[OOC] Y Crisis (Pat 1: Decline)

[ImportantNobody]

WittyReference said
No doubt, but how do you get the establishing shot, character introductions, dialogues and monologues, opening actions, conflicts and closing actions all into one paragraph?

By skipping out on detail. :D
Like I said, we should probably improve on that a tad.

[Etcetera]

WittyReference said
No doubt, but how do you get the establishing shot, character introductions, dialogues and monologues, opening actions, conflicts and closing actions all into one paragraph?

Well personally, I've had lots and lots of practice putting all of that into four lines, and still leave plenty to be understandable.

[ImportantNobody]

It will work for stuff like our chatting, but it would be silly if we slipped in the last battle into a single paragraph. "We walked up and shot her a bunch of times and she died. Then we high fived and left."

[Etcetera]

ImportantNobody said
It will work for stuff like our chatting, but it would be silly if we slipped in the last battle into a single paragraph. "We walked up and shot her a bunch of times and she died. Then we high fived and left."

If you do that, I'm going to laugh.

[CallingField]

Sorry I haven't been posting. Been having some writer's block. I am still alive though.

[WittyReference]

And here I figured Lily took one look at the condition of the playing cards and nope'd off the ship. You can a lot about a person by their cards; ask Patrick Bateman.

[ImportantNobody]

My cards always appear mint condition.

[ImportantNobody]

I'm working on my post now.
If someone wants they can take on the role of the Arabian super soldier or I can do it as originally planned. I don't care either way, but if someone does want to then feel free. We could even have a small squad working together?
On a serious note about post lengths, as casual and this roleplay rules state, we should really pick up on the post lengths and details starting once we move out on the mission. Not to badger people or anything.

[WittyReference]

Should I whip up a quick post of Curtis standing deck of the Alexis eagerly awaiting the chopper or is it Turtle Time?

[ImportantNobody]

It's turtle time! If you look at the most recent post it seems to be a good time.

[WittyReference]

Yep, just making sure!

[ImportantNobody]

He was closer to the battlefield so it will make sense that he gets there sooner.

[Etcetera]

What girl is Leigh talking to?

[CallingField]

Sienna

[ImportantNobody]

I'll have time to post tomorrow.

[ImportantNobody]

Our group can meet up with Curtis for his assignment after the situation with Maria and Tommy is taken care of.

[WittyReference]

I'll try my best to get a post up but this weekend is pretty busy; Nobo, if I'm slowing anything down feel free to puppet Curtis-you know what's goin' down :p

[Protagonist]

So how is everyone?

[ImportantNobody]

Good. I'm kind of waiting on Witty.

[Etcetera]

Man, this has been quiet.