A Naruto RP?

[Aeris]

Asuu said
@Nero: I think that our characters will be getting along splendidly, as both their personalities, combat specialities, and general characterness is so similar.

I had this character shoved in without use for a while and after reading yours, I was like

"Maaaaaaaaaan, theres no excuse to not use him"

The only thing I changed was the fact that previously, he had the Kaguya KG (The bone things), but it didn't appeal to me anymore. *shrug*

[Asuu]

I understand. It's no problemo.

I still need a co-GM to help me out with checking the characters and such. Is anyone interested?

- Yes, senseis are allowed. I think we may need two, if I go with the 4 genin a squad deal. One for each squad. And yes, bloodlines and clans outside of Konoha is allowed as well. Dblade, as long as you don't go OP with the hard-beetle armor thing, then I do not mind that type of character. Oh, and custom jutsu/clans are available, as I plan to implement my own custom-made jutsu (They will be already inscribed into jutsu scrolls of course. Kurai won't be creating them.). Oh, and custom clans are available as long as you allow me to go over them if they have a Kekkai Genkai.

I think I answered most of the questions there.

[Aeris]

So uh, it has been decided that Sharingan is unallowed in any shape or form? Players are allowed to play more than one character?

[Gokiburi7]

Man, this is going to be so awesome! I'm looking forward to seeing the other students and sensei..,

[Asuu]

Nero said
So uh, it has been decided that Sharingan is unallowed in any shape or form? Players are allowed to play than one character?

Considering we have a lot of players already, then I would prefer it if it was 1 character per player...

[Yog Sothoth]

do you want us to post our CS here or wait until the OOC?

[Asuu]

You can post it here. I'm a tad busy with some real-life stuff, as I'm writing a few essays and getting ready to send in a resume, so the OOC may be up later on tonight, or tomorrow.

[Makatsume Haru]

General Information

Name: Kagami Renka

Age: 13

Gender: Female

Physical Appearance:
She has light pink hair and blue eyes, she stands at 1.57 meters and has a slender body. Her hair is mostly straight, but two strands of it are made in a braid.

Clothing/Accessories: As seen in the image above, she usually wears a black blouse and a red skirt, she however, wears spats under it, so she doesn’t flash her panties. She usually wears her forehead protector as a necklace.

Personality: She is a girl who seems to be detached from the world around her. Her reactions are slow and almost always she gets what you’re saying after a minute you said it, she talks rather slowly and her eyes always seem to be defocused. Basically, she is a girl who lives life at her own pace and, sometimes, her family and friends get dragged along it. However, she knows when to continue at her own pace and when not to do so, since at school it seems she has some kind of interest in following and hearing what the teacher is saying, but she constantly asks for the teacher to repeat what he just said. In overall, she is a hardworking girl who needs to get faster. She, however, seems to have no problem at all with jutsus, but if you had followed her after school, you’d have find her practicing the hand seals for jutsus the teacher just taught in class with her notebook in her hand, restlessly.

Brief History: Not much can be said about her life, really. Her parents were hardworking and diligent ninjas, they went in missions together and spent lots of time together, they were the perfect ninja combo, understanding each other and supporting each other. They were real heroes in Renka’s eyes. However, Renka’s dad hurt his leg, rendering him unable to continue his duty as a ninja. So, he retired as well as her mother. Not out of frustration or anything, they just thought it was time to settle down and become a happy family. But now Renka wanted to grow up and become a great ninja, so her parents would be proud of her, or so she said, but she really just would like to find someone as her mother did and have a happy family, just as her mom.

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Combat/Chakra

Skills/Specialization: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu.

Apart from being somewhat skilled in ninjutsu (Due to rigorous training of it), she also knows how to handle herself in a hand-to-hand fight.
She is also known to be rather skilled with her hands, apart from ninjutsu, since she loves to cook and knows how to sew and knit.

Chakra Affinity: Water

Second Chakra Affinity: N/A

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Equipment

Tools/Weaponry: Basic ninja equipment (Shurikens, kunais, etc…) Smoke bombs. A needle and some thread, just in case it is ever needed. Since her jutsus are mostly based on water, she also carries around a canteen, filled with water.

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Jutsu Information

Bloodline: Kagami, Mostly water based Jutsus used to restrain.

Jutsu: Clone technique, Substitution Jutsu, Transformation Technique.

C Rank - Water Release: Gunshot (Tiger Seal): The user kneads chakra, and converts it into water, and then spits it out in the form of condensed balls. The high-speed water ball attack possesses just as much power to kill as an actual gunshot.

D rank - Water Restrain: Feet (Snake – Bird): A technique original from the Kagami clan, Renka’s father taught it to her. It is really simple, when water is touching the target’s feet, by using chakra, Renka manipulates the water and traps the feet of the target, making it impossible to move unless you have a great deal of strength.

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Here's my character, just tell me if there's need to change anything

[Asuu]

I like it! Accepted!

[Aeris]

Asuu said
Considering we have a lot of players already, then I would prefer it if it was 1 character per player...

Hrm, with this in mind, I might take Tsuyo away and send in another character, heh.

[Asuu]

I'm good with that.

[Raineh Daze]

The Resident Hyuuga

General Info

• Name: Hyuuga Ayaka


• Age: 16 (It's her birthday; so she was 15 up until graduation. :p)


• Gender: Female


• Physical Appearance: Courtesy of Rin. She's probably swapped the thing on her belt for the right symbol now. As expected of the Hyuuga, she's pale and has dark hair. Now, the bright red-slash-gold dress, on the other hand, is both eyecatching and utterly baffling.


• Clothing/Accessories: See the picture!
  [*]Personality: Cheerfully cocky, in a self-assured rather than overbearing way. Despite the demands stemming from position and familial obligation, she seems to have gotten through life without her spirit being broken. It's quite disconcerting to see a happy Hyuuga but there has to be at least one in the entire family. She'll meet her obligations properly... but don't expect her to get through them without a lot of grumbling, even if she isn't too bothered by the lot.
  Ayaka seems to find fighting pretty fun, though that's quite probably because nobody's lie has been on the line. Or maybe she'll end up finding that interesting, too?


• Brief History: Hyuuga, main branch heir. No kidnapping shenanigans or overbearing cousins here, at all. Her position has left her pretty isolated from most of Konoha's children, and she's not really had scope to do all that much. Failing to become a genin would have been unthinkable.

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Combat/Chakra

• Skills/Specialization: Taijutsu (Gentle Fist), poisoning bastards that won't fight like men.


• Chakra Affinity: Fire. Well, the Hyuuga are one of the great clans...


• Second Chakra Affinity: Non-existent?

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Equipment

• Tools/Weaponry: Those needles? She's been trying to find a way to emulate the juuken tricks from a distance... but it's not been going too well. On the other hand, poisoned needles are great against people who think that staying away from a Hyuuga is perfectly safe. Just a little dose of paralysis, and you can move in for the kill. Ah, senbon...
  She obviously has poison, too.

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Jutsu Information

• Bloodline: The Byakugan and its associated chakra-manipulation tricks.


• Jutsu: Standard academy fare, her specialisation is naturally in taijutsu.

I'm not really sure if she should have any of the specific jyuuken special skills, or just the basics of the style. Hmm.

[Asuu]

Accepted as well. If you want, you can incorporate them into your character as she grows, or you can do some now. I'm very flexible when it comes to characters. ^^

I sincerely hope that there's an even amount of players interested. Having too many would make the RP feel cluttered, which I want to avoid. I'm going to check through again.

[Raineh Daze]

Probably has the spinning thing; not so much the 'if this connects you are not going to be fighting properly' thing. XD

[Asuu]

Squad One

Nara, Kurai : Genin

Hyuuga, Ayaka : Genin

Helix, Nettaiya : Genin

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Squad Two

Kagami, Renka : Genin

-Nero's Character- : Genin

-Blank- : Genin

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This is what I have written down, currently. Tell me if you would like to be switched to another squad, or something.

[Raineh Daze]

Can you not parcel us out until we have all characters? :p

[Asuu]

Ah, no, it's mostly for organization sake. The actual teams won't be decided until the OOC's created.

[DaDrummer676]

Adding my character because everyone else is. I will finish his personality and history soon.

General Information

Name: Ryuto Ōkami

Age: 15

Gender: male

Physical Appearance: Ryuto stands at 5'8" which is pretty tall for his age. He has a scar on his chin, and there is usually a smirk or analytical look on his face.

Clothing/Accessories: Ryuto wears a pale green shirt and brown cargo shorts. His headband sits on his forehead. He wraps his arms and legs (and puts weights under the wrappings), and wears a pair of special black fingerless gloves. These gloves are made of special metal fibers, the metal is practically unbreakable, but also allows him to move his fingers normally. Ryuto sports two small ear piercings, a trademark of the Õkami clan.

Personality: Ryuto is a social and intelligent young man. He likes to make friends and likes to converse. He is also very smart. Ōkami is very observant and is good at assessing people and situations. He is also controlled by his emotions. Which can be a strength and a weakness. He will protect the people he loves, even if it means he has to be in harm's way. This also means that his anger can easily get the best of him. Ryuto is also very stubborn, any decision he makes seems to be set in stone. Even if he subconsciously knows knows it's the wrong one. Ōkami has a big heart, and always tries to do his best. The only time he isn't very outgoing or social is when he meets new people, because he has to assess them first. When he does decided that he wants to be your friend, it's like an inseparable bond.

Brief History: (Added a war in there just to make my character's backstory more interesting. I hope you don't mind) Ryuto was born the youngest of three. His parents were of high standing in their village. He had a brother and sister. Ryuto always looked up to his brother, Ando, and sister, Timiko. When the [insert war here] began, his brother went out to fight, along with his father. His mother took care of him, and his sister practiced her medical ninjutsu so she could help wounded soldiers. The only thing Ryuto did was practice, he wanted to be as good as his brother and father. Ōkami had trouble in his academy days, ninjutsu was not his greatest strength, an he had no affinity for genjutsu whatsoever. So, Ryuto spent all his time perfecting his taijutsu. This is where he truly shined, and was easily able to dominate his opponents if they had to fight hand to hand. This is when he created his own fighting style. It relies on his incredible speed and strength. He dodges and weaves, then strikes with immense power. Ryuto's performance and mentality took a heavy hit when two of family members were taken away from him. His father and brother were killed in the heat of battle against a squad of Kirigakure ninja. They both fought valiantly, but did not make it out alive, it was a devastating blow to Ryuto. Ryuto withdrew from his social life for a while, and tried to sort out his feelings. After a conciderable amount of moping around, he decided that he would make his father and brother proud. He and his sister practiced hard together, even though she was a chunin already. Ryuto secretly looked up to her, but would never let her know that.

Kato began training with his sister when he graduated the academy at 12. She teached his about his Kekkei Genkai. Kato was relieved to find that learning these techniques was way easier to accomplish than regular ninjutsu. Kato realized that he was really only skilled in taijutsu and fūinjutsu. Ōkami learned basic taijutsu and fūinjutsu Techniques with relative ease. His sister was way more skilled than him with fūinjutsu. He tried as hard as he could, and finally learned four fūinjutsu techniques. Ryuto really began shining as a student once he learned these techniques. Now, Ryuto is trying to perfect his taijutsu. His future plans are in the making. He plans to become a skilled and high ranked ninja, and make his family proud. Then, (secretly) he wants to kill the men who murdered his father and brother, if they are still alive that is.... This explains Rytuo's intense hate towards Kirigakure.

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Combat/Chakra

Skills/Specialization: Ryuto is a Taijutsu user, and is also skilled in the art of Fūinjutsu. Ryuto has incredible speed and strength, and uses a variety of seals to enhance his ability to fight in battle. His Kekkei Genkai makes him very hard to beat in close quarters combat.

Chakra Affinity: wind (undiscovered)

Second Chakra Affinity: None

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Equipment

Tools/Weaponry: Ryuto carries a variety of tools and weaponry to help him use his taijutsu to the fullest extent. He always uses his special gloves in combat. They are very strong, and have been shown to be able to break stones. He also has two seals, one on each of his hands. The one on his left hand holds twenty kunai and the one on his right hand holds twenty shuriken. In his pouch he has wire, smoke pellets, explosive tags, and bandages. Ryuto also has various seals on his body, these are his trump cards.

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Jutsu Information

Bloodline Limit: Kimigami no Chikara (Power of the Gods) is the Kekkei Genkai of the Ōkami clan. This Kekkei Genkai is for taijutsu users, which is why most of the Ōkami clan are masters of close quarter combat. Kirigami no Chikara gives the user the physical and mental abilities of ten men. So when they activate Kirigami no Chikara their mind and bodys become stronger. There are five levels. It is also noted that Kirigami no Chikara gives the user very high stamina and durability no matter what stage they are in.
Level 1: Strength of two men, mental abilities become very analytical, mental abilities stay the same through out every level. (this is where Ryuto is going to start out)
Level 2: Strength of four men.
Level 3: Strength of six men.
Level 4: Strength of eight men.
Level 5: Strength of ten men. (Parallel to Tsunade's strength)

Jutsu:
Academy techniques: Bunshin, Kawarimi, and Henge

Fighting Style: Endless Barrage: Ryuto attacks his opponent relentlessly with his amazing strength and speed by punching, elbowing, kicking, and dodging if needed. He claims that he doesn't stop until he lands a hit.

Generic Sealing Technique: Rank D: This technique allows Ryuto to seal and unseal objects, weapons, etc.

Kunai/Shuriken Cannon Seal: Rank D: Ryuto uses the seals on each of his hands to shoot (or use if needed) the kunai and shuriken stored there.

Revitalization Seal: Rank C: Ryuto stored chakra into this seal, and places it on his heart. Whenever he is in battle, he can use this seal to unleash a burst of chakra into his body.

Weight Seal: Rank E: Ryuto uses this seal on the weights placed on his arms and legs. Using the seals, each weight holds 1,000 pounds. When he takes off these weights he becomes much faster and stronger (classic Rock Lee).

The Great Shield Seal: Rank: D: Located on his right forearm is a seal. When he activates it, a huge shield attaches itself to Ryuto's arm. He uses this to block any ninjutsu attack that he knows he can't dodge.

[Asuu]

I have a few problems with the character, more specifically his KG.

For one, the more it advances the more it seems like an improved Sharingan, which we've decided not to go with. Secondly, the strength seems a bit overbearing as well. I do not mind the Kekkai Genkai giving him a lot more strength in exchange for speed, or something of equal value. It's just the bloodline that bothers me, that's all.

[DaDrummer676]

So then how do you suggest I fix it. I am open to all ideas. Now that I look at it, it does seem like an OP sharingan. I was trying to make it like the Eight Gates.