[OOC] Kingdom Hearts: Fractured

[Noel]

Carrotblade! Better hope there aren't any horse heartless or you might lose half of it...

Heh, thats just fine for the RP

[Dblade26]

Yeah, I completely love that the back half of the blade that'd be blunt on most Keyblades has a carrot-blade on the back

[Dusk]

Holy snap crackle and pop, look at this bootiful thing.

Are you guys still accepting?

[Noel]

If the character adds well to the current cast she could take one more she guesses.

[Dusk]

Sweet~ I'll get to reading, then ^^

[Noel]

Feel free to ask here or shoot her a PM if you have any questions.

[Dusk]

The Prism

Name: Has forgotten any name they once held. Calls itself the Prism, or Priz.

Alias/Title: "That Weird Guy in the Cloak" (AKA, No actual titles yet)

Race: Fractured

Age: Appears to be about 24

Appearance

While retaining a humanoid appearance, Priz's body is covered in patches of a dense, semi-transparent crystal. This crystal is most condensed around its forearms and hands, calves and feet, and the right side of its face. The largest area of skin exists on Priz's form on its upper chest. Priz tends to hide such obvious deformities with a white cloak, loose black pants, and bandages. Priz has a bright orange eye, and bluish hair with white areas.

Weapon Appearance: Priz uses long claws which extend from its fingertips, as well as blades which emerge from the soles of its feet (think ice skates).

Combat Abilities: Priz, with the aid of the claws and skates, is a very graceful and fluid fighter. Priz makes it a point to move fast, and hit faster. By using the power of Ice, Priz is able to glide across most surfaces with the skates, enabling quick maneuvers to be easily achieved. The claws can be charged with Light, allowing the Fractured to shoot off moderately powerful blasts, or deliver sharper hits. Of course, the downside to all of this is that when using such power, the sporadic energy can overcharge and even crack Priz's limbs, so they makes it a point to use such magic sparingly. Instead, they uses Ice to send forth jagged icicles, create treacherous terrain, and create small creations of Ice to enhance mobility (ramps, small pillars/poles).

Non-Combat Abilities: With the eye that was taken when its previous self was turned into a Fractured, Priz can see wavelengths of light normally invisible, as well as disturbances in said Light more acutely (i.e. If a Heartless is possessing/hiding in an object, Priz can see it as long as it's relatively nearby). It's also not bad at ice sculpting.

Personality: The Prism is an incredibly paranoid individual. It constantly looks over its shoulder, and wonders just when its time will be up. This is a feeling (or rather, a shadow of one) induced from the scattered state of its mind, and the violence they experienced shortly after "birth". While this paranoia doesn't usually result in aggressive behavior, it does cause Priz to be incredibly uneasy around humans, bolting at the slightest sign of violence. However, if backed into a corner, Priz can get hysterical and lash out rather brutally.

If one manages to actually convince it that they mean no harm, and that is a pretty big feat, Priz will be a timid friend and a reliable ally. As a side note, Priz doesn't identify with a gender, as they feel they are meant for humans, even though its appearance is notably male.

History:
In the light of the Broken Center, just a few days after the Fracturing, a lithe form had appeared in a now-abandoned park. It's body was covered in crystal, some parts even completely composed of it, and it looked absolutely terrified. Once it began going around town, trying to understand what exactly happened, to understand whatever it was...others were springing up everywhere, different kinds of monsters with different origins. And the people...the people hated them all. Some chased after the figure, the poor, lonely figure. It outran them, but their spells bit into it, and sent it skittering into the alleyways.

After a few weeks of stealthy wandering, the figure understood. Partially, at least. It wasn't alone, as there were others. Well, it thought so, at least, seeing as they didn't attack it. They were chaotic, though, and unpredictable, and not fitting company for it. This revelation didn't fix what seemed like empty spaces on its heart. After concluding that it wasn't human, the figure decided to take on a non-human name identity. It would call itself The Prism, after the crystalline structures adorning its body. It would be another month of attacks and running before The Prism, or Priz, as it sometimes referred to itself, could find adequate clothing to hide the deformities caused by the Light, and be able to hide from the humans. Even among them, if they was careful.

From that point on, it was just down to running about Luce, just trying to survive. That's been the objective for six months, and Priz doesn't see a reason to change it.

Reputation: Priz drifts, and has no notability when they are covered up. People tend to attack on sight, otherwise.

Song:(A song for your character, because why not? Optional.)

[Noel]

Alright so, a few things.

Hir/zie? Assume you're going for a non-gendered he/his thing but... it sounds awkward and jarring. If you dont want to assign gender at all you could use something like its or their which sounds a little less awkward.

Shes mentioned this before, but no one really knows what fractured are yet. Not even fractured themselves. Sentient ones would have something like a feeling of being fundamentally damaged or incomplete but not exactly know why.

Final thing to bring up... Don't want to be rude or anything but... image quality. Its, well, very rough. Shes a very visual person so that kind of thing is pretty grating to her. She could try and give some places to find images if you want

Soo anywho, aside from those nitpicks it looks fine to her. If those could be fixed it'd be all good

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Also Dblade, you should edit your post on the CS thread to ahve your characters appearance.

[Dusk]

There we are, made the fixes. Sorry about the image, it's the third thing I'v ever done, so you aren't being rude at all. Just trying to get in as much practice so they aren't so bad over time lol.

[Noel]

Alrighty, looks fine now. You can put that up in the cs thread and she'll add it to the list.

[Dblade26]

Right, got a post up and edited Morph's CS so that his picture is there now.

[Imperfectionist]

:) I guess it's my turn again. I'll see what I can come up with.

[All_The_Science]

I have faith in you squire!

[Noel]

Xion wants posts. Do not disappoint this face!

[KiltmanBagz]

SO CUUUUUUTE!!!!! I'll definitely get something up by Monday ( I'd do it now But I have to wake up at 4 in the morning to work >.< So going to bed now would be advised )

[Imperfectionist]

Shitty post is shitty, but busy Impy is too busy to think up how the column of light would affect Bob and Karen... I'll keep thinking about it. Next post, definitely.

[All_The_Science]

Hey a post is always better than no post. And besides, it's pretty entertaining to read Karob's constant back and forth conversations.

[Imperfectionist]

They're fun to write as well. Coming up with who would say each thing, making it waver between detailed and entirely vague, stuff like that. It's hard to imagine how the mind of such a creature would work.

[Noel]

Kiiilt. waiting on you

[KiltmanBagz]

Sorrrryyyyyy!!!! life pulled shenanigans. Post upcoming asap!!!!

EDIT

Made a post, hope it's okay!