[OOC] Hey There, Kid! - Digimon Adventure 01-Themed Roleplay

[mickilennial]

I don't respect GMs who don't know the source material!!!11

[AlteredTundra]

@Inkarnate I <3 u2 bby

[tobiax]

@Hero Gotcha. Edited the color thing.

[Hero]

I don't respect GMs who don't know the source material!!!11

@Inkarnate

I know it. I just got confused 'cause it's only been fifteen years since I've seen it. _{My God, I'm old...}

[AlteredTundra]

Annnnnnd Conrad and his digimon partner have been added to my placeholder~

[tobiax]

@Altered Tundra Livin' Like Larry! This is going to be interesting.

[Bornlucky]

I'm here and alive just had a busy couple of days but I'll try and get a WIP up in a bit~

[AlteredTundra]

@tobiax Well, Larry the Liollmon is just as dumb as Larry the Lobster. =3

@Bornlucky Looking forward to it!

[SleepingSilence]

@Altered Tundra *Of course that voice was chosen, Johnny Yong Bosch is literally in everything. ;P*
So at least two dumb digimon thus far. Our heroes, everybody.

[AlteredTundra]

@SleepingSilence Johnny is my homie amdwmw fave. Plus he just fits voice wise for conrad, especially his younger Male voices like renten from eureka seven and the like. And having the vegeta voice for dumb Larry is so funny to me like you wouldn't believe.

[AlteredTundra]

For the first round of reviews, please fix all the suggestions both Hero and I have agreed upon. When we both have seen it, then they will be accepted. <3

@tobiax

From what I can see, though minimal in the details, Diego's sheet is fairly all accounted for, but there are a few things both Hero and myself would like to be fixed/adjusted.

The first of these things would be the formatting. This is for my own OCD rather than it being an official thing, but if you would please use the provided formatting(colored sections such as name and age) with the gray color tags remained. In addition to that, you are also missing the textual header. I would ask that you add that as well. We would also like for you to seperate the digimon partner in a seperate hider as well as give us the picture of your rookie form. You may use my sheet for Conrad as a guide.

When you fix those, we will be square.

@SleepingSilence

Everything you have for your character is great , but the one thing I'd like to ask is for the personality second to be cut/revised past the second paragraph. I feel like it traverses into other territories that other characters might want to explore. Plus, it seems to give Izzy just a bit too much going for her. Minimizing it to what you have in the first two paragraphs is honestly perfect for the impression I got from her history.

As for the Digimon, it's all good on my end. I would just ask you do what I and Inkarnate have done and seperate the human partner sheet into a different hider tag. Again, you may use my sheets for Conrad and Larry as a guide.

[tobiax]

From what I can see, though minimal in the details, Diego's sheet is fairly all accounted for, but there are a few things both Hero and myself would like to be fixed/adjusted.

The first of these things would be the formatting. This is for my own OCD rather than it being an official thing, but if you would please use the provided formatting(colored sections such as name and age) with the gray color tags remained. In addition to that, you are also missing the textual header. I would ask that you add that as well. We would also like for you to seperate the digimon partner in a seperate hider as well as give us the picture of your rookie form. You may use my sheet for Conrad as a guide.

When you fix those, we will be square.

@Altered Tundra

I can be a bit minimalist, yeah. That or I sort of overdo it. I tend to like to let my IC work do the talking and leave room for character development stuff if I don't have any seeds in mind already.

Oh, I didn't notice that about the colors. I thought the entire thing was formatted grey in the example. Okay- I can understand how it all being one color may or may not make it harder to read like that. Okay, nested hider is go. I guess I never looked at the full length of everything to see that it was a bit unwieldly. Oh, when I read the "please link Digimon images instead of embedding them", I thought that applied for, like, everything. (Or that having Diego an Dodomon in one image would suffice)

So now I did all the stuff. Hopefully it's all in order.

[SleepingSilence]

@Altered Tundra Will do that for my digimon sheet. And that's certainly an odd request to have my character have less personality...

My character's personality was structured based on positive to neutral to negative, (broadly speaking) in terms of character traits. If I cut the latter half, the character will have no real flaws. :P

Her past, her hang ups and the adoption make her a complicated character. If other characters wanted to explore it, surely other characters would still do it and learn from it in their own ways? I intended to smooth her out with a little bit of time, so she wouldn't always be quite as quirky. But allow me to take a look and I'll try my best to edit/iron out the personality section.

(Have friends over, so may not get to it straight away. Will @ again when I've completed and wish you to look it over.)

[Hero]

@Altered Tundra Will do that for my digimon sheet. And that's certainly an odd request to have my character have less personality...

My character's personality was structured based on positive to neutral to negative, (broadly speaking) in terms of character traits. If I cut the latter half, the character will have no real flaws. :P

Her past, her hang ups and the adoption make her a complicated character. If other characters wanted to explore it, surely other characters would still do it and learn from it in their own ways? I intended to smooth her out with a little bit of time, so she wouldn't always be quite as quirky. But allow me to take a look and I'll try my best to edit/iron out the personality section.

(Have friends over, so may not get to it straight away. Will @ again when I've completed and wish you to look it over.)

@SleepingSilence

Less is more.

[tobiax]

Less is more.

@Hero

That is a sentiment I can appreciate.

[AlteredTundra]

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I can be a bit minimalist, yeah. That or I sort of overdo it. I tend to like to let my IC work do the talking and leave room for character development stuff if I don't have any seeds in mind already.

Oh, I didn't notice that about the colors. I thought the entire thing was formatted grey in the example. Okay- I can understand how it all being one color may or may not make it harder to read like that. Okay, nested hider is go. I guess I never looked at the full length of everything to see that it was a bit unwieldly. Oh, when I read the "please link Digimon images instead of embedding them", I thought that applied for, like, everything. (Or that having Diego an Dodomon in one image would suffice)

So now I did all the stuff. Hopefully it's all in order.

@tobiax

Oh that's totally fine if you like to let your IC talking take hold of the main conversation for ya. I just wasn't sure what your reasons were. In hindsight, I shoulda just asked. but yeah, on my end it looks good. Gonna wait for Hero to speak before accepting.

And that's my bad, honestly. I should've been a bit more specific regarding the color formatting. And as for the digimon, image linking the rookie form seems to fit the best because, well, they're likely to be in that form the most when they're not in champ/ult/mega forms.

@Altered Tundra Will do that for my digimon sheet. And that's certainly an odd request to have my character have less personality...

My character's personality was structured based on positive to neutral to negative, (broadly speaking) in terms of character traits. If I cut the latter half, the character will have no real flaws. :P

Her past, her hang ups and the adoption make her a complicated character. If other characters wanted to explore it, surely other characters would still do it and learn from it in their own ways? I intended to smooth her out with a little bit of time, so she wouldn't always be quite as quirky. But allow me to take a look and I'll try my best to edit/iron out the personality section.

(Have friends over, so may not get to it straight away. Will @ again when I've completed and wish you to look it over.)

@SleepingSilence

When I had a look over Izzy's personality, at least to me, I've found the first two paragraphs told us about her negative traits in just enough detail to satisfy. She's smart, there's no denying that, but there's also a certain stubborn arrogance about her, too. A will that won't quit that, in your own words, can lead to reckless behavior. I think this is the definition of knowledge for her. She doesn't lack intellectual knowledge, but on a personal level and knowing when and how to act is another side of knowledge's two-sided coin that, with the help of friends and life experience, she'll learn her limits and that it takes the knowledge of live to know what your limits are.

Does that sound like a fair analysis of Izzy?

[tobiax]

@Altered Tundra Well, let's not put it past Aztec to Alpha Strike himself down to In-Training every once in a while. But yeah, gotcha, communication error, fixed now.

[AlteredTundra]

@tobiax Oh I don't doubt it. Given how much strength these digimon will be using late-game, their rookie forms might not be an option.

[tobiax]

@Altered Tundra If I remember correctly, Mega knocked them down to In-Training even when they were fighting the Dark Masters. (Hence the scene where Koromon says "I sliced you like an onion".) It seems anything above Champion shows significant backlash in Adventure.

[AlteredTundra]

@tobiax Or if we remember the powerful for plot angemon, he reduced himself to a fucking DigiEgg.

And yeah, Ult and Mega was usually the one that spent up the "straight back to rookie" schtick.