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I've been awake for a while (being UK based) but I'm absolutely shattered, barely a wink of sleep last night and as AnnaBeth knows, didn't get home until the early hours of the morning.
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I've been thrashed all week, only two days this week I didn't clock out with at least 17 hours.
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Dayum.

note: I finally posted
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Yeah, and this is my first day off in two weeks. Whoop, whoop. God, I slept for twelve hours.

And yay. I shall post soon. Catching up on some replies, I think I have one more and then this one.
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I'm about to post right now. I just gotta get my musical inspiration going.
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So, I'm smoking Arik out of his current body. I need a change, and what's a demon without perks!

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He is a cutie.
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Gonna post this afternoon once I've gone out and done chores and had lunch. But I'm lacking motivation to get moving lol

Also so looking forward to having mika see arik's new meat suit lol!

EDIT: posted!
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I'll post tomorrow as I'm so tired i can't think straight and i can feel a headache coming on from tiredness
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Also, let's be careful with overpowering people...like with weapons, and abilities. It makes things so much less manageable (and true to Supernatural) that way.


Dimidium only has what he has because his role is supposed to be more like Cas (messenger warrior) but his attitude is a lot different. Just wanna make that clear before you realize my weapons might be a bit OP for a common hunter.
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@RokkuHoshi I have a few statements and questions for you. I'm just going to list them in number format.

1.) Your character is Half Angel and Half Demon, correct? If that is the case, he would be classfied under the same catogory as my character, A Nephilim.

2.) Be honest with this one, I don't like someone who lies. Have you ever watched Supernatural?

3.) There is no special abilities to a Demon Dagger, they don't have the same properties as a Angel blade.

4.) As for you having an Angel Sword, at this point in the RP there is no plausible way to have one. The Angel blade hasn't been introduced until season 8, and we are still on season 5. As for aquiring the Angel Sword, it's not that easy due to the fact that the Grigori are the ones that wield them. And if memory serves when Sam, Dan and Castiel facd the Grigori it almost kiled them, it was killed by a surprise attack.

5.) On to the half of Exclabiur bit, it hasn't been even introduced yet, the sword isn't brought in the story yet. At this point, it still sits in the stone, and Dean has not blown it up yet. So that is a No Go.

6.) As for your history, there is no plausible way to grow up as a Human Orphan. Demons and Angels have to posess a body to live in it. Demons ca do it at will, and Angels have to get invited in. Also, when you possess a body, it does not age, so even if you possessed a child's body it would not grow and mature. You'd be stuck in that body until you move on to an older body.

Fix these things, and then PM me the new and revised version and we will go from there. Thank you kindly. Also, if I sounded like a dick, I am sorry, that's not how I wanted to sound.
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Submitted Josiah's CS

I'll drop a post tomorrow.
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@RokkuHoshi I have a few statements and questions for you. I'm just going to list them in number format.

Alright, let's answer your problems.
1.) Your character is Half Angel and Half Demon, correct? If that is the case, he would be classfied under the same catogory as my character, A Nephilim.


Be that as it may, in the show, from what I remember, they refer to both the half-demon boy and half-angel children as Nephilim. I could label him as one.

2.) Be honest with this one, I don't like someone who lies. Have you ever watched Supernatural?


Yes, I have.

3.) There is no special abilities to a Demon Dagger, they don't have the same properties as a Angel blade.


Not true. Demon daggers can kill Demons but not Angels. That has been shown a multitude of times.

4.) As for you having an Angel Sword, at this point in the RP there is no plausible way to have one. The Angel blade hasn't been introduced until season 8, and we are still on season 5. As for acquiring the Angel Sword, it's not that easy due to the fact that the Grigori are the ones that wield them. And if memory serves when Sam, Dan and Castiel faced the Grigori it almost killed them, it was killed by a surprise attack.


And who's to say the angel that came to visit young Dimidium wasn't a Grigori?

5.) On to the half of Excalibur bit, it hasn't been even introduced yet, the sword isn't brought in the story yet. At this point, it still sits in the stone, and Dean has not blown it up yet. So that is a No Go.


It doesn't have to be Excalibur exactly. It could be another sword that was forged in the blood of a dragon. I just can't think of any others.

6.) As for your history, there is no plausible way to grow up as a Human Orphan. Demons and Angels have to posess a body to live in it. Demons ca do it at will, and Angels have to get invited in. Also, when you possess a body, it does not age, so even if you possessed a child's body it would not grow and mature. You'd be stuck in that body until you move on to an older body.


His mother was an angel who lost her grace. Shortly after finding it again, she was possessed by a demon too strong for her to fight off. She wasn't gonna get help from Heaven so she did what she could. The demon left, getting bored with her, and she was pregnant. Soon after, she gave birth. Being unable to raise him herself, she put him in an orphanage. A series of unfortunate events, if I must say so myself.

Fix these things, and then PM me the new and revised version and we will go from there. Thank you kindly. Also, if I sounded like a dick, I am sorry, that's not how I wanted to sound.


You're not the first to question my character. This is after changing the original story behind his parents twice.
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5.) On to the half of Exclabiur bit, it hasn't been even introduced yet, the sword isn't brought in the story yet. At this point, it still sits in the stone, and Dean has not blown it up yet. So that is a No Go.


Actually, it is not Excalibur in the show but another sword like it. Excalibur is mentioned, though.
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Finally posted, now im gonna go to bed
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@RokkuHoshi
1.) A Nephilim it is.

2.) What's seasons have you watched?

3.) The Demon Killing Knife also known Ruby's Knife isn't even a demon dagger, the knife was made by the Kurds and is one of a kind. We don't even know how ruby came across it. So that is a NO-GO and I will state as I did before. Demon Knives have no special abliities.

4.) If you did not read what I said before I will say it again. Sam(Seasoned Hunter), Dean(Seasoned Hunter), and Castiel (Powerful Angel) were almost killed by a Grigori. So why do you think that your character could do this?

5.) But you said it was Excalibur. Refer to your CS, also, there has not been in mention of swords forged by dragons. As of right now, we don't even know that Dragon's exist. So once again that is a NO-GO.

6.) Okay, first things, first it's time to shake ground in the 8th round. It's physically impossible for an Angel and a Demon to inhabit the same Vessal/Meat Suit. If a lady is already prego, and become in habited by an Angel or Demon it can not make the baby an Angel or Demon. Now if the lady was possessed by a Demon and a demon sexs it up it is possible but it's highly unlikely that the baby will become half Angel or Demon. The only thing that has proven that it's possible is the Anti-Christ, and that was a plot hole from hell. (No pun intended.) So once more I will say that is a NO-GO.

In short, this character is denied. Now I am willing to work with you on fixing this but you have to
stop seeing what you want to see in my review. If it continues I will ask you to leave.

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That collabration post is a straight up no go. That was just conversation nothing else. You guys need to step your game up. That is stuff you'd see in the free roleplay section. Last time I checked this was is the Casual section. Step your game up, or I'll kindly have to ask you to leave. I have full support of my GM on this subject. I don't want to force you guys to leave but if you don't step up, I will have to. Please don't make me do that.
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@KazeXDZ@Belwicket Are you guys like close friends or? You don't have to answer. Like me and Annabeth iare a couple.
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I will drop a post first thing in the morning after my run. I've had a lot going on lately, including a small emotional break down. So, bear with me. <3
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@Amphibious AssualtKaze and I are friends. Rokku is my twin brother.

You seem to be getting your facts mixed up. on his CS, though. In the episode that they mention excalibur, they do talk about dragons. They state that there are very few, if any, dragons left living. Plus, I do believe Dean does kill a dragon in that episode. Kaze says 2. He may be dyslexic, but Kaze has an eidetic memory.

The demon daggers that a lot of them carry can be used to kill other demons.

Rokku and I are both currently working on Season 10 and have both watched every season prior.

We see multiple angels with the swords, not all of them are grigori.

As for his backstory, it was not a human vessel they shared. He had me help him with it so I can tell you for sure the body the demon possessed was the angel's body.

As for our collab post, it was a quick way to get both of our characters into the story. Our normal posts won't be like that.
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