Nicely done- I did want to give it some sort of depth, and breadth of character, hence the length in my post, and I'm somewhat happy that you matched it- they're miniature masterpieces in really throwing across our characters in this point in time. Skyth's got one that will go up shortly, and it explains the snipers a bit more, as well as being something that fits brilliantly.
I don't think mine will ever be perfect. Jan is basically at his end- he has just killed three people in cold blood, and carjacked someone, as well as being wanted by civilian and military authorities. His crimes are a little surprising, but when you think about it, he's the combat leader of the Task Force, and there are many fingers pointing at him. I think as a person, he doesn't have a lot of depth due to his personality being quite warlike, but he's not got a lot left to live for, which does make you empathize with his character- bad relationships, and the fact that this is his life. Same with Scott, I can see to some extent- and Zhenya, to some regards, being put out into the middle of nowhere. The atmosphere is really nice in yours, and I think Skyth's got something just as good, with all three being really magnificent examples of our characters out of the traditional bond of Lima. While posts will shorten in future, I think there's one more left in me that will come at the end, that's for sure.
The details aren't perfect in mine either with Victoria (I think the way that you've both handled it is excellent), but the aim is, of getting everyone to this one little rest stop on the Autobahn 1, going north, in the middle of the soaking wet night. You've done that, and any way that you do it, is fine- it's intentionally vague so you can NPC and make it happen how you want, and that you did. I enjoyed reading both, and I do love the way that it's been portrayed, as a real epic turning point in the RP.