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@Eviledd1984You're in the stray sheep with everyone as Shade Walker is asking people if they want to kill Karma. There's no one coming for you because you're suppose to be there.

Also please try to be more grammatically correct in your posting. I'm not one of the people who consider themselves a nazi but I do feel the need to have proper grammar if possible in an online post by post roleplay setting examples

If you would let me point out specific examples: sergeant is the proper spelling and it's they're (They are) not their (belonging to someone). I would also like to see better posts in the future this isn't a low casual roleplay but I am willing to let smaller post slide as you have been introduced hap-hazardously into the setting after the first scenario.
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@vancexentan

My apologizes for the spelling error and the lackluster post length, I was confused on here i can start. And i asked for where would be a good place to start, If you like you can help me or guide me to making the first good introduction post.
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I shouldn't need to @Eviledd1984 Its pretty straight forward here. You're in the stray sheep the hub for the villains in that section of the city. You were brought in shortly after the fight in order to join the group. Be it you were deemed unfit for the prison heist, or you simply weren't included in the roster for it or what have you that is up to you to decide. The group just walked back in through a quirk-caused-tear in space time, ala Bioshock infinite, and now Shade Walker is about to let the villains decide who wants to kill this teenager who was a former player character who dropped out before the heist. You've got at least three different things to post about.
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@vancexentan

Okay thank you for clarify, Well let me know if i need to change anything on my new post.
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@Eviledd1984 I'm not sure if I'm missing something somewhere but it looks like you didn't save your edit it says reacted still.
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@vancexentan

Sorry about that, I,will get that up hopefully by tomorrow morning or evening.
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Well just posted, I can change anything that needs to be edited and what not.
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nothing wrong with it at the moment that I can see. The others just need to do as they will.
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@Zelosse need you to post.
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Posting tonight. Sorry for the delays!
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So the first kill is claimed by the universe. As it should be.
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I'll try posting tomorrow i'm pretty tired had to sleep over my grand parents while my old man, and some family friends worked on my bathroom at my house. I'm not used to sleeping over here so I didn't get to sleep till pretty late, and then I woke up multiple times. Plus Global Dokkan Battle, and F/Go are having their anniversaries.
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Don't think any of us are in a rush. Take your time.
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Greetings!

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I'll accept the character I don't feel well so I may not be able to post for a day, or two more but you can post reacting to Zelosse's action.
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I may be new to this group! But I’ll gladly say this. Take your time, rest and get well! No rush here! As for me, I’m going to chime into the ic whenever it seems best. Or when timing feels right!

Currently, I will not be able to post until tomorrow morning. Or until tomorrow evening!!
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Excuse the 'double post' in this OOC. Yet, I wish to notify the group that Lord Zion's entrance has been posted.

IF any errors, or inconsistency, exists within my posts. Please feel free to let me know so I can edit for the benefit of this roleplay! Though I think i've gotten everything good and proper! (Hasn't stopped me from being wrong before, however. heh)
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The spacing, friend.

Put a line of blank when you start as a new character talking. Looks nicer. Please and thank you.
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I'll gladly post a response in the morning, as i'm lacking the time to do so tonight! Needless to say, but i will anyways! I'm super hyped for this roleplay and all the interactions and action to come!
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Wowzers. I may have gotten slightly carried away with that second post i just made. Honestly it feels absolutely wonderful to get back into roleplaying!

By all means, if i should 'tone it down' on posting size. Or per say, amount of actions my character takes in one post. Please let me know and i'll bring the dial down a notch. I just seem to really be getting into this character. haha!
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