[OOC] The 1st Magic Insurrection [NEW/ACCEPTING]

[David Gorgon]

do you know when the gm might be able to come back?
If the gm is here I would like to ask if you will accept me into this campaign.

[Hedgehawk]

@David Gorgon Welcome to the Site. I just saw your welcome post. Looking at your current character sheet i would have to say decline the join request i am afraid.

The Bio section is too short sadly. I was hoping for a paragraph or two at the start. I know my own character isn't a shining example however that is a work in progress. If you would like to edit your character sheet and re-apply i am ok with that. But if you are struggling i would suggest trying a free roleplay first before jumping into the advanced section.

@codex That is fine. I am thought i had put it in my description of the RP the Guild is headed by a female, but i wrote it at 2am, so who the hell knows haha.

[David Gorgon]

I can work on it , please give me another chance !
I can add more I just thought you wanted a small summary

[Hedgehawk]

@David Gorgon Feel free to give it another shot. Most GMs expect character sheets to be well thought out and deeply written. The Character sheet also acts as evidence to the GM that you are competent and have sufficient writing skill.

@codex To that end i am adding a Personality section to the character sheet.

[codex]

@jakeb1993 I updated my character sheet, let me know if there is anything I need to change or if there is additional information you want.

[The Angry Goat]

Interestingly i had almost the exact same idea as the mist guy, though I decided to scrap it for now. Good thing, too, as it turns out :P

[codex]

@The Angry GoatPerhaps instead of mist you can have a cloud of angry goats? No? Okay then.....

[Solaris]

I like this and will begin working on my CS, but I have a question for @codex and @jakeb1993

[codex]

I like this and will begin working on my CS, but I have a question for @codex and @jakeb1993

@Solaris

I'm happy to help in any way I can but as of yet have not heard on status of co-gming and do not want to step on @jakeb1993's toes.

[Hedgehawk]

@solaris Go ahead, Shoot. I believe I am in a different timezone to all of you, so that is why I don't reply right away most of the time.

@codex Rose is looking really good! Two things though:

1. Aloysius created the Dark Shadow when he was in his late teens, bout 19/20 roughly. Being 24 now it makes the Dark Shadow 4/5 years old. If the Dark Shadow killed Roses parents at aged 12 it meant Aloysius would have had to have created the Dark Shadow at age 9. And while he was a spoilt evil brat, he wasn't that evil at that age!

2. The guild has been run as a dynasty pretty much for all of its existence. So her parents would have likely have been it's leaders before her. Rose to that point wouldn't have had to risen up the ranks as it would have been given to her upon her parents death.

3. As leader of the Guild you can have more than just elemental powers with a single affinty. The guild leader is supposed to pretty much be the strongest Magic User in the world due to many generations of breeding and inheritance. So splash out a little bit more and beef her up magic wise. She is supposed to the one that everyone listens to mainly out of fear of being destroyed. It just so happens that The Guild isn't evil.

Right that's it. Also it happens that was more than a couple of points.

In terms of Co-GM though @codex you are more than welcome to have the slot if you want it.

[codex]

@solaris Go ahead, Shoot. I believe I am in a different timezone to all of you, so that is why I don't reply right away most of the time.

@codex Rose is looking really good! Two things though:

1. Aloysius created the Dark Shadow when he was in his late teens, bout 19/20 roughly. Being 24 now it makes the Dark Shadow 4/5 years old. If the Dark Shadow killed Roses parents at aged 12 it meant Aloysius would have had to have created the Dark Shadow at age 9. And while he was a spoilt evil brat, he wasn't that evil at that age!

2. The guild has been run as a dynasty pretty much for all of its existence. So her parents would have likely have been it's leaders before her. Rose to that point wouldn't have had to risen up the ranks as it would have been given to her upon her parents death.

3. As leader of the Guild you can have more than just elemental powers with a single affinty. The guild leader is supposed to pretty much be the strongest Magic User in the world due to many generations of breeding and inheritance. So splash out a little bit more and beef her up magic wise. She is supposed to the one that everyone listens to mainly out of fear of being destroyed. It just so happens that The Guild isn't evil.

Right that's it. Also it happens that was more than a couple of points.

In terms of Co-GM though @codex you are more than welcome to have the slot if you want it.

@jakeb1993

1) Lol, the intent was for people with similar ideologies as the Corpus or Dark Shadow to have murdered her parents. If that works, I can change the wording in the character sheet accordingly.

2) I can change that as well.

3) I didn't want to overdo it, especially not at first but can definitely beef her up.

And I'm happy to Co-GM as it seems I might be in a similar timezone to other users (EST)

[David Gorgon]

Am I good now @codex and @jakeb1933? or is there more I can do?

[Hedgehawk]

Thank you for re-applying @David Gorgon. As of right now I am still not convinced personally that the CS is upto a standard I would deem appropriate for this level of RP.

Unless @codex is happy to over rule given that David would be on your team.

[David Gorgon]

Sorry i still haven't meet your standards, after all this is my first character to use on a forum, not to mention that this is the first forum I have ever went on, I will do my best to fix it to meet your standards because I really want to join your campaign, and I want you to be my first gm.

[codex]

@David Gorgon Who is the PB (played by and also commonly referred to as a face claim) for your character?

[spicykvnt]

Would you be willing to accept non-magic using characters?

[codex]

@Stormflyx I don't know how well that would work with the plot but I'll leave it up to @jakeb1993. Do you have an idea of how your character would fit into this plot of magic users? It might be easier to make a decision if we know how you plan on using your character.

[spicykvnt]

I was thinking of a scientist/someone incredibly gifted in science or ~something~ trying to work alongside magic users and The Guild - her vision is to help bring back peace and trust between non magic and magic folk. Sorry if this is vague - it's late and I'm not at my computer or else I'd create a character sheet to try and explain/expand.

[Hedgehawk]

@Stormflyx Not a concept i have thought of admittedly. However with the right character sheet i would be willing to accept, show us what you can do. And welcome to the forum.

[ArenaSnow]

I shall watch for the moment.