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Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Rune_Alchemist
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I started out on the Old Guild like that, years ago, Gilgex. Apparently I was pretty good to start with, or so I was told but, I don't think I wrote nearly as well as I do today xP

Anyways, you'll improve with time, if you just keep at it, and don't be afraid to ask for pointers on how to write better.
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Thanks also I kinda do. I feel my style is incredibly sloppy, and scattered.
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no VA. I'm at work <u< >u>
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@Gilgex your posts are pretty good. Honestly, there is one very easy way for you to improve that I can see; you seem to use a lot of full stops where it's probably more appropriate to use commas...
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I'll try to do that thanks.
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Post up, I think that's everyone out of their cells now. I still have trouble trying to get the length of my posts up, I feel like I need to delve into thoughts more.
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Posted~
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I should have said that the vault door made a loud thud. That was my fault! So I deserve to have been ignored. Dx
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Nah, it's okay. Abyss'l come for you.

By the way, great post. The punctuation really helped, I think (personally speaking, of course)...
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Thanks! I'm trying harder to think my posts through. Also trying to figure out how Abyss will know Grimm has something of his.
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...Did Grimm just sneak up on Audio? If he did, that was a bad move.

A really bad move.

like, a really, really, bad move. Unless I read your post wrong xP
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I will have him swing by after I figure out where he is. The comment about the window is causing a mental confusion on the schematic of the world.
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Hello, everybody :3
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Hello Dax~
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@Rune: Yeah.... Well he didn't really mean to. I mean he did make a vault door crash behind him. Well if he did sneak up behind her its a good thing he heals quicker then most. XD

@Venom: so does a lot of the powers everyone has. A full description is in my character file.
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Suppp

Dont take this like me talking down.

so does a lot of the powers everyone has. A full description is in my character file

I have no idea what this is in regards too?
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Gilgex said
I mean he did make a vault door crash behind him.


Pfft. Like she pays attention to that xP

I'ma have fun with this next post....>:3
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