ChibiYuki said
Haha sure i wouldn't mind having a review right now, I still need to chop up some things and glue them together so you might as well check so, I can make it look nice in a single swoop.
(Meh i died a little inside when I dropped him from being Chunin to Jonin.... ima try to spend the time to recover ))
Okay, good. 'Cause I already read it.
If changing something as simple as your
rank kills you inside, you might wanna find another RP. Possibly in teh Casual section.
As Pasta informed you, we are not too keen on super-strong ninja. We're barely fond of just regularly strong ninja. Obviously, I have some issues with your power levels.
You cannot have the Mokuton (Wood Release) KG. It is stated in the series that
only Hashirama and those with his exact DNA (AKA clones) possessed this skill and since we do not (really) want to mess with the history of the world, that kind of eliminates the possibility of that KG.
The Paper thing... Well, the way you have described it, this was a side-effect (more or less) of the Mokuton, so he loses that as well. Even if it was not a result of his Mokuton, the Paper thing was not stated to be a KG or anything, but it
was unique to Konan (or will be, I guess). It was so unique, in fact, that it does not even have a name (Super-Ninja-Advanced Origami, lol). Even if I
did allow you the Paper thing (which I am not saying I am or am not), you would have to make up completely nrew techniques for it and not use those invented by Konan.
Shall we start with that?
Pasta Sentient said
Sounds awesome. Glad to know we've got some good GMs running this thing. Really looking forward to seeing how the story plays out.
I'm not quite certain what direction I'm going to take Ryuu. I would love to have him slowly shift from disloyal to actuallly acknowledging his friendships as more important than himself. Yeah..its Tsundere but I've not written one of those in ages.
Also, did that jutsu for the sword styles seem decent?
Yeah, that is always exciting. The best part of being GM and being the one who has basically "created" the setting is when the players take it a totally different way that what I was expecting :-P
That's the best part of always (well, often, anyways) using the same character (as I do with Haruka); they turn out differently each time. I give her the same basic skillset (upgraded or degraded to fit the setting in the RP), the same basic personality (thought the insecurity thing is new) and ususally I would give her the same background as well, though this time that was not quite possible.
The first time I used her, she ended up with a Sakura-Sasuke relationship with a ... Hyuuga version of Sasuke (xD) who then eventually wound up dead and had her fall into a deep depression that ended up with her going downright homocidal.
Another time I used her, she got an inventor friend who used her power-house and tank-like physique to test out dangerous cutting edge weapons and the ones that turned out all right, she got to keep. She had weapons coming out her ass.
She's died a few times, too...
Huh... I forgot about the tooth... I'll have to add that to her CS.
Anyways, I find it easier to just let the character control itself; I just write :-P
Yeah, your sword technique is fine, to me. Halvtand will have to approve, too, though.