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Interested! :D
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Well Riteous I don't mind posts as long as it's not "Free-Level", so don't expect any complaints from me. Besides, I don't think the people on this thread are too judgmental towards writing XD. And Laue, I hope it's alright that I made Varkasan know Alicia. I just thought it would make sense considering they are the same age (and so, probably underwent training at the same time). But if ever there's any problems in my post (or future ones) just let me know.
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Metronome said
So bored

Hmm?
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I joined like five RPs and only this one is going anywhere =P
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Ha, you almost had me worried there.
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I'm sorry for my delay on making an IC post, I'm trying to make time to get on the RPG.
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That's a good looking IC post, Riteous =). And everyone else too, this seems like a great start for the RP ^_^. Now I just hope we can keep up this momentum.
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Hey Lau,

I saw your post in the Affinity OOC. I checked out your rp and I love the idea. Great job :) May I ask how many mages and paladins there are? I'm planning on my CS.
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4 of each at the moment. And I'm glad my poaching advertising paid off.
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Amaris Ernestine

Alignment: Mage


Covenant/Affiliation: One companion


Personality:

A person of few words, she only talks when she needs to. She has a cold personality, giving off the impression that she is void of any emotions, though she usually is. She is a very independent person and never relies on others. She is secretive and keeps to herself, rarely giving out her opinions and feelings for the others to know. She always has a disinterested attitude about everything in life and is always calm and composed. She always speaks in an even tone and carries herself with dignity. She is also stoic, a person who can endure pain and hardships without showing her feelings or complaining.


Biography:

She grew up in a small village where mages lived peacefully with the humans. The village was located in a secluded area near the forests, much farther away from other towns and villages. Up until now, she still thinks of the village and the events that took place, leading her to where she is now, journeying around in search for answers.


___________________________________________flashback to 15 years ago_________________________________________


It was a sunny day when she got out of the house, excited for what the day would bring. She lay in the garden at the back of her house as she watched the clouds and the birds that flew by. It was a peaceful day indeed, or so she thought. She played around the field, as she danced and sang happily to the soft music that was played with a flute by an old man in the house next to theirs. It was a Saturday and that meant she didn't have to do training with her father. Her father had always trained her in martial arts and swords fighting. Though due to her small structure and speed, her father had decided to train her in wielding dual blades.

Suddenly, the music stopped and she could hear marching from a distance, accompanied by yells in anguish. Cries of different people were heard as they begged for their lives or their family's lives. Time slowed down in her perspective and she froze in the spot, afraid that if she moved a limb, she would be next. It was when she saw her father move towards her that she was able to run in his arms, seeking comfort.

"Shh.. It's okay." He said gently as he hugged her like it would be the last. "Now listen. Amaris, I need you to follow everything that I say carefully." He took her face in his large hands and looked her in the eye. His eyes glimmered as the tears threatened to spill. Amaris nodded as tears ran down her cheeks. "Don't cry. You'll be okay." He managed to say with a small smile but that only made her cry harder in silence. It didn't go unnoticed to that her father had used the word "you're" instead of "we're" but being the obedient girl that she was at that time, she only nodded.

"Now.. Do you see that small fence gate right there?" He said while pointing behind her. Her gaze followed to where his hand was pointed to and she looked back at him with questioning eyes. "You've always wondered what that led to and you always complained about how useless it was since behind it is just a trail of thick bushes" He smiled at the memory. "I want you to open that gate and crawl beneath the bushes. It has a very small space but if you continue, it will lead you to a forest. Once you reach the forest, just keep following the path and it will lead you to a town. Go and find help there, okay?" He kissed her forehead and hugged her one last time. "But what about you? Aren't you coming with me?" She asked. He chuckled lightly, "Dear, I won't fit in there. I'll be right behind you but i'm gonna go pass another way." He responded with a small smile.

"And you don't have to worry about being alone either, you'll bring a friend with you." With that said, he moved to the side and revealed a young boy with white hair, standing their with a hard expression on his face. The marching grew louder as it grew nearer and her father quickly grabbed the both of them and carried them in front of the fence. "Go, go." He said as he opened and motioned towards it. The both of them got down on their knees as they crawled beneath. It became pitch black when his father closed the gate and little did she know that it was the last time she'll ever see him.


Power Description:The magic is expelled from the body as opposed to Magic done through the use of a weapon or outside source. Ability to use magical forces to varying degrees.


Spells/Abilities:


Concealment Magic


Basic:

Type of Magic that allows its user to conceal people/themselves and objects and prevents them from being sensed. People under the effects of this Magic can see and hear other people, however, they themselves cannot be heard nor seen. Her limit right now is 2 people/objects at once.

Advanced:

Once mastered, the user can trap people inside the hidden object or place, preventing them from escaping unless someone outside of the spell inflicts the user enough pain to break the spell.


Requip

Basic:

This Magic allows the users to store items in a pocket dimension so they can easily summon it at any time, even during battle, which gives them a high level of flexibility in combat. However, there is a limit to how much the pocket dimension can store.

Advanced:

More skilled users are able to Requip different weapons in battle, and it is even possible to Requip armors in the midst of battle.


Aura manipulation

Basic:

The user opens their palm towards the enemy and creates a magic orb in the air, from which the user can fire magic bullets in rapid succession. The bullets will only burn or wound the skin and the user can only use one hand at a time.

Advanced:

These "bullets" are powerful enough to pierce through flesh. Advanced users of this magic are even capable of performing the attack with both hands simultaneously.


Other skills:

-Dual blades-

-Basic martial Arts-





Blake Kali

Alignment: Mage
Covenant/Affiliation: One companion

Personality:
He is mischievous with a wicked sense of humor. He loves to manipulate people and he has no morals or restraint. He is uncaring, prideful and intelligent. He is outgoing and loves to talk. Most of all, he is ambitious and has the love for power.

Biography:
He was the young boy that Amaris' father helped escape. His family was killed when a group of Paladins came to village, hunting for mages. He never shed a single tear and made a promise to avenge his family.

His father was a black mage who used spells to bring destruction. He was part of a covenant that hated Paladins and killed them on sight, whether they were good or bad. This was what brought the attention of the Paladins to their town.

Power Description: Darkness Magic is a type of Magic which allows users to manipulate and control destructive dark magic. He can manipulate dark energy at will. He can also draw upon negative energy from himself or anyone around him, thus the stronger the negative emotion, the stronger he becomes.

Spells/Abilities:

Dark Barrier:
By utilizing their Darkness Magic, the user erects a transparent, black barrier to protect themselves from the opponent's attack. The more advanced the user, the stronger the barrier will be.

Dark Delete:
Several spheres of dark energy are fired continuously from the user's hands. There is an interval of 3 seconds. Advanced users don't have an interval time between spheres and are able to use both hands.

Dark Slash:
Dark energy takes the form of a whip to slash enemies. The more advanced the user, the longer the range.

Dark Cloak:
User cloaks itself with dark energy, increasing speed, healing and strength. At a basic level, he can keep up the cloak for 2 minutes. The more advanced the user is, the longer it stays.

Other skills:
-One handed sword-
-Pick pocketing and picking locks-

Other: Always wears the necklace his father gave him.
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Ok, aside from the formatting which is really hard on the eyes (you don't need to center EVERYTHING), I would prefer a longer bios. They feel like tl;dr versions at the moment. Also, it would be nice if you could reword your ability descriptions better, removing the unnecessary "spell grows stronger with user", which is a given. Also, under power description, or under spells themselves, it would pretty cool to describe how they combo their spells, or the patterns they employ.

Basically, clean up your cs, expand on bios if you can, and it will be able to give you a far more conclusive answer.
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I was planning to reveal more of their bios in the rp and as for the descriptions, those were just rough drafts until I get to decide how it changes as it gets stronger but ahh, nevermind. I'll just withdraw from this rp. Thanks anyway.
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Well, that's unfortunate...
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I scared him away :(
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:(
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On a side note, would anyone be interested in finding Zinzie for me?
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Maybe another mage could find him on his/her way to the forest. Maybe even some minor, irrelevant NPC one.
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Prob have to have a NPC, two mages are ignoring the voice and the other is currently soulless.
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A paladin could find him.

They wouldn't know if he was a mage. Would make it more interesting when they find out.
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Metronome said
A paladin could find him.They wouldn't know if he was a mage. Would make it more interesting when they find out.


Only an NPC one though, because the paladins have something in store for them. After THAT, they are free to do as they please.
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