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@shylarah Academy for knights? Not so much - you request to be a squire at a young age and when the knight you're a squire of deems you ready, you take exams to become a knight (mix of martial and tactics probably). There are royal knights, those who stand guard at the castle instead of protecting the lands. I need to add towns, now that I think of it...

Anyways, that role (royal knight) is applied for after becoming a knight. To become a knight commander, it would be more ... like being elected by the current knight commanders and the king/queen (or steward of the throne), but the king/queen vote only counts as one - so some knight commanders do get in, even if they voted for no. A tradition that's been instated for generations.

General ages are what you might expect - 12-20 are generally the ages of squires, 18-26 are knights, and probably... 24+ for knight commanders. I know it's not the most realistic thing to essentially have generals be so young, but it's fantasy roleplay. =3

Hope that helps!
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@BurningCold Added one thing to the CS - that being rank / profession. As for your idea - there can definitely be a coven of druids that are exactly as your describe. The main point to Old Magic is faith.
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@BurningCold Added one thing to the CS - that being rank / profession. As for your idea - there can definitely be a coven of druids that are exactly as your describe. The main point to Old Magic is faith.


Love what you wrote about Old Magic, super interesting. I'm glad my concept fits into your vision for the setting! I think for Kalowick, something I'll explore in the backstory is that for him, being a Knight Commander is a way to positively spotlight his dwindling culture. Which, generally, is more "neutral" or even "good" in terms of how I think they might be viewed, with the flipside being the potential to explore some very dark paths. Culturally its not something they do but the power is there and its technically in Kalowick's hands.
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@Lyla six is awful young for a squire. They'd be pages at that age, most likely. Squires have to be old enough to fight, and generally have already been pages for a couple years.

at any rate, have a sheet. <3 Let me know if anything needs changing, adding to, or whatever.



whoops, forgot to add when she became knight commander. Lemme just edit this...
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@shylarah I enjoy happy coincidences like two characters that both like to sing
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@shylarah Ok... ages 12-20? I think that's pretty reasonable. It's not what I'd personally call an important detail, but some details matter~ (^_^)
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@Lyla sounds good.
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@BurningCold - I adore Kalowick. You did an amazing job of mixing the Old Ways and having an oath to the crown! I really don't have anything to say... other than, could you expand on the Everbranch Border Post? No need to edit the CS, just so I can add it as one of the key locations for the setting~ (^_^)

@shylarah - She seems lovely~ You've got a great start. The only critique I have is, can you explain more about her rune's spells? You listed force, but what does that entail?
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@Lyla Ah, sure thing! let me just do that real quick.
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EDIT: added a blurb about Kalowick, and the attack on the steward.
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@Lyla I still do have more to add to the CS in general! The location I mentioned is one you already have in the locations by the way, did you mean you want me to make up some more info for it or am I confused xP
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@shylarah Great - I like the rune. If you think she's done, wait for me to make a post in characters and then you can add her. (^_^)

@BurningCold No, I got confused - don't worry about it, lol, your CS is fine. Eager to see it complete.
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@Lyla

Question: Are there any towns that are dealing with/have experienced battles or maybe even bandit attacks in the past? Like towns on the border with other countries during wartime or what have you?
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@Lyla Reposting the sheet for simplicity. I think it's all finished up so let me know what you think!

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@BurningCold Ohh, maybe Leia was one of the knight commanders protecting the steward the day of Varn's attack? That might be cool!
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@shylarah I like that, works for me!

EDIT: "Leia was there the day that Kalowick intervened on Varn's plot. She watched him kill his master even as she slew one of her own former allies. Her voice was the first to suggest that Kalowick join the ranks of the knight commanders." I added this to my sheet if that sounds good to you?
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@BurningCold Yee~ I'll add the attack to her sheet, then. That was what, seven years ago?
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@shylarah Just about 7 years ago yes
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@Daxam Well, Stormhaven would deal with pirates pretty regularly, Greypeak Watch has a lot of really tough animals and magical beasts that attack trade caravans that go north, and Willowford Crossing probably deals with their share of bandits.

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@Lyla

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