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Character Theme - A stranger I remain


[Character is inspired by Neferpitou from Hunter x Hunter, because I like this character. :D]
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Name: Yakoul Kakariko

Alias: The Empress' pet

Age: 56

Gender: Not sure

Sexuality: Zoophile, Necrophiliac

Rank: Jounin/Empress' personal bodyguard

Personality: On a typical empire day, Yakoul is barely any different from a cat - it is curious beyond belief and will always ask awkward questions to others, probably because it refuses to incorporate social norms. Many think Yakoul is annoying, though very few dare to say it, not because it is rather high placed and relatively strong. It's mostly because it takes pleasure in eating individuals while having erotic scenes with them. Yet even with these deviance, no one has even been able te determine what sex this THING is. In combat it lets itself go completely, enjoying every second of playing with its food before devouring it. It makes it cry in joy when it is forced to hunt down rebels, only to disembowel them as it finds them, letting the rebel's partner run away in order to hunt it down a little more. Man, woman or child, it doesn't matter, they're all wasted meat when they're rebels or neutrals. If they not with the empress, they're against her after all. Yakoul is sadistic, but will do its best to defeat the opponent quickly in order to play with them a bit before devouring them alive.
Many would summarize Yakoul as "gullible, distracting and creepy".

Yakoul is completely devoted to the empress, as she gave it a purpose. It didn't realize how lost it was until it met the empress, wandering the world and devouring everything it saw in its path. It was meaningless, but all this oppression was severed when that woman came into its life. No more berserk, no more senseless violence. Now it was all justified, everything is done for the empress, all that Yakoul could do was righteous as long as it was for the empress. Due to this mindset, Yakoul wouldn't hesitate to kill off a close friend or battle colleague just because the empire had wanted it. Yakoul is terrified of being left alone without purpose and would rather die than to have the empress fall from the throne. Even if the empress were to lie about her intentions, it should still remain loyal. But it does beg the question, up to what point Yakoul would tolerate complicated schemes from the empress?

Affiliation: The Empire

History/Background: Yakoul's story begins where all of its kind once came, Ryuchi cave. Though it was only born there, it still has some recollection of its location and what secrets it hid. But other than that, it had no major role in its life. When it was a teen, it never attended village organizations and academies, Yakoul was its own soldier and learned to destroy on its own. Not that is was that hard for it seeing what abilities it inherited during its teenage years. When it was nearing adulthood, it already began terrorizing small populations for the heck of it and also get the typical late night feast. It was fun and it had no moral basis to recognize right from wrong as many people from the Ryuchi cave dire early due to mobs rebelling against them. Yakoul's parents remain a mystery to the creature as it cannot remember a single moment of it being with them. Not that it really bothered Yakoul, as long as it had food and people to hunt down.

As a young adult, it discovered the pleasures of money and what benefits it brought in larger cities. As such, Yakoul went into black market missions where it usually went off to kill some somewhat wealthy family or deliver "special packages". Those packages ha the smell of the blood of the people Yakoul had killed the day before but that did not matter, as long as the money could buy luxury, all was good. Some conflicts popped, and Yakoul wasn't aware of what kind of war was going on, whether the empire was already in power or there were still trivial wars between villages. Its ignorance brought it bliss and that would last fo the rest of its life.

It would only be when it reached a certain level of professionalism in combat, after years of underground work, that Yakoul would be first confronted with the empire's soldiers. It was magnificent, the chaos they brought, the quick deaths, the food everywhere. Yakoul's mission was to kill one of those soldiers as some form of sabotage mission and despite its awe feelings toward the moment, it did want its money. Upon attacking, the much stronger soldiers of the empire subdued the monster and prepared its execution. If it weren't for a more cultivated officer who recognized the natural chakra being absorbed by Yakoul's body, the cat monster would be decapitated. Its powers would be more than useful to them, more useful than having her dead.
Though Yakoul was spared, it stayed hostile toward all forms of authority due to it never having a commander before other than people giving it jobs to do. Despite allowing Yakoul to develop its already well enforced abilities it had trained throughout the years while maintaining its youth, it kept "accidentally" gravely wounding shinobi trainers. It would only be when confronted to the empress for the first time that everything changed for Yakoul. Just a few word exchanged made it realize how sublime her being was. Yakoul was in love, though not romantically, but rather obsessed with that the empress could say about this world and the goal she had. It made Yakoul realize what purpose was. Purpose was the thing it was searching for all this time during its massacres. Behind all these well-beings and luxuries, it just wanted a goal to fulfill. Now it had found it, do anything to please this wonderful being, a being far superior than anything it had killed or even Yakoul itself.
Its psychotic devotion quickly changed its behavior toward its colleagues, obeying without a single complaint as for Yakoul, they were the words of the empress. This loyalty and its terrifying abilities coupled with a horrifying obsession to kill them enemy allowed it to gain ranks quickly until the empress took notice of Yakoul. The Empress could easily see how desperately devoted this creature was and how it acted like a pet more than anything. It didn't take long for Yakoul to become one of her personal bodyguards, the kind that would serve as human shield against a thousand spears if need be. Nothing could change Yakoul's ideals, everything that didn't obey the empire had to join them or die atrociously. Live or Die, to Yakoul, only the empress had the power to decide who gets to live and who doesn't.

Organization: N/A

Tools/Weapons:
Claws: Yakoul's claws are quite long and sharp but their greatest aspect is their durability. Indeed, when used in precise strikes, they can easily slash through strong armors and still mildly damage flesh behind it. So if left unprotected, they can very easily severed members and deliver fatal shots without a problem.

Tail: Another part of its body that serves as a weapon. It can be controlled as if it were some extra member and can even be used to strangle others. It is actually quite strong on its own, capable of lifting individuals up while Yakoul could not do this with its own arms. When in final sage transformation, the tip of its tail become sharp with a pointed end, serving as an extra blade along with its claws.

Stomach container: Yakoul uses its stomach to contain multiple weapons and such. They're not really in there, it is just a well hidden genereic seal. It makes basic ninja tools spawn from its insides and come out in a rather elegant manner.

Chakra Nature: Fire - Wind ; Scorch

Kekkei Genkai: Juugo's Clan Kekkei Genkai
As this is most likely one of the most unstable abilities in the Naruto universe, a few things must be cleared out about it regarding Yakoul's usage of the ability. Because Yakoul has lived so long with it and has been trained in an environment full of powerful shinobi, most of the time in the empire, Yakoul controls most of it quite well. This ability is the sole reason why this creature is nearly immortal, never to grow old as it uses its natural energy to keep the host young forever. However it doesn't mean it cannot die from any other medium than age.
As its basic description says, it is the ability to passively absorb natural energy in a continuous way which may overwhelm the user and make them go beserk. This isn't entirely false for Yakoul, however unlike younger Juugo clan users, it won't attack allies and will simply express its never ending desire to kill and possibly even be killed for the fun of it. This makes it impossible for non-sage sensors to detect this monster as well as it makes it a chore for Sharingan users to perfectly analyze this user. Natural energy also gives odd gifts to users as well, for example some can speak to animals, but Yakoul suffers from a permanent animal-like transformation. This is the reason why it has cat ears and a cat tail and sometimes some cat-like behaviors.
Regarding sage transformation, it severely cuts down agility due to metamorphosis but it exchanges with extremely high physical strength. It enables high resistance to pain and ability to easily recover from hits. The first and second transformation don't have many differences other than radical changes un appearance and behavior, the tail would gain a sharp blade at the very tip.

Scorch release
This one needs some explaining otherwise it is more than overpowered. It doesn't use magical fireballs to kill anything it touches no matter what happens. No, instead it is used as a mix of wind and fire just like Kakuzu would use when fusing fire and wind, and not make an entirely new element. It isn't inherited either but due to Yakoul's powerful use of both fire (natural element) and wind (gained element), such usage can be classed as a pseudo-Kekkei Genkai. It is mainly passive and not used as an actively offensive maneuver unlike Sage transformation. It actually relies on sage transformation to function properly.

Skills: +Speed and agility are top tier, agility wise it may very well be one of the best in the world, if not the best.
+Capable of using multiple forms of jutsu, albeit in different intensities, but it is rare to have such diversity in soldiers. Physical nintaijutsu remain dominant however.
+Very high strength in sage transformation
+Overhelming levels of chakra due to constant natural energy absorption.
+Despite having somewhat average intelligence, its experience make it hard to trick and tactics dont often work on it unless they are precise to a certain degree



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Sorry for the double post but if anyone is interested to hear my point of view on the matter regarding Ra (since many people are doing this), it feels as though it's the kind of character you simply have to associate the sentence "Easier said than done" regarding weakness.
I'm pretty ure any AoE Jutsu would finish off Tendo (Deva path Pain) rather easily as long as it's within the five second cooldown. But yeah, even by being creative this is hardly possible without specific tools to handle the situation. Especially if the user is skilled.

I personally do not like genjutsu, but I don't mind it either. But I do think it's ridiculously OP when used by skilled users like Tuuj. That said, anything can be OP if one is skilled enough with the technique.
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Ra won't be fighting anyone directly, so it's nothing to worry about anymore.

Here's a list of currently accepted characters. So look here or at the OP to see if your character has been accepted. Those with WIP temps make sure to post them again so I can see them and accept them. Also I've added a new section regarding rules of engagement.

Rebels

Tsukiko Yamamoto

Kaede Hyuga

Karela Yatoma

Natsumi Uchiha

Senju Arano

Empire

Izari Turimora

Hyakune su Jikankizami, Ra

Shuya Hieantayatu

Remi Mitarashi

Yakoul Kakariko

Switzerland (Neutral)

Ryozan Tanzo

Uchiha Sayaka

Seijuro Kizaru Nandate

Taho
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Woo hoo!
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I will hopefully have my char done in the next couple days.

Having issues getting any good inspiration for jutsu.
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Izari is ready to kill some nameless shinobi with his Tentacles of Horror techniques
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Let's team up and exterminate all those who use the empress' name in vain. By that I mean all the fodder we can find.
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Yes! Death to cannon fodder that dares to oppose the Empress. I feel kinda bad for those nameless faces though...
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Personally, I'd much rather kill those no good neutrals who do nothing but run around. They're free, they're even worse than the rebels who are oppressed by their ideology! The Swiss must fall and be devoured, leaving no traces behind!
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Hmm, you make a very good case, but should we oppress them as well, they may join the rebels. I say offer them a chance to choose their allegiance, then slaughter them right then and there should they make the wrong choice. Or...give them to Ra or Yakoul...
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Savato said
Personally, I'd much rather kill those no good neutrals who do nothing but run around. They're free, they're even worse than the rebels who are oppressed by their ideology! The Swiss must fall and be devoured, leaving no traces behind!

Leave the Swiss! Without them, we won't have their watches or cheese!
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Thank you, Yosh, at least someone said what was needed.

SoleAccord said
I don't want people to feel singled out, nor a shitstorm to brew because two players have disagreements.If you feel something's unjust, then you're better off telling the leader (Pierce) or co-lead (me) in a pm to spare a possible meltdown. Whether I agree or not, it's easier on us so we don't have to deal with one big argument in the OOC. You have your 'rights' but exercise them while thinking of fallout next time. You can have your opinion on characters, and as I said we were already approached by someone else about this template and would've gotten it under control soon. Just discuss it in private to the people who can fix it instead of shining a huge spotlight on their eyes while you break their kneecaps.


I was scrutinized for having like... 4 custom Genjutsu that had simple application methods. Tuuj comes along with Ra an her arsenal of spammable Genjutsu that are applied with a literal wave of her hand and gets accepted. Also I was told I cannot layer custom Genjutsu? Can I hope to see to it that our GM staff is fair here and will impose the same limitation on Ra, who is MUCH more dangerous than Seijuro in terms of the Genjutsu department?
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Yeah, they'll have five seconds to choose otherwise they will be the the cheese for tonight's appetizers!

Don't forget the chocolate, Phobos!

It feels as though Genjutsu is aways subject to controversy. Because ever since Itachi came along, Genjutsu has been retarded canon-wise.
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True. It is definitely the Psychic-type of Pokemon Generation 1. God damn Sabrina...
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The bickering over bios is really starting to detract from the thread. It'd be much better to leave the official reviews on here to the GMs and then just PM concerns, which I think was asked already once.
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Double post for some reason...
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We aren't bickering about bios. We are simply discussing our thoughts on genjutsu. And waiting around for the IC post. Have you finished your character yet?
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Ah, if you meant @Lyfe, then ok.
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Having reviews on here would be good, yes. Though considering what has passed here, you really have to push it to the limit to be considered overpowered.
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AeronFarron said
We aren't bickering about bios. We are simply discussing our thoughts on genjutsu. And waiting around for the IC post. Have you finished your character yet?


It wasn't directed at you, apologies if you thought it was. I could have clarified more, but I didn't think I needed to.

I'm still working on my jutsu, slowly and surely. I've honestly been struggling to work things into the thematics of the character.

EDIT: :D Way to ninja in there with the follow up.
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