[OOC] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Void

[Lugia]

You sure that wasn't just a PMD reference? After all, the shopkeepers go completely nuts when you steal anything from their shops, and typically one-shot you afterwards.

[Sumable]

Well, sorta both DS, and pmd. Take it as either. So, who's to post next?

[KaBling]

...but he didn't even do anything.

And pretty much all of his posts include pain.

My turn. Gotta interact with Spruce.

[Lugia]

Yes, they do. I can't tell you why, but Sumable always seems to put William in pain.

[Sumable]

Lugia said
Yes, they do. I can't tell you why, but Sumable always seems to put William in pain.

Because then it wouldn't be Team Tra- oh. Um... because he... uh... agh, I'll find out something to not hurt him in the next few posts.

[Noire]

So, I have returned from my 5,000,000,000 day long slumber and feeding in Valhalla. Anything major I missed in either here, or Dragon's Awakening?

[Riddles]

Glad to see you're back, Noire. Team Scarab began climbing Mt. Dragoncoil, and they encountered a pit that Terra wouldn't be able to cross. They decided to look up ahead for something that could help, and ran into a couple of Josh's friends from the reef. You didn't miss anything important in DA.

[Lugia]

I'm still waiting on some IC from those who are still here.

[Evanist]

((im waiting on spruce))

[Lugia]

As I said, I'm waiting on a few others.

[KaBling]

Whoever thought it took this long?

[Lugia]

Well, I'm still waiting on you guys.

[Sumable]

'you guys' as in noire, card, and ridlins.

[Riddles]

Actually, it's only Noire and Card. I already posted.

[Lugia]

We're still waiting on you in DA, though... maybe.

[Sumable]

*sigh*
Lugia, could we please go on without them? It's been three days since the last IC post.

[Lugia]

Well, now I'm waiting on a couple of other people to post.

[XxMightyenaxX]

((I dunno if it's a bit late to submit this since KaBling led me here so... Here goes nothing.. for the 5th time *sigh* -Btw this is XxBladeTheWolfxX from the Minecraft Forums-))

Name: Skylar
Species: Vulpix
Gender: Female
Level: 9
Moves: Ember, Fire Spin, Hex, Feint Attack
Bio: Skylar was born in a small area in the woods away from Allure Town. Her dad had always wanted a boy, and what did he get? Skylar. Her sisters teased her with boyish names that Skylar hated. She ignored them most of the time, but when she couldn't, her mother comforted her. To her disliking, her sisters would also often spread hoaxes about Skylar. Skylar hated this of all things.

As years went by, Skylar grew more and more invulnerable to the teases and hoaxes. Soon, she was capable of shutting those things out altogether. Her siblings tried their best to tease her, to see if she would crack, but to no avail. The thing that Skylar wanted most now, was adventure and mystery. Everyday, she'd borrow a book from her mom that had an adventure or mystery genre, and would read all day.

Finally, after reaching the end of all the books, Skylar decided she wanted to go to Allure Town. Her mother said she would miss her, but would always be in her heart. Skylar's father said nothing. So Skylar packed all her prized possessions and necessities, and started off on her way. Her last thoughts before she embarked were; 'I can't wait to get there'.


Appearance: Pretty much just a normal Vulpix, but with a sky blue scarf on her neck and a scar over her left eye.
Differences: None, really. :P

[Sumable]

Now, I'm no mod, but the bio never explains the scar, and is pretty short. And I'm not 100% sure if a vulpix can actually use Hex. And you can't learn fire spin OR feint attack at level 9.

[Lugia]

That bio is too short, and doesn't explain a thing about your character. Only one of those moves is possible for a supposedly normal Vulpix to have at level 9, and that move is Ember... though, she may have learned Hex as an egg move, I'd rather you just edit it out, after all, you didn't even tell us the species of your character's father, and only really mentioned one tiny detail about him. Also, for some odd reason, you have your character's siblings doing absolutely nothing more than teasing your character. Yeah, sure, I know siblings do that sometimes, but it's not all that they do... I should know, I have to deal with a sibling, myself. That, and you never mention names... it'd be nice if you could at least name your character's siblings, as right now they just seem like some sort of replacement for a generic schoolyard bully rather than actual characters.

This app has been denied. This doesn't mean that you're banned from the RP or anything, it just means that you have to work on making your app better before you are accepted, and before you can roleplay here.