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No, it's fine, I'm already typing my response to it. If you want to edit it go ahead, but I'm fine either way at this point.

And biology is biology, something that large has an organ system that large. It may have backups, but its still the same general idea.
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Well, if he's going to edit it - you'd have to wait. If he does, and you post, then either post could be in contention. He's willing to make the edit

I'm just trying to make everything square.
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Then I'll wait.
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See, I'm good at this GMing shit.

Koka, Khan, Melon, shut your whore mouths.
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LeeRoy said
No, it's fine, I'm already typing my response to it. If you want to edit it go ahead, but I'm fine either way at this point.And biology is biology, something that large has an organ system that large. It may have backups, but its still the same general idea.


Biologically both your characters are impossibilities, so using that as backing for any argument is kind of pointless.
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Rilla said
See, I'm good at this GMing shit.Koka, Khan, Melon, shut your whore mouths.


I'll whore where I want.

And I'll edit it, time is late here and I'll probably have to reword everything to make it clean. So it might be up today or tomorrow. I'll point it out when it's done.
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Rilla said
See, I'm good at this GMing shit.Koka, Khan, Melon, shut your whore mouths.


No Rilla, fight me, metaphorically.
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i wl fite u bruv
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This song needs to play when the monster guy gets defeated:

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Second Character is damn near done. Just gotta work on her history and personality. Took a LOT of thought on my part to get the abilities and shit the way I wanted. She's basically going to be a potent sorceress and healer, with a fair amount of defensive abilities. Her only PHYSICAL offense will be that of archery (with an Orichalcum power-bow).

And the Personality/backstory is next... and man do I have a lot of writing to do for it. In fact, I might just cut it short.
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I'm trying to find inspiration for my commander character but I'm at a writer's block.
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What kind of commander did you have in mind ImportantNobody?
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Some type of anti hero...in a cool trench coat? That's all I got.
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"This city is afraid of me. I have seen its true face. The streets are extended gutters and the gutters are full of blood and when the drains finally scab over, all the vermin will drown. The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waists and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save us!"... and I'll whisper "no."

Bahaha. Commander of what, exactly?

Edit: As for inspiration, look up any of the Metal Gear villains. They tend to wear trench coats, and the majority of them are commanders.
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Commander of what, exactly?


The defunct Evvie clones.
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Oh! A clone commander eh? I'll have you know I've spent many an hour conceptualizing just that.

Did you know that clones are superior to humans? No? Well, they are. Bred for specific purposes, unquestioned loyalty, highly efficient at whatever they're meant to do. Now, imagine what their commander would be like. A perfect being, created to lead armies, to be the very best of the best. God complex? I think so.
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The thing is he gets the clones that are not up to the fighting standard set for the normal forces. Less then half a percent have some error in their DNA that weakens them down to around human levels rather then half human half dragon. That still comes out to be a large amount given how many clones there are, so he requested command over them to form his own personal army. He could still have a God complex, but he doesn't seek out perfect minions as is clearly evident by this.
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Heh. I'd like to see the day when one of the other clone commanders come along and open fire on em. "Your defective minds gives the rest of us a bad name. Accept your death in the name of clone superiority!"

Edit: A god complex for that commander of yours probably won't make much sense. He sounds like a nice guy, giving the underdogs a chance.
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Reminds of a certain someone...

Oh yeah.

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Asuras. I responded to you a couple pages back. Not sure if you saw it.

HERE is the link.
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