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Erm,i do art,but i'm not sure if it needs work or not. Could you guys check it out and tell me what you think of it?
I'd really appreciate it. I don't care what you say about it,just tell me your thoughts.
http://pitsart.deviantart.com/
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Well, having spaces after starting a sentence would help me enjoy this.
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Well, having spaces after starting a sentence would help me enjoy this.


Is that better?
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Interesting
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My art is interesting?
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How old are you
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How old are you


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Sophistikit said
How old are you


I see you there.
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I really don't want to say,but around a teen.
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More importantly, R U TR011IN' ME, M8!!? U B3773R N07!
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pitwhousedtodopokemon said
I really don't want to say,but around a teen.


12?

You realize that by telling us your age, we will instantly dispatch internet predators to your house, right?
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Cpt Toellner said
12? You realize that by telling us your age, we will instantly dispatch internet predators to your house, right?


Toellner is an internet predator, confirmed.
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pitwhousedtodopokemon said
I really don't want to say,but around a teen.


I'm 46. Only 28 years away from teendom.
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10/10 would hang on fridge.
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12?You realize that by telling us your age, we will instantly dispatch internet predators to your house, right?


SHUT UP
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I particularly like the Dr. Gerald Aster piece. There is a certain anger and violence inherent in the piece that is reflected in the description - "a budding scientist and part time scientist enjoys experimenting on v̶i̶c̶t̶i̶m̶s̶ volunteers!" The contrast of a sterile white in much of the image - including the nondescript, undefined background - and the splashes of red and muddy brown is reflective of a mind that shrouds its internal violence in a distant and coldly scientific exterior; a violence that is hinted at in the subtleties of the characterisation of the face: the wide and angry eyes; the cloth across his mouth, stifling his speech and forcing him to maintain a distance from those around him. The white emptiness surrounding the Doctor and his equipment reflects his isolation - rather than touching the outside world, he is contained in the centre of the piece, with naught else to accompany him than the instruments of his cruel experiments. The rust on the axe perhaps represents his restraint - he does not cave to the passion of his aggressive tendencies, instead harnessing it and turning it into sadism (which is, arguably, controlled violence that accepts rather than rejects the tendencies). The fact that the syringe is one of the few splashes of vibrant red colour again hints at this harnessing of intrinsic aggression for scientific sadism.
The irony of the piece is in the pokeball. An instrument used to capture and contain innocent creatures, it refects his desire for control over himself and over others. He, however, is isolated and contained himself - almost as if the world has caught him in a pokeball, in a disconnect with the reality around him just as a pokemon is trapped in the darkness of that small symbol of oppression. As Pokemon is also a children's game, it could also be offering a subtle commentary on this man's mental state - almost like a child in the way lashes out at the world and perpetuates his own suffering and mental ill-wellbeing in the way he isolates himself from any who may be willing to help, instead forcing his frustrations onto others: his "victims". He lacks an adult's capacity for self-awareness and to overcome one's vulnerabilities in order to accept help - and this is reinforced by the childish, cramped handwriting, as well as the symbolism of the pokeball.

An outstanding piece, all in all.
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I particularly like the Dr. Gerald Aster piece. There is a certain anger and violence inherent in the piece that is reflected in the description - "a budding scientist and part time scientist enjoys experimenting on v̶i̶c̶t̶i̶m̶s̶ volunteers!" The contrast of a sterile white in much of the image - including the nondescript, undefined background - and the splashes of red and muddy brown is reflective of a mind that shrouds its internal violence in a distant and coldly scientific exterior; a violence that is hinted at in the subtleties of the characterisation of the face: the wide and angry eyes; the cloth across his mouth, stifling his speech and forcing him to maintain a distance from those around him. The white emptiness surrounding the Doctor and his equipment reflects his isolation - rather than touching the outside world, he is contained in the centre of the piece, with naught else to accompany him than the instruments of his cruel experiments. The rust on the axe perhaps represents his restraint - he does not cave to the passion of his aggressive tendencies, instead harnessing it and turning it into sadism (which is, arguably, controlled violence that accepts rather than rejects the tendencies). The fact that the syringe is one of the few splashes of vibrant red colour again hints at this harnessing of intrinsic aggression for scientific sadism. The irony of the piece is in the pokeball. An instrument used to capture and contain innocent creatures, it refects his desire for control over himself and over others. He, however, is isolated and contained himself - almost as if the world has caught him in a pokeball, in a disconnect with the reality around him just as a pokemon is trapped in the darkness of that small symbol of oppression. As Pokemon is also a children's game, it could also be offering a subtle commentary on this man's mental state - almost like a child in the way lashes out at the world and perpetuates his own suffering and mental ill-wellbeing in the way he isolates himself from any who may be willing to help, instead forcing his frustrations onto others: his "victims". He lacks an adult's capacity for self-awareness and to overcome one's vulnerabilities in order to accept help - and this is reinforced by the childish, cramped handwriting, as well as the symbolism of the pokeball.An outstanding piece, all in all.


Why Thank you!
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If you're being genuine (God fucking forbid):
In all seriousness, you have a long, long way to go with your art. It's extraordinarily basic at the moment. But the most important thing in art is passion and dedication - if you have those, and keep practicing, you will improve - so persevere, no matter what anybody says. I can't draw for shit and I really admire anyone who even tries their hand at art, 'cause honestly, I'm just too afraid of being shit at it to really give it a crack. What I admire even more is your bravery in putting it out here for people to judge, because that's scary as hell when you're just starting out. So keep that bravery, too, it'll serve you well when your first piece goes up on exhibit and some critic gets snooty over it.
There are a lot of resources online (even on this site, if you know where to look and who to ask) for working on your drawing ability. Search them out, and stick with it!
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Thanks.
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Looking good! Love the lines.

Keep it up!
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