[OOC] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Void

[Lugia]

Which is what I did.
Anywho, are you going to post IC, or do you still not have any time for that?

[FyreFenix]

KaBling its Shadow. Its time for me to sleep. Oh and btw:

Name: Ven
Species: Eevee
Gender: Male
Level: 8
Moves:
- Shadow Ball
- Sand-attack
- Calm Mind
- Void Claw ( 65 Power, 100 Accuracy, Type: Void/Physical )

Bio:
Ven was born into a family of great power in the area of the world where he lived. They were not of nobility but they controlled and protected a void crystal. Each child that is born is forced into protecting the crystal with no choice for themselves. Ven's parents protected the crystal and his father's father protected the crystal and the same with his father.

When Ven was very young he always wished to explore the world and he would make up stories in his head and would act them out. One day he asked his parents if he could go to the nearby town and fetch some supplies for him and his parents. His father immediately declined his request greatly upsetting Ven. Ven rushed to his room and buried himself in his bed laying there until his parents had gone asleep. When he was sure that they were resting he snuck away from the temple where he lived and headed to the town.

Ven arrived at the town and was amazed at what lay before him. As he sat in awe of the town he began to hear yelling coming from the direction of the temple and hurried home. Worried that his parents had awoken and found him missing, he ran into the temple to discover his mother and father laying on the ground with large gashes on their skins. Ven began to become very freighted and ran to his mothers side. His mother looked at him and whispered the word "run." Ven refused to leave them. Ven then raised his head in attempted to find who had done this to his parents.

That is when he saw it. A great shadow coming from the room where the void crystal once stood. It crept along the ground at a quickening pace. Ven frozen in fear, did not know what to do and that is when he heard his father yell "Run you fool!" Ven began to turn around and run. The shadows were at his heels. He ran as fast as he could but he was not fast enough. The shadows engulfed him and all he could see were hands reaching out of the shadows and attempting to pull him in his vision went blank and he fell unconscious.

When Ven awoke he was in an open field with a pond close by. He forced himself over to it to take a drink and noticed something that terrified him. His fur had become a dark grey with his scruff and the tip of his tail taking a lighter shade of grey. He looked up to see if his parents or the temple were close by. It was nothing but a open field and a small path. He followed the path to find where it would take him. His journey had begun.

Appearance:

Ven looks like a normal Eevee for the most part. His fur is a dark grey while the tip of his tail and his scruff are a lighter shade of grey. He has light blue eyes that glow red when attacking. His fur is also slightly more unravelled compared to that of a normal Eevee.

Differences:
Ven was infected by the void granting him two types and void. The types include Normal/Ghost (void). His appearance also does not change when evolving.

[KaBling]

Talking about using the redacted sign.

Also, FYI, light was never revealed. Shadow and void was, just not explicitly. ...okay, next time, say the full name. 'Cause, we seem to have an issue with shadows.

Now... I can't post IC, because I risk getting caught misusing a computer at school.

[Lugia]

I'm not so sure about that app, shadow.
The whole 'voices in his head' thing, first of all. That would be more indicative of shadow energy (which I won't allow player characters to use) than void energy...
also, Dark mist might need to be renamed, and also be a level-up move rather than a starting one... and you should probably reduce Void Beam's power to a maximum of 80 if it's supposed to be a starting move.

As for Kabling, that's fine then, we can wait... as in, I can wait, 'cause I seem to be the only one other than you who does wait.

[KaBling]

Can't agree or object to Lugia, because I can't assess the app from school.

I'm here because we seem to be familiar with Fenix; who's Fenix?

[Lugia]

Shadowx90 from the MCF. He joined one of the RPs for some time.

[KaBling]

KaBling said
...okay, next time, say the full name. 'Cause, we seem to have an issue with shadows.

Just a heads up.

Anyway... I'll see what I can do.

[Evanist]

Ya... Anyway, waiting on post. And ya... Start with basic moves first with weak special ones.
Just got to wait for my part.

[KaBling]

Er... I can't respond.

Lugia, you didn't wake Spruce up. So, all my characters can do is... nothing. I actually cannot do anything.

[Lugia]

I can't wake Spruce up until everyone's posted about being carted around.
Also, the other people, you know, the ones that have to fight a tyranitar now?

[KaBling]

So what? They post, I still can't do anything.

[Lugia]

Do something about the cart... I mean, heck, Evanist was able to.

[Lugia]

Unfortunately, I have to go to sleep... I would normally be on later, but I'm sick, and the rest should help.

[FyreFenix]

Dark Mists name has been change, it has been replaced with Sand-attack and will be gotten through leveling up sometime in the future. On the topic of the "voices" when I was writing it I was thinking something a long the lines that a portion of Giratina was inside of Ven hence the glowing red eyes when he attacks, the ghost typing and color scheme.

If requested I can just have him wake up, be about the same without the voices and have him set off.

[KaBling]

>sees evanist's post
>grimaces at amount of lines

How about tomorrow? Tomorrow's Friday.

Also... Fenix, apart means 'not together.' However, that's not the main problem.

Eh... how to say without ruining plot... how about, Giratina doesn't really fit the current role? At least not in the original plot.

[FyreFenix]

Alright I will remove the voices to solve that. Also my apologies, I meant to write "a part."

*EDIT*
Fixed the app.

[KaBling]

Alright. Now, Void Beam is a move that is rather concerning.

"Power: 90, Accuracy: 100, Type: Void"

In two words: over-powered. You need to cut down to a different move that is not as powerful.

[Evanist]

Kabling, could not post that much. Like you said, not much happening, so don't be too hard on my post.
Also, i sudgest removing that void thing until later on

[Lugia]

KaBling said
Alright. Now, Void Beam is a move that is rather concerning."Power: 90, Accuracy: 100, Type: Void"In two words: over-powered. You need to cut down to a different move that is not as powerful.

Pretty much this. It's the same deal with having a pichu that starts out with the move Volt Tackle. Can it learn it? Yeah, but...
just how unfair is it to everyone else that they all started out with the 'Dingy Wooden Sword (+1 attack)' whereas you'd start off with a 'Shiny Diamond Sword (+9 attack)'...
so... come up with a weaker void-type move... which reminds me, Kabling, would you mind adding the move Void Whip (power: 70, accuracy: 100, type: Void/Physical) to my character, and possibly deal with the levels?

[Lugia]

Hey, Noire, just letting you know, Tyranitar's not a dragon type.
It's a Rock/Dark type.