@Mega Birb For salissa? More or less. She's not really too hot on the idea of having a serious lover and besides most won't really like the look of those cybernetics and scars... unless they are krogan I gues... krogan like scars.
@rivaan The sheet looks fine to me, the only thing I would say is that unless she had skin grafts, I don't think her skin would have grown back over the cybernetics. And that I think the Alliance would have sprung for basic cybernetics, I would hope the Alliance VA would be better than modern VAs.
@MrDidact As it's actually writen the skin hasn't grown over the cybernetics, but beside them to their edges where the skin could extends to. Also the alliance didn't get her those cybernetics she got them on her own aka paid them for by herself. She was discharged already by that point.
EDIT: it's writen the skin grew back around them. But I can word it differently to be more clear. ^^
@rivaan Looks pretty promising to me. It might be a throwaway line, but I love the idea of a human soldier respecting the Justiciars, and perhaps trying to emulate them. The only thing is that ...
Might be a coding typon, or you might have meant something else, but you entered the Revenant rifle twice.
@BlackSam3091 It's not a coding line xD She carries two of those xD Wielding two at once would be pretty OP, but having the second one for the moment the first runs out of ammo would be huge! Double the ammo! DOUBLE THE FUNNNNNNNNNNNN! EXPLOSIONSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! DESTRUCTION!!!!!!!!!!!
@BlackSam3091 No I'm not joking lol. Cause she has a second hand that's usually kind of tied wiht a big omni shield that kind of would hinder doign finer movement like reloading the first one. I can remove it if it's that much of a problem.
@rivaan That's my point, the Alliance wouldn't just discharge a multiple amputee and wish them good luck, ME 3 shows that they would have at least given her basic cybernetics or clone replacement parts.
Omni-Shields are retractable though. And Revenants have ungodly recoil. Having her dual wield them would be a tad too ridiculous.
@MrDidact That's my point. For the rifle, she will wield one at a time and she wants her shield almost constantly. Anyhow I guess I will simply remove the second one.~* goes to do it*
As for the limbs, we can assume she was given basic cybernatics, the bio still works with her simply getting the military combat ones herself later no? ^^ Basically the basic ones aren't of importance for her.
I'm liking that everyone in the RP, all the character's I mean, are all main character's in their own right. There aren't any side character's in the gang currently so that's really neat.
@MrDidact True, anyhow... so now that the rifle thing is fixed, I should go and post it in the CS now right?
Just add that bit that Didact mentioned about the Alliance given her basic prosthesis, rather than just turning her off into the wild, and her replacing it with heavy military upgrades, and you're good to go.
@Deos Morran1 looks very regal for some reason. 2 is kind of ehh dunno but I think it's very young looking lol. Dunno how an young turian looks, but I think that's how the second one feels. the third looks most like agent/soldier/merc. As such I go with 3