[OOC] The Lost Alpha

[Destinyfailhorror17]

Name: Corin
Gender: Male
Age: 4 years
Appearance:

Personality: Corin, is a sweet affectionate wolf, he learned how treat wolves nicely. He could never hurt anyone; he never believed violence was the answer. He may be too quiet and never raises his voice, causing him to being pushed around a lot. He is gentle and caring, he loves watching the pups, his heart always felt warm from it. He has trust issues and has a hard time trusting other wolves but he tries to hide it most of the time.

Bio: At the time he was a pup he had some issues, among his peers he was bullied a lot. He had a hard time finding anyone he could really talk to or trust. He ended up watching the other pups playing from a far distance. He spent his alone until he was his age to venture out to find a new pack. He didn’t want to leave but it was for the better. With his current pack he had joined, he feels fine with it but inside he had a hard time really trusting anyone except for the pups. He loves watching the kids play, hoping that no one was left out like he was.

Rank: Omega
Power: Super sonic bark (deathen enemies if they got to close and disorientate them, leaving them defenceless)
Power: Controls earth (Trees, rocks, roots, etc)
Marking: None
Family: left to find a new pack.
Mate: none
Friends:
Sentimental attachment: none
Other:

[Athinar]

Okay, I edited it, and I get a third power because I'm an alpha? Okay.

[Athinar]

Name: SilverWind
Gender: Female
Age: 3
Appearance:


Personality: SilverWind is a quiet wolf, but is very distrustful of outsiders and has a great loyalty to Vixie. In Silver's opinion, Vixie is a goddess who could be at no fault.

Bio: Silver never really wanted to be a part of a large pack. She only wanted to follow Vixie. After Vixie was kicked out of her old pack, SilverWind slipped away under cover of darkness, following that white figure in the distance. She was no hunter, and she got lost, but she always found her again. Was it destiny? Silver thinks so.

Rank: Sentinel
Power 1: Psychic Sense and Control (mental lances, mental blocks, telekinesis, etc.)
Power 2: Density control (can make her muscles hyper-dense, claws super-sharp, skin rock-hard, etc.)
Markings: A long, thin scar along her ribs, from a bobcat that attacked her while she was following Vixie.
Family: Unknown. Her mother was left with the old pack.
Mate: OPEN
Friends: Open
Sentimental Attachment: Vixie

[The One]

Cerberus good try, first character Apollo can't have the second power sorry so it needs changing since you can force somebody to do something they don't want. Artemis has got a really bad power and I recommend you change it. If you need help then what about Fire control? Orion has once again got a really bad power, and suggest that you edit. What about controlling inanimate objects, or maybe controlling one of the elements or something.

Athinar you are an alpha, you just need to change your bio as in your bio you killed the previous alpha to become the next alpha but there is no male alpha yet so this wouldn't work. The reason for this is because the pack is only just starting. When the IC starts, Vixie will announce you the male alpha when she is deciding on what rank everybody should be.

I suggest you edit your powers. You are an alpha, and they are pretty weak. My suggestion is Darkness control, enhanced healing and maybe Werewolf transformation. This would allow you to stand on two legs and become bigger than any normal wolf, plus you would become stronger faster and etc.

[The One]

SilverWind, again powers are weak, for Sentinel you need to be strong. Now if you want to be able to sense anything, you can be psychic. That way you can communicate to anyone through telepathically, you can send psychic blasts and use psychic attacks plus you'd be able to sense things easily. Her second power could be Density control. That way you can still change the Density control of you muscles, but it isn't limited to muscles. You can make your claws super sharp that it will cut through metal. You could make somebody's muscles like paper, etc.

[The One]

Lieutenant is Available. again. Dies anyone want to take it as we need a Lieutenant to start. Once we got one we are ready, we just need to wait for Dragon.

[Stitchblades]

I'll take it as a second character?

[The One]

Sure that's fine. ^^

[The One]

Sure that's fine. ^^

[Stitchblades]

Name:Freki
Gender: Male
Age: 6 years
Appearance:

Personality: Freki is strong willed, ruthless, and extremely proud, While he cares for every member of the pack as a whole his only loyalty lies with the Alpha's and his Son Bjomolf. He doesn't expect people to like him But as long as he has their respect as the Lieutenant, he doesn't care.

Bio: Freki was a loner for quite some time, His Former pack was absorbed into a larger pack who did not wish to fight but was expanding their territory. Freki was ashamed of his alpha for this so left without a word. Many months past when he stumbled across a Lone wolf, at first he was going to attack until he realized that it was just a pup, or be it a rather large one at that, taking this Pup under his wing they wondered for a few days until he found a traveling pack, Knowing the pup would last long without a pack, he sort out to join them for the sake of the pup, with relief he was accepted but was expected to work extra hard for this gift. A gift he would never be able to repay.

Rank: Lieutenant
Power 1: Freki Has the ability to control fire, and manipulate it to his will.
Power 2: his howle can disorient any of those that hear it making them vulnerable for attack
Markings: Scars, cuts, and general markings. his face is riddled with scars and he wears a war paint under his eyes
Family: adopted Bjomolf
Mate: None
Friends: The Alphas
Sentimental Attachment: Bjomolf
Other: he will kill anyone who dares insult the Alpha's or his Bjomolf

[The One]

The picture is the same as Pharaoh, and if I were you I'd change power 1, as it isn't very strong.

[Stitchblades]

edited is that better?

[The One]

For first power, I would suggest fire control. He clearly has it. Xd

[Stitchblades]

Done

[The One]

Cool. That's all fine. Nice picture by the way.

[The One]

Cool. That's all fine. Nice picture by the way.

[Stitchblades]

Credit to whoever made it, they are a brilliant artist

[The One]

I know. I meant, cool find. ^^ Me, DragonKing, Pharaoh. We are the worst Artist. We have to use pictures on the interweb.

[The One]

I know. I meant, cool find. ^^ Me, DragonKing, Pharaoh. We are the worst Artist. We have to use pictures on the interweb.

[Stitchblades]

I'm a wee bit of an artist but nothing as good as that