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This is a one-on-one RP between ClosetMonster and Popealessandros. If you are not us, don't post! And also, this will possible develop, but almost definitely have M/M in it so if you don't like, don't read! Thank you *Bows*


Here's what we got thus far I think -


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Name: Chall Heirdon

Race: Half-breed Feline Man Beast

Age: 32

Height: 5' 6”

Weight: 140 lbs

Hair: Strait, black, waist length with bangs the same length as the rest of the hair, and kept back into a thin low ponytail in the back.

Eyes: Emerald green with slitted pupils and a faint feline slant to them.

Skin: Mostly pale human flesh but on his lower legs and along his spine is soft sleek black feline fur.

Build: Naturally athletic(Note: His lower legs starting at the knees are feline, so he has the extra long feet that make it look like he's got an extra set of knees that bend the wrong way and he walks on his toes, which have retractable hooked claws at the ends. He also has semi retractable pointed finger nails. He has feline ears, black, that poke out from underneath his hair where human ears would be that stick a bit out from his head, and a sleek matching tail he tends to keep hanging down unless he's relaxed enough to show it. Then it peeks out of a slit in the back of his robes.)

Clothes: He wears standard apprentice robe with the mark of his master, a swallow, embroidered on a pocket over the left breast. The robes are plain, maroon, and fall almost all the way to the floor. They are kinda thick, but don't hinder movement too much, and attached to the back is a large hood with holes for his ears. Underneath the robe are simple black slacks and a light gray tunic of fine woven silk. It was a gift from his mother when he earned his apprenticeship, so he only really takes it off to sleep and to wash it.

Accessories: He keeps with him always a small pendant on a chain that is his power center. The chain is attached to a loop on the robes and he keeps the pendant tucked in a pocket on the right hip of the robes.

Powers/Skills(If Applicable): Because of his heritage he's got a close connection to nature. As such he excels at reading weather patterns and predicting rain or storm. He also has a strong grasp of nature magics and can use them for both healing and minor convenience spells. He has the potential to learn combat spells, but having never needed them, he has no experience in doing so. All of his mother's race are natural climbers due to living in the trees, so he has a natural aptitude for it.

General Personality: He has grown to have a very guarded nature and doesn't open up easily. Other than his family, he has never trusted anyone, even his master. He has a tendency to just to conclusions that would prove to be insulting to himself, but will begrudgingly apologize if proven wrong. He has a sharp tongue, but is quick to realize when he should hold it for his own safety. He seems very gruff, and closed off to the people around him, but underneath is a deep rooted love for nature, his family, and the innocents he seeks to aid with his status and magics.

Background: Chall was born to a Kirin(Feline beast humanoids) mother and human father, in a land where his kind had just recently been recognized as equal to humans. He was tormented by the local human and kirin children due to his mixed race, and not long after his 6th birthday, his father was killed by a drunken mob for making a kirin his wife. After his father's death Chall's mother moved to the small county of Sureil and took a job in the palace as a maid. There the court mage took notice of his natural talents but hesitated to broach the subject of helping him grow them. Not only because of his mixed race, but Chall got in regular fights with a few of the more racists children in town, as well as the close mended eldest son of the king himself.

After finally talking to Chall's mother about the matter, together they spoke at length with him on the subject, and after some convincing he agreed to give it a try. The testing took years, but around his 17th birthday Chall was accepted as the court mage's apprentice. The fights lessened after that point, but the prince took the boy's new position as more of an incentive to pick on him then a deterrent. His mother took a lover from among the palace staff, but after she become pregnant he left the palace to become a sailor. Chall's little brother was born with complications, and he lost his mother in the process. Chall now raises the boy alone, with a little help from the non-human staff inside the palace and is fiercly protective of the little one. He's now 13 years old and leaving the palace on his own from time to time, and when it comes time for Chall to leave on his mission he insists that he can take care of himself and sends his big brother off with a smile.

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Wren Autenberry, 40 yrs (thereabouts - seasons can lose their numbers when one is too busy to count them): 6'3", brown hair, brown eyes.
Dogs: (a Shepherd's dog, much in the same way a modern border collie might be, only without the breed name) Baxter (2) and Annie (6). Baxter's mother, Delta is at a neighboring farm, the breeding program of the village carefully tended by Old Man Jones, who has kept breeding records the past fifty six years.
Wren is a tall man, quiet and slow to move from one state of being to the next - mainly due to the fact he has lived his entire life around sheep which startle easily. He has a light beard but keeps it cut rather close. His hair is wavy and collar length and the upper half is kept off his brow by being tied behind his head and then braided. Despite the curl, however, it is more likely to clump and less to tangle and so he needn't keep it overly tended, which leads to something nearing laziness. Besides, he has none to impress outside of Annie and she would love him well enough if he were bald or as matted as the ewes just before shearing.
He is a broad shouldered man, with a long, loping stride and slim waist and hips, a man made for walking miles. His wont is to whistle or sing with a muted baritone, generally simple ballads and reels, with a particular love for songs which tell tales. It isn't unheard of for him to be called upon to sing when the village gets together for their dances. It also isn't unheard of for him to volunteer prior to being asked. Being one of the few older bachelors with established lands, home, and wealth, he is somewhat sought after and rather loathe to being tied down.
Despite wanting to escape the marital noose, Wren is rather giving of his time and energies. His calm demeanor is used often to soothe hurt beasts and he not only spins but also weaves the wools he gathers from his flock, gifting blankets to newborns and coverlets to newlyweds, as well as offering his shoulder to barn raising, field work, and any other such needful thing if he has the time.
Being a shepherd, he's almost infinitely patient and kind, but by the same token, quite set in his ways and unwilling to change for anyone. For this reason, he keeps his flock outside the village and lives in a stone cottage some ways out, where he needn't worry about company too often.

As for setting, I only can see his cottage - :) It seems to me, he has plenty of rolling hills and a good deal of exposed rock, much like the welsh countryside. If this is only his cottage and its surrounding area, then so be it. Or, if you'd rather something far more austere, then perhaps he'd be better served to have goats rather than sheep, a transition he could make easily.
Apart from physical setting, he can basically fit into just about any time period/genre – merely because I feel he's pretty flexible that way (he's either suited to his environment or he's one of those off-the-grid folk). So whatever your mage wishes to have, we'll give him, eh? If you want dragons, he'll just have to carry a long bow, I'd think, and perhaps have a larger dog in his mix. Otherwise, I suspect he carries a shepherd's staff/crook and some kind of projectile device, like a sling shot or a simple cross bow/gun/etc. dependent on the time we choose.


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The country has long been at peace with it's neighbors, but as of late the countries bordering on either side have had a stirring of old bad blood and a possible conflict is on the horizon. The marsh dwellers, a semi aquatic humanoid reptile people are training in force, and the humans from the country on the other side, who only a generation ago eradicated slavery of non human races is worried that it is for an invasion. Both sides have sent representatives to the peaceful country in an attempt to gain information about the others kingdom. In desperate desire for peace, the king sends scouts and some of his personal advisers out into the land to learn what they can from his own people's observations.

As an apprentice to the court mage, young Chall is sent to check with the magics and spirits of the land to divine what he can that way. While the peaceful country is racially diverse, it is not yet truly integrated and as he travels he runs afoul a group of racists and is attacked. He manages to flee with his life on to the lands of a local farmer where he hides from the mob.

This is where I can see them meeting, what do you think? We could start the story a bit before hand so we can get a feel of things.


Sorry if I made this a little too weird, but you said you likes surprises. Chall came out of nowhere. I was half way through his sheet when I realized he's not human :P And the whole slavery thing. . . It came out of nowhere too, but I needed to come up with a legit reason someone like Chall would be in such a rural town. By the way, his name is pronounced like Y'all, but with a Ch instead of a Y.

You were also wondering about your farm. I can see it a good mile or two out of town, but on a clear night from the top of a nearby hill you can maybe see the lights from the village in the distance? What you think?
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I think good! :)

Ch(Y)all is a marvelous character and the slavers/country-wide issues are a nice setting into which the story can remain close to the hearth or foray into the larger, more political arena. Verra nice.

Now then - just before is fine, or integrate that into the first posts as we set up for the first meeting. I'm all for allowing things to happen as they need to. Would you care to start and I shall follow your lead? Or would you rather I start and you can follow? I'd suspect we'd begin either at the farmer's, either with or without Mr. Autenberry in attendance. NPCs are glorious and there needn't be immediate interaction, nor does there have to be a break, depending on how things go. It's all the same to me.
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I have a post in my head, so I'll guess I'll start and you can follow :P Seeing that you approved was all I needed for the post to explode into my mind like a firecracker :P I should go write that now *Grin*
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There we go, and post up!
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That is an absolutely GRAND post and I shall return to this and get you a response when I've had some sleep after a long week. :) A feline-like mage. Very nice twist!

And, in addition, it has been many months since I've written in first person, so please forgive any tense drops I happen to do.
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:) I took some advantage over your character - his state. However, please feel free to yelp, "NO! He's awake HERE!" and I shall simply take back it all and use what I have as a directional pointer. I'm afraid introduction of character seemed to take some time and I'm quite capable of doing it all without Chall in the picture, leaving it down to just a simple meeting of Harcourt and Chall.

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Actually, I may have really taken advantage of your character in the interest of going somewhere with an unconscious kitty boy. Please, do let me know if you'd like it stopped elsewhere. I'm afraid I let it take me for a ride. My posts aren't generally half so long, nor as presumptuous. (*L* I hope!)
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It's perfectly alright. I enjoy long posts, and as long as I feel my rights were shown the proper respect, welcome them openly. There was no presumption. He's exhausted, wounded, and asleep when you found him, and you took no direct control other than saying she added a little something to help him sleep with her healing spell. I don't mind that either :P

You write much in the manner of Po, and while I am a fan of his work, at times I did have to go back and clarify things here and there, and I've read the post in it's entirety twice through. From my understanding your man has examined Chall, but has not noticed his non-human features, but the woman's statements. Also by her words I gather that Chall was attacked by some local rich family/group/something of the like, and that the safety of the cottage beyond a certain point is not assured. Am I reading that correctly?

I know it has been a day since yer post, and I'm sorry that it's taken me this long to read it. The past 3 days were the only one this month I and my co-author had free to work on our collab novel. He's an Aussie, and we plan on calling it a "Cross Seas Aussie American Original" heheh. I should have warned you, and all my partners that I would be unable to respond for a while. I spent all day trying to get caught up, but between work, and being bombarded with cats, I'm only 80% caught up. You and 2 others will have your responses up tomorrow, because I was working from the oldest posts so those who have been waiting the longest got first attention. Yer next on the list, followed by Raafling, then iKo99. :P Then I'll start all over again :P *Thinks* I have 15 RPs going on. . .I am so happy! Anyways, I'll have a response up some time tomorrow, and after I'm all caught up, you shouldn't have to wait so long ever again!

G'night!
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Well, I'd love to know who this Po is, as I'm not entirely sure who Po is (that name only? Last name, first name? One would think it was a rather unusual name, but I hate to assume like that) but I will try and clean things up so they are easier to read.

So your understanding that Wren has examined Chall and hasn't taken note of his non-human characteristics is true. The whys are probably more tied in to the fact I believe he is well traveled and to consider Chall as anything but the unconscious one in need of healing would be to somehow not be who Wren is. I'd have to say it is a personality characteristic, a certain bit of blindness to the differences of people, which seems important. However, if it seems so out of character for anyone to be capable of that, then I can rethink it and redo it. I find it difficult to play with a character I don't believe in, and to think of him as incapable of this would make him a difficult person to trust in as opposite of your character. It really would be fairly easy to redo, so let me know.

As for the others (rich family/group/something) - heck, sounds good. I was playing off of a group of people some distance away, hanging at a fire. Whatever further direction you want to give it, I'll build off of that as well. In other words, please feel free to take it wherever you feel it is going. I didn't want to throw out the possibility of having someone show up looking for him, because you'd put that in already. Ignoring it would be silly.

Also - feel free to take your time. I'm doing the same, oldest to first, and some days don't get home until seven or eight at night - time enough to make dinner, feed dogs and other necessary mouths, then get to bed m'self to do it all over again the next day. I'm sure I'll trail further behind than you will - so I'd have no right to complain. :) So no worries on wait time, kay?

Sleep well and enjoy your RPs! :) It's always nice to have a full plate.
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No, keep you style, I enjoy it :P And Po is Edgar Allen Po, a famous author.

I was just wondering if he noticed, and by your response, yes he did. I'm not asking for you to change him or his personality in any way, but a simple nod outside his personal perceptions, like feeling through the fur on his legs or checking behind the furry ears, would have let me know that he examined him more thoroughly than it seemed and that my guy now has his hood back and/or his robes off. It's good things for me to know before my posts so I can have him either wondering where his robe is, and/or a bit on edge that his in-human features are exposed now. Do you understand what I I am looking for? No need to change yer guy, but in the world outside her perceptions a little more note on the interactions would be very helpful.

Thanks for your support, I will be working on my reply now. I hope it's at least half as entertaining as yours :P
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Ah! Poe! Gotcha :) Yes, he is quite fun to read, isn't he? Still - not so good if you have to reread often.

As for the hoodishness/clothesishness - recognition of the traits, I see your point. If you want anything in particular noted I will always throw that into the post at a poke. However, feel free to make up coverings or not - assumptions, while after everything is settled more securely, can be frustrating, are also necessary and I will almost always run with whatever you give me. If you had wanted to play him out like he woke and wasn't sure if anyone noted his features, that would be interesting. Likewise, it would be interesting for him to be in the open and worried, or in the open and feeling he is safe. Whatever direction you wanted to take would influence where I'd go. If I haven't noted it, it's open for interpretation as you don't seem to be someone who'd say "And he woke with his hair tied to the bed and his arms painted with sigils - who the heck had he fallen in with?" sort of bender. ;) So please, fill in any blanks. If I had thought it important, I'd have put it in. Everything else is fluid.

Also - lots of wait there. We've been hit by the flu here (or hit again) and muses don't stand up well to not feeling tip top.
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I do hope the flu hasn't decided to take you into the afterlife. Not complaining, but I am a little worried for your health at this point :P Just drop off a ping here to let me know you're okay?
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I've managed to come out of it okay, I think. :) Now it is just work and such. I've been working at keeping up with new information and have taken on a class as well which is taking some work. But, I do try and get a day to myself once a week or so in which I can do some catch up. :)
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Oki doki, no rush, I'm just glad you're okay *Grin*
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Just fine! And you'll have to refresh that last post, because it needed some serious tweaking. Eek!

:) I hadn't thought it possible, considering how I'd created Wren, but Chall had managed to get on Wren's nerves. Hee hee. Very well done!
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Heheh. I was having some thoughts. I think that the event that binds these two together should happen at the pond. Since magics are going to be taking place, and they will both be there, I can see maybe an interruption by the locals, either hostile or non hostile.

Also, I think the idea of his magic flexing when he's upset, I was kinda thinking the same thing, but for the sake of the dog's responses I'm thinking more of a chemical response. In other words, he lets of some sort of scent that marks him as hostile when he's upset.

I was also thinking, that maybe at some point in the future, Either the nice old lady or Chall himself (Or both) could explain how magic is just a natural part of Chall. Wren's way of seeing magic as unnatural sounds like something fun for Chall to deal with eventually :P

Yeah, just some thoughts. I may not get to my response tonight, in fact I'm sure of it, HOWEVER! I am sure I will get it up tomorrow! So, look forward to it :P
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*L* Well, let's just see where the story takes us. If Wren's erroneous beliefs about Chall's magic becomes something important, than I'm sure it'll be a point of interest. As will all of the other things you've mentioned. It's never a bad thing to have an undercurrent of misunderstanding to make a connection fractious and fraught with drama.

Take your time with the response. I think I'll have time tomorrow, so I may even be able to respond. Which is always nice. :)
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Post up! Finally! So sorry :P I actually kept missing the fact that you posted :P *Bows* So sorry, I hope you like it :P
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Random status check: Are you enjoying the RP thus far? Anything you'd like to see more of? Less of? Ideas for future events?
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Please forgive the silence... things got crazy and I will not be free for another week and a half.
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M'kay, thanks for letting me know. I will wait :P
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