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(sorry this is so late!)

Name:
Azaki, Lowin

Nickname/Alias:
Hoshi (Lowin introduces herself as Hoshi - her birth name serves her no personal purpose and she keeps it hidden at all costs.)

Gender:
Female

Age:
16

Age Appearance:
~19

Sexuality:
Lowin doesn't identify with a sexuality. She loves rarely but without any limits, and she loves everyone equally no matter who they were born as or identify with

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Loyalty

Village:
Village Hidden in the Sand (Sunagakure)

Birthplace:
Village Hidden in the Sand (Sunagakure)

Organization:
Lowin's loyalty lies within her birth Village.

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Ninja Information

Clan/Bloodline:
Lowin belongs to the Azaki clan which was tainted by her mother's time working in a brothel after her father became (what she describes as) "ill."

Rank:
Chuunin

Chakra Nature:
Crystal.

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Appearance

Body Type and Shape:
Thin from lack of food during her journey, but when she trains and eats well she is hourglass shaped. She has shoulder-length teal hair and light blue eyes. Lowin is pale, lean and always looks as if she's angry.

Height:
170.18 cm - 5'7"

Weight:
73 kilos, 160lbs

Hair Color:
Teal

Hair Style:
Shoulder length, her headband holding back her bangs that her mother cut for her.

Eye Color:
Blue

Clothing:
A baggy t-shirt her mother gave her in the Brothel that she attempted to cut down to her size (she cut it a bit too short and crooked - the shirt hangs off her shoulder on one side and only one edge touches her hip while the other hangs above it). She wears a slitted skirt and spandex underneath so she can fight. Her left leg is wrapped in white bandages from a fresh injury scar she acquired only a couple months prior.

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Biography

Background:
Lowin's family were proud members of the Azaki (the four were the only survivors, and their clan never had a historic background to live up to). Her mother was a housewife and her father was a Jonin of the Sand. After an encounter with an unidentified enemy, her father was left with permanent back pain and began drinking to dull it. Lowin's father took his drunken rage out on Lowin, her mother and her little brother. Her mother forced to work in a brothel and Lowin began training with instructors after school hours to become stronger. Her mothers clients harassed Lowin regularly, and Lowin had been assaulted multiple times. Lowin's younger brother was killed by her father during an alcohol-induced beating. Lowin snapped, screaming at her father and knocking him unconscious after he broke a bottle on her left leg, leaving a permanent scar. Despite this, her mother refused to join her in search for a new home without her father, and she left alone.

Today:
Lowin wanders from Village to Village, not genuinely in search for anything but a distraction. She hopes to find a saving grace in someone, something or somewhere. Lowin goes on the hunt for her molesters when her anger gets the most of her, and she takes them down no matter what challenge lies in her way. Lowin makes money by gambling and is banned from multiple Villages for cheating and stealing.

Personality:
Lowin avoids using her birth name and keeps it hidden, since the name was given to her by her father. Lowin instead calls herself Hoshi, which was her younger brother's name. Lowin is socially awkward but positive. She rarely loses her composure despite lacking a verbal filter. She isn't shy or modest, but she shuts down when the topic of her past comes up. She has a hard time learning Justus and usually resorts to her physical strength in a fight. Lowin has a knack for gambling and has been run out of Villages for cheating (as she usually does). Lowin is quiet, reserved and insightful. She pays attention to details, her mind always running. She rarely expresses any emotion outside of anger, and she knows how to fall back and wait for the proper moment to strike. Lowin has a hard time falling into the category of "team medic" and more times than not, she pushes her way to the front of the attack and risks taking damage. Lowin is brave, gold-hearted and ruthless.

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Special Traits
Lowin knows how to use Genjutsu as a torture device (or, as she likes to say, "persuasive tool") and her attention to detail along with her constantly running mind makes her one to find clues that might go unnoticed (she uses this most for gambling). She has the brute strength of Sakura and uses it whenever necessary. Lowin is very persuasive and is very hot headed, which drives her into situations she can't always handle. She is nimble and refuses to accept the title of "damsel in distress" during times of battle.

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Equipment:
Lowin is most skilled with her Kunai knives and ninja stars that she stole from her fathers old uniform. She carries a thin, 2-foot long sword she won in a bet on her hip at all times, despite not having much talent with it.

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Jutsu:
Summoning Jutsu (dogs)

Ninjutsu:
Heal Bite (when an injured person bites the skin of the person possessing this Ninjustu, they are healed of most wounds and given more time to seek immediate care. This leaves a permanent bite mark on the skin of the person possessing this Jutsu.)
Jade Crystal Prison Technique (trapping an enemy in solid crystal; if the crystal is not handled delicately the enemy will shatter)
Crimson Fruit (trapping the enemy or someone that requires protection in a small cap of the crystal. this keeps the individual protected from harm while also keeping them from escaping.)
Crystal Armour

Taijutsu:
Chaka enhanced strength

Genjutsu:
Time Reversal Technique (a hypnosis Genjutsu - this brings the individual trapped in the Genjutsu back to a specific time and place in which events might have happened that the person may not have remembered otherwise.)
Hell Viewing Technique (this Genjutsu shows the individual what their deepest fear is without altering the environment around them, making them oblivious to the fact that it's an illusion.)
Mental Barricades (The user can use this technique to place mental blocks in the target's mind that contains valuable information in case the one with the information is captured and interrogated. The barricades look like stylized traditional Japanese sliding doors. )
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HeyYupHey:
Before I take a closer look at your character I'll give you a chance to fix any small errors that may have sneaked in. Take a look at the OP and the approved characters (for correct way to fill out the CS and balance). Let me know when you've fixed your CS and I'll take a closer look.
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@Halvtand, Doing some research showed that it was the second Gate that granted speed and the first gate that opened strength. Is it alright if I give Ryuu the first two gates? His strength from the first gate obviously won't be as much as Haru's because he lacks the muscularity.
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Halvtand:
No worries, I reviewed all the OP and other characters and made sure my character wasn't out of balance. If there's anything you need me to fix directly (if my character clashes with anyone or anything or if something isn't worded correctly) let me know and I will fix it immediately. I know my character sheet is a bit sloppy (I only had a couple hours to create it and look over all of the approved characters) but I did my best to be clear. :)
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HeyYupHey:
Just like that I can tell you that you need to fix the jutsus to fit the jutsu sheet (found in OP). You need to work on the special traits (read approved characters to see how they did it) and your character needs to live in Gobigakure,

Pasta:
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Eight_Gates
I always double check with Narutopedia because they're pretty thorough and refers back to the manga/anime/data books with most of their stuff.
2.The Gate of Healing (休門, Kyūmon; English TV "The Gate of Rest"), located in the brain, forcibly increases the user's physical strength and temporarily re-energises the body.

Speed isn't mentioned at all until gate 4. The Gate of Pain (傷門, Shōmon), located on the spinal cord, increases the user's speed and power. May cause muscle tissue to tear on use.

With this as a base I can tell you this:
Unlocking 100% muscle activity will make your character faster, as well as stronger. Your character might experience more of a speed boost than the strength boost that the hatter's character gets, but I'd say the first gate is enough. Of course you can "unlock" more gates in the game,
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Sounds good. For some reason the article I read mentioned speed as the second gate. Weird. I'll just have the first gate then. :)
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*swoops in, panting and sweating, leaning over with hands on knees*

All right...

I'm not going to reply to anything, really (due to extreme busy-ness); I am just dropping in to inform you that Halvtand has full GM powers for a couple of days, while I get my shit done. I repeat; Halvtand has full GM powers, so he does not need to wait for me to Hat. His corrections are the way it's going to be. You're going to have to do with the voice of reason and live without my madness for a couple of days.

Now that I've painted that picture as clear as I can, I'm gonna go again.

(@Pasta;
Speed uses muscles, too. Just saying.)
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Brilliantn example.
She comes in, huffing and puffing, claiming she's not going to reply to anything, doing well... Only to change her mind an hour later, come back and reply to something.
Everyone clear on the madness-bit? Good.

Nothing's going to change really. I'll just have to be a bit more careful about my nitpicking and rambling.
Also, as promised (unless she changes her mind) we'll have the IC up this week, so if you can come up with anything new to make Gobi a more living place feel free to keep writing. I'll try to compile the stuff into a handy list to lessen the workload for the hatter once she returns. Anything from people to places and even significant events.

Or if that's boring you, you can always complain about how useless Sakura is...
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Halvtand said
Brilliantn example.She comes in, huffing and puffing, claiming she's not going to reply to anything, doing well... Only to change her mind an hour later, come back and reply to something. Everyone clear on the madness-bit? Good. Nothing's going to change really. I'll just have to be a bit more careful about my nitpicking and rambling. Also, as promised (unless she changes her mind) we'll have the IC up this week, so if you can come up with anything new to make Gobi a more living place feel free to keep writing. I'll try to compile the stuff into a handy list to lessen the workload for the hatter once she returns. Anything from people to places and even significant events. Or if that's boring you, you can always complain about how useless Sakura is...


I know right! She doesn't even have boobs...

On a serious note I'm gonna try and get a potential map up of turd country later tonight :D
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Pasta:
That sounds like a great idea. I really want to see how you picture the country of ultimate shit.
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So it's crap, but it's my crap.



Red dots are small towns/cities.

Also..ya know that Mountain's Graveyard...that's um...where Madara has been hiding out...

So...not sure if this would work with what y'all have planned, but having the team meeting a weakened Madara might be kinda cool. Especially for Ryuu...
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Not to be like that, but the village should be to the far north. Somewhere between the bigger river and the smaller one.

Who am I kidding? Jar-Jar gave me full power here. You have failed me for the last time, captain Pasta! *force choke no jutsu*
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Better?

Also I noticed you did not respond to the Madara thing. Idea is confirmed.
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Much better.

About your Madara-idea... I can guarantee this; we will talk about. The talk may evolve inte giggling, snickering, laughing, knee-slapping and pointing. But we will talk about it.
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Halvtand said
But we will talk about it.


I totally read that in this voice...

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I'll take that as another success. That was exactly what I was going for.
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Halvtand said
I'll take that as another success. That was exactly what I was going for.


Sounds good. Everything going okay for the Mad Hatter? Sounded like crazy shit was going down.
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Haven't heard from her in a while, but that's pretty common. She should show herself either today or tomorrow. If not I'll yell at her.
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Halvtand said
Haven't heard from her in a while, but that's pretty common. She should show herself either today or tomorrow. If not I'll yell at her.


Lol no worries. I'm content with waiting. I know all too well how crazy RL can be. No rush.
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*deep inhale*

Hey, y'all! I'm back!
It was a couple of crazy (and very both physically and mentally straining) days, but I've come out of it alive and well. Still mad, though...
Anyways, I just wanted to inform you that my busy days are over (for now) and I should have the first IC post (as well as the OP info) up tomorrow without any trouble.

Quick IRL updates;
My bunny has a boil on his leg, that poor thing. Luckily, he is the calmest and most understanding bunny in the world and lets me clean it without any hassle.
I went to the doctor today and she says my numbers are looking better than they have in years!
One of my cats is puking its guts out all the time, so I'm hand-feeding him whitefish boiled with aloe vera.
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