no offense to Erza fans, she's such a Mary Sue character. I used to like her tbh but ever since Tenrou arc, I hated her.

[Gowi]

How is it hard?

[Sarcelle Renard]

@Indra No worries, I totally understand how you feel. I'm also doing a complete rework on the magic section, so you may as well hold off on your review anyway.

[Gowi]

Also, if you think Erza is a Mary Sue you probably do not understand what a Mary Sue is. FYI.

[Floch]

@Gowi I know but I'm gonna be biased anyway. I cannot comprehend her wins at all, she's like the Sasuke of Fairy Tail but with My Little Pony drugs though Sasuke is better. Gray wins with strategies. Natsu is not as bad as Erza. Lucy got tactics like Gray. Wendy too.

Alvarez arc is shit.

[Gowi]

Being biased doesn’t absolve you of being wrong, though. Despite Erza being a powerful character (S Class, remember?) she has a lot of flaws and dimensions, so describing her as a Mary Sue is pretty incorrect as far as assessments go. Nobody has to like her character, but you should at least get your tropes correct when criticizing her.