Try #2
Edit: corrected the plot header
The Caribbean
Surf, Fun, Adventure
But the Human Greed
The Human Dreams
Pull you.. The music blares at your ears, but it can’t disguise the thick, raspy words of the man before you. Richly dressed and smoking a cigar, his voice like nails on a chalkboard make him a real life villain. “Tell me, do you have a dream? Something so impossible that it reaches your wildest imagination? Well I have the green wings for you to fly to the heavens.” His raspy voice haunts you as his fingers mimic the wings he speaks of. “I have a job for you…”
This man is a Narcotrafficant, his precious cargo fell into the blue waters of the reef you and your friends have been diving in for years. He knows that you are a professional diver, and poor after this trip. If you find the cargo, he will share his wealth with you, making your wildest dreams come true. But..You have to find the cargo and keep it a secret from everyone, and you have to find it first. Remember as you dive in, once in you can get out, this is the world of the Narcotrafficants. 1. Be realistic, you aren't Bruce Lee. Use weapons realistically
2. Romance is allowed but sew it into the story
3.you don't need to know diving terms, but you are welcome to use them Full Name:
Age:20-30
Appearance: pictures are allowed,but try to make them realistic (no multicolored hair or eyes)
Personality:
Dream: Whatever impulses your character to take the plunge, if they don’t want the money describe why they are helping the others out.