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I object.Also, any idea on an IC timeframe?


Go at it if you've got stuff.

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Oh lawd does that mean I have to be the think-tank for the Joes?


I didn't want to go too far into the Joes other than having them be the nemesis. I didn't want to handcuff other players.
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Working on Karai so forward me any Foot stuff.
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Player Name: Zombiedude101

Character: Jackie Estacado AKA The Current Host of the Darkness

Powers and abilities:




First and foremost, Jackie is the current host of the Darkness, an ancient, evil entity which is capable of granting its user great powers beyond those of mortal limitations. With his darkness powers, Jackie can construct nearly anything out of the Darkness’ essence, ranging from a chitinous armour, to wings that allow him to fly, to magically infused firearms. With the Darkness, he can summon an army of minions known as ‘Darklings’ (Which tend to have their own little personalities and so) to use at his disposal and can also summon a number of snake-like ‘tentacles’ which protrude from his back. He also possesses a highly accelerated healing factor, superhuman strength, superhuman agility and a general resistance to injury or pain, whilst the Darkness will slowly reconstruct his body if he suffers a fatal injury. During this experience, Jackie will find himself in the ‘Otherworld’, a dream-like reality created by the Darkness to keep him distracted whilst it repairs his body. The Otherworld has many forms, ranging from a nightmarish version of a trench frontline during the First World War to a strangely quiet mental asylum. It often varies.

However, he possesses a single major weakness; light. As one would expect from an entity known as the Darkness, Jackie’s powers will not function when exposed to light. His dark constructs and minions will crumble into dust upon making contact with it, whilst his dark essence will recede until it has dissipated. In short, his powers will weaken when in contact with light until they no longer function, forcing Jackie to use creative means (Such as shooting out lights or specifically staying in the shadows) in order to continue using them. Powers aside, Jackie is a very competent man in terms of handling weaponry and particularly excels in the use of pistols, two of which he often carries in his concealed holsters and dual wields as his signature weapons. He also possesses some skill in hand-to-hand combat, specifically martial arts.

Alignment Jackie's alignment is something of a difficult topic; he's been known for both kind and terrible acts and he's well aware that by this point if there's any shred of soul remaining inside of him, he's headed straight to hell if the Darkness ever lets him go. Chaotic Neutral.

Character Notes

Chief of Police Eddie Shrote is dead - having been assassinated in a church bombing six months prior
Don Paulie ‘Kill the Children Too’ Franchetti is dead - having been found executed on the grounds of his offshore mansion
The Franchetti Crime Family - once a highly influential and overall powerful organisation - is now in disarray due to the lack of an established head and the fact that a large number of its enforcers and lieutenants have been killed off
The NYPD is currently undergoing reform after it’s revealed that the late Chief of Police Eddie Shrote had close ties to Paulie Franchetti and was said to have been under his payroll alongside numerous other officers, and was also linked to the bombing of an orphanage
Butcher Joyce is a ‘cleaner’ working in New York, often known for not taking sides against or for the families

Origin and backstory (as you see it):

Born somewhere in New York City to an absent father and a mother who died very shortly after childbirth, Jackie Estacado spent much of his early childhood growing up in St. Mary's Orphanage alongside his long-time childhood friend and sweetheart, Jenny Romano. However, from a very young age he quickly involved in the seedy underworld of New York after the head of the Franchetti Crime Family, his 'Uncle' Paulie "Kill the Children too" Franchetti opted to adopt him to raise in the mob after being passed whispers from a mysterious individual that Jackie’s influence would bring him to great power over the other families. Believing this to be partially related to the fact that Jackie's late father Danny Estacado had a reputation for being particularly vicious, Paulie seized the opportunity to groom his 'Nephew' into a Hitman for the family. As the years progressed, Jackie gradually took to the mafia lifestyle, becoming more and more addicted to it as he matured, losing his virginity at the age of fourteen to a female police officer during an interrogation and committing his first hit at sixteen years old. True to the 'prophecy' that Franchetti had been foretold of, Jackie's actions within the mob led to his 'Uncle' becoming the most powerful Don in the city and it was for this reason that the crime boss initially kept him close. The only good thing he could claim for himself was his relationship with Jenny, who by this point he'd started a relationship with.

However, things changed forever on the night of Jackie's twenty first birthday, when he discovered that he was host to something known only as the 'Darkness', an ancient entity that granted him the use of great, terrible dark powers. Using these powers to great effect to further himself in his criminal lifestyle, Jackie initially revelled in the additional violence and carnage but soon came to realise the price it came with. The Darkness indeed had a mind of its own and would impose its will on Jackie on a whim, whilst other times it would simply taunt him over and over with a searing voice which only he could hear. At the same time, his 'Uncle' Paulie had grown paranoid of Jackie seeking to topple him from his control over the family and attempted to have him killed, to no avail. In response, Jackie fought back against Paulie and significantly damaged several of his operations, prompting him to bomb the same orphanage which Jackie had grown up in and kidnap Jenny. Coming to her rescue, Jackie found the Darkness imposing its will upon him once again and despite his attempts to break free, he was ultimately forced to watch Paulie execute her before his own eyes.

Distraught by grief and unable to continue living without his beloved, Jackie was able to resist the will of the Darkness just enough to break free and end his own life with the same pistol which had been used to murder Jenny. However, it would not be Jackie’s end; instead, he awoke in a hellish place known only to him as the ‘Otherworld’, a realm constructed by the Darkness to hold him whilst it repaired his body. In this instance, the Otherworld resembled a nightmarish version of the First World War’s trenches filled with patchwork Axis soldiers, and as Jackie made his way across, he soon came across a distant yet somehow familiar face; Anthony Estacado, his great grandfather who had fought during the war.

With Anthony’s help, Jackie was able to fight his way through the Otherworld until he finally reached the Heart of the Darkness. Unfortunately, Anthony died during the breach of the Heart yet was able to offer a few final words of advice before the Darkness finally claimed him, and it was with this that Jackie was able to face down the Darkness. Ultimately he surrendered himself to the Darkness as opposed to fighting as it expected, and it was through this that he was able to seize back control of himself from the entity (Partially due to the fact that the Darkness knew he would embark on a killing spree in which it could revel), yet it offered him a few final words of warning before everything blacked out.

Jackie awoke in the mortal world once more, and again with nothing to lose and vengeance being the only thing that persisted within his mind, Jackie relentlessly fought to get to Paulie once again, killing a large number of important figureheads and associates in the Franchetti Crime Family in the process including corrupt Chief of Police Eddie Shrote, all whilst the Darkness revelled in the chaos it had created. Eventually, Jackie made a final siege on Paulie's offshore mansion in the midst of an eclipse and massacred the entirety of the Franchetti household with his Darkness powers, leaving not a soul alive. Paulie cowered in the lighthouse before Jackie eventually made his way up, before executing his 'Uncle' who cursed him to the grave. He'd taken his revenge and had toppled New York City's most powerful crime family in the process, leaving a power vacuum for the other families to squabble over.

Since then, few have heard of his whereabouts in the six months which have passed, though rumours still continue to circulate that shortly before his dissapearance Estacado was offered a chance to seize the reigns of the family by the Chicago committee.

Why have you chosen this character?: It's the one I have the most experience/knowledge with. I've played through both of the video game adaptations for the Darkness (The first was better, IMO) and I've done my research into the comics (And I've read a few issues), so I figured it'd be something I could work with best.

Provide a sample post as the character you wish to portray, three paragraphs or more and with at least one line of dialogue:

((https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZVwhNpiFkoc appropriate music))

Six months ago

Behind him lingered the copper-tinged scent of blood, the faint groans and pleas of mercy of what little remained of the men who’d survived his onslaught. For a moment, Jackie heard the scuttling of a tiny creature with oily black skin and a gremlin-like appearance and disinterestedly glanced away as it gnawed on the finger of a dead man. Death walked in the halls of House Franchetti today. He should’ve known - he was death, but something far worse lingered deep inside of him; a terrible force with an age that extended past the universe itself. It too sensed the death around it and revelled in the chaos, its cold disembodied voice letting out the closest thing it ever had ever known to laughter. Drawing past the door, a familiar voice with a stereotypical mobster-type accent that made Jackie want to pulverise a thousand faces called out from above, heavy footsteps clanking against the grating spiral that was the lighthouse stairwell.

“You think you made a difference here, Estacado? Nothing’s changed, you fuckin’ piker!”

His fingers tightened around the grip of the remaining pistol he still owned, the faint smell of half a dozen magazines dispensed into a dozen bodies still lingering close to the barrel. He kept on climbing, following the footsteps. Again, the voice called out.

“You brought this on yourself Jackie, I didn’t do shit that you didn’t do yourself!”

Clambering his way up a ladder, he felt the footsteps growing nearer - yet evermore frantic. Fear was in the air. He smelled it. The Darkness smelled it, and it was simple telling how it was excited to be present as its host claimed one final soul. Reaching the top, he could hear that mobster-voice screaming down to him again.

“The problem with you is, you never learned to listen! You always wanted to be me, but it doesn’t work that way, Jackie!”

The door was still ajar, leading out onto another set of steps which led to the final point atop the lighthouse. Outside, the sky was a pitch black; the only source of light being the faint rim of sun which had been eclipsed by the moon. Convenient timing, perhaps? Or maybe the Darkness had some hand in an ancient prophecy. It didn’t matter, soon he’d reach the end of his journey. Drawing back the door to the lantern room, he heard that same frantic voice scream out a final threat. “You’re a dead man, you hear me?! A dead man!” Gunshots followed and Jackie felt specks of blood seep down his coat from where one of the rounds had slammed into his shoulder, but it didn’t bother him; instead he fired off another two rounds and left the middle aged crime boss sprawled across the floor, grunting in pain as he clutched at his stomach. That same disembodied voice that was the Darkness spoke out to him yet again, yearning for the kill more than it ever had before.

”Finish him...”

Jackie took several steps towards his Uncle Paulie, remaining silent and monotone as he observed Don Paulie Franchetti - once a powerful man, feared by half of New York City and begrudgingly respected by the other - beg for his life. “Listen, Jackie. I been thinkin’, I know this worked out bad for the both of us but there’s no need to be rash here...” The last word sounded like a half-restrained sob. “Why don’t you fuckin’ listen to me, you piece of shit!”

”Take his life...”

The Darkness wanted this one so badly. He could feel it inside him, that urge to unleash a black hell and tear Uncle Paulie asunder, that hunger which yearned to taste the man’s oily heart. But Jackie wasn’t killing for the family, or for the business, or for the darkness. This one was for himself. For Jenny. “Jackie, I-” Wordlessly, he unloaded what remained of his pistol clip into Uncle Paulie, yet even that allowed the man to spit a few final words as he choked through layers of blood, phleghm and whatever else the bastard had inside of him. “Estacado, you... fuckin’ piece of shit... I hope you rot in hell forever..”

‘I already am’, Jackie thought.

And that was the end of the line.
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Today I learned that The Darkness apparently has video games. Now if only other Indie Comics could get good video games.
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Yoshi Amaya / Oroku Karai

Power and Abilities

Karai was trained as a member of the Foot from her reprogramming to her early teenage years and has shown an affinity and natural talent for the techniques that have been shown to her by her “father” including combat and stealth. She has extremely fast, agile, and intelligent which makes her a foe to be reckoned with. In addition to this she is experienced with various weapons ranging from the katana blade, hankyū bow, kusarigama, and such.

Unknown to Karai, she has a bond with a Shinto elemental spirit (of wind) which makes her naturally fast as well as forging her personality into one of a realist mindset, being prone to playfulness, spontaneity, and one of impulsiveness. As her spirit connection is un-awakened and unknown to her she does not have any of the powerful mystical abilities she is destined to have and the abilities that The Shredder desires.

Alignment

Lawful Neutral – orders by the Shredder is law, morality has no place in my heart and I will act on them swiftly and without hesitation.

Character Notes

Oroku Saki – “The Shredder” and Karai’s father, though unknown to her he is actually her abductor and killer of her actual parents.

Norinaga Tatsu – Descendant of Norinaga Kenshin and supposedly the inheritor of the spiritual bond to the elemental spirit of earth. An obedient member of the Foot Clan that was seduced by the promises of power and freedom to do as he pleases, he is willing to show The Shredder.

Mashimi Oyuki – Descendant of Mashimi Yukio and supposedly the inheritor of the spiritual bond to the element of fire. Witnessed her parents killed by The Foot and avoided capture by being “awakened” causing her to burn down her home and the ninja with it. The clan believes her dead whilst the police believe her to be an arsonist and child criminal, she has taken to the streets of New York City since nobody cares to help her.

Yoshida Tora – Descendant of the Yoshida clan and supposedly the inheritor of the spiritual bond to the element of metal. Member of the Foot Clan and an ally to Karai that is friendly towards the girl. Shredder allows his “closeness” to Karai simply due to his role as a potential foot mystic and soldier.

Irma Langestein – Descendant of Mang Thrasha and supposedly the inheritor of the spiritual bond to the element of water. Is a student in New York City and friend of April O’Neil, is oblivious to her heritage and the possibility that she has inherited something the Foot Clan is so desperate to kidnap her for. The actions against her have not occurred… yet.

Background and Story

Descended from the Yoshi clan, Amaya was the descendant of an obscure Japanese figure known as Yoshi Hamato and lived her life in Japan fairly mundanely for the first few years of her life. However, unbeknownst to Amaya and her parents—the young girl had inherited something from a very distant ancestor that was tied into the spiritual aspects of the world, a spiritual bond that one man named Oroku Saki desired to control for his own nefarious means. It was then it happened when Amaya’s life was turned upside down and her family was taken from her before she herself was reprogrammed by The Foot and Oroku Saki at the tender age of nine. From this point onward, Yoshi Amaya died and Oroku Karai was born—she does not remember anything about her life before The Foot and believes the things her father has told her about her past and that her clouded memory was a result of her own incompetence when training recklessly.

Karai follows her father towards this new “prosperity” and obediently looks forward to it.

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“The dark alleys smell of the failure of this society of ‘America’ as those without order wallow in their own filth and shame as they refuse to take what they need to survive, relying on the most basic of subsistence and on the charity of their oppressors. New York City calls them the homeless, but I see the lifeless instead. It pains me to even bear to look at them, but The Shredder has not ordered their deaths nor have they seen something they should not have at this point in time so they are allowed to continue this pitiful existence. There’s a tug of hesitation to despise them so at the center of my body and I am not sure why as I look down upon them, why do I feel so restrained by my own inhibitions?” Karai Oroku looked to her closest ally and only true friend in the clan, Tora Yoshida, as they sat in a room in a warehouse in New York City that had been chosen as one of the Foot’s discreet safe-houses.

Karai’s reservations about her own feelings worried Tora who had obediently followed the Foot as it was request of him by his father before his passing, but even with such obedience he felt something was off in the air of his comrades—like there was something dark and malicious growing in the shadows. With a compassionate frown he attempted to speak to Karai about these feelings of hers as she viewed it important enough to come to him about it.

“I think it’s because you care about their well-being, thinking that if they had order in their life then their purpose wouldn’t be so without vigor and resolve.”

Karai stopped to think on the words from her friend before she raised her head with a confident smile. “You are very wise for your years, my friend.”

Tora chuckled humbly, “I suppose. Is there anything else that is on your mind, Karai?”

“Actually… there’s a lot in my thoughts, ever since we arrived here in New York. I feel like something is calling to me… whispering in my ear, something that I didn’t feel was present in Japan. I feel oddly home but I don’t feel comfortable, and I don’t know why.”

The feeling of restlessness was hard to pin down for the teenaged girl as she tried to understand her thoughts in conversation with her fellow foot clansmen as she pondered what could be creating such uncomfortable nostalgia. She didn’t like New York or so she believed, so how could she feel like it was home? Home was in Japan, not in some overtly unorderly cacophony of complacency and greed. The feeling that something was calling to her somewhere in New York worried her greatly and she did not want her father to feel like she was uncertain or unfocused—as those were traits of the failures of The Foot and not the prodigal examples as she was expected and oftentimes proved she was. But what could she do about such anxiety? She hoped expressing it through speech was what she need to do.

“What do you mean by that?”

“I feel like I need to be here, but not for the reasons we need to be here—like there is a greater reason calling me to a place I’m not fond of, a place where it’s not about the Foot Clan… but about me, like the spirits above are calling out to me trying to make me understand something but I’m not sure what it could be. I refuse to let my father hear of this or see this from me, I need to remove myself from this feeling before our work here begins.”

“I’m not sure I have any thoughts on that.” Tora admitted, feeling Karai’s thoughts were worrying for a plethora of reasons. She was afraid of looking weak in front of her father, yet she felt like she needed to be here for reasons that weren’t connected to the clan, and that it was overwhelming her. Tora didn’t like it one bit and while he wouldn’t dispel such information to her father unless ordered to, he felt like Karai was not ‘whole’ and it was hurting her so immensely that he could not bear to see her continue to do so.

“But I can say that you should be with peace with your feelings.”

“That’s a very simple answer.”

“Sometimes a simple answer is all you need.”

Karai smirked, “Quiet, Tora-kun.”
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I put up Storm Shadow's Sample post. Sloth, part of the sample expounds on his back scars in the form of a Flashback to the Kandahar incident.
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The Finalized Storm Shadow is up.
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Ah, another reason for Snake to be silent, and to abhor explosives.

I'll finalize Snake later today, his sample more than likely mirroring Tommy's.

Also nice to see you picked up Karai, Gowi-San.
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Good news, Snake Eyes + Sample is finalized.

Don't hold back with the reviews/opinions and what not.
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Sloth, first, I LOVED your sample. Second, I'm now jealous of said sample, and so will edit it. Expect a better sample up soon.
EDIT: All I did was add a little to the flashback.
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Hillan said
Would I be allowed to use Dexter Morgan?


Sorry I missed this question. If he's had graphic novels I don't see why not.

Also, Storm Shadow, Snake Eyes, Karai, and Jackie are all approved.

ALL THE NINJAS.
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HenryJonesJr said ALL THE NINJAS.


Now all we need is one big ninja picnic.

I should have some sort of Snake Eyes thing up in the coming days + Finalizing Wesley's stuff.
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First official post up.
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I'm not saying Sloth is inspiring me to be Spawn but I'm not saying he isn't either.
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I'm not saying Sloth is inspiring me to be Spawn but I'm not saying he isn't either.


Didn't someone already make some sort of Spawn character though?

I mean, I'm just Saiyan.
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Sloth said
Didn't someone already make some sort of Spawn character though?I mean, I'm just Saiyan.


There's an unfinished CS. So theoretically someone could still apply.
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And Snake Eyes' intro post is up, I don't know why, but something about it feels missing to me.

Do feel free to comment or review or what not, I do love the constructive criticism.
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Yo, I've not forgotten about the thread; I've been away since Wednesday but I'll be back tomorrow, will try to get a post up around then.
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Dang, sloth, you already leave me wanting for the next post. Which means I'm composing the next Storm Shadow post. Which also means I wanted to run past some things with you.
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Dang, sloth, you already leave me wanting for the next post. Which means I'm composing the next Storm Shadow post. Which also means I wanted to run past some things with you.


Shoot me a PM mate, I'm go for whatever.
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