[OOC] Creeping Shadows: Warrior Cats

[Shadow Dragon]

Tired.

[Shadow Dragon]

I'm not sure what to post.

[StarfrostedFox]

Sorry that you’ve been so tired! That’s never any fun. Especially when things need to get done.

Well, we’re waiting on Evan, with the posting order we have... But at this point, it’s been a week. So I’ll edit my post to give Jasper something to respond to and skip over Evan this time. I think he went on vacation... But, you’re welcome to submit a clan cat application if you would like. That would give you a character that could interact with ours to give you something to write for your next post. :)

[Shadow Dragon]

Ok.

[StarfrostedFox]

@Jasper19

We’re Skipping over Evan‘s turn for now, so You’re welcome to make your next post! I edited my reply so that you had someone to interact with. :)

Edit: He’s back, so We’re just going to be sticking to the current order. Sorry for any confusion!

[kittyboy]

@AutumnFrost

Aah, hey Autumn! I'm so sorry for my absence! I was on a trip and got way busier than expected! I'm back now :) Would you like me to reply or wait for Jasper?

[StarfrostedFox]

@kittyboy

Evan! Welcome back! :D I Guessed that you had left on a trip somewhere. I hope it was fun! You’re Absolutely welcome to get a reply up If you’d like! I just wasn’t sure when you’d be getting back is all.

[Shadow Dragon]

I don't know what to post for this.

[StarfrostedFox]

Well, you’ve got a couple of options open to you. Like I mentioned earlier, you could make an actual warrior character, to give you more opportunities to interact with the other characters. Or you could voluntarily skip your turn. It’s up to you.

[Shadow Dragon]

My main issue is post length. I can start a descent sized post, but I don't know how to extend/embellish it.

[StarfrostedFox]

Ah, okay. Well, The advice I can give is to think about all the different senses a Character is experiencing. Are they smelling something interesting? What are they physically feeling? What sorts of things can they see? Is anything making noise where they are? Are they tasting anything? I usually go through that process when I’m writing and need to find some details. If I’m not drawing on all five areas, then I move onto emotions. What sorts of things are they experiencing emotionally? Why are they experiencing those emotions? And finally, describing their surroundings is a great way to add Extra flavor to any post. Your character is there experiencing the world around them every time you write, so why not throw in some of what they are seeing or even their thoughts on what is around them?

Hope that helps!

[Shadow Dragon]

Thanks!

[StarfrostedFox]

@Shadow Dragon

Since it’s been a week Since the last post, please let us know if you are planning on posting or if you’d rather skip your turn. I don’t want to hold up the role play for the others. :)

[Shadow Dragon]

Oh no, I completely forgot! I'm so sorry for taking so long.

[StarfrostedFox]

It Happens to all of us at one point. I’ll give you until tomorrow to get something posted before I post Myself. I’d like to keep things going.