@Njorne;
First of, did you see/read my
"critique" of your character? 'Cause I wrote a full long thing about the summoning that you have not adressed...
Also, I realized that I hadn't really looked at your character's name when I went back to look at it again - Please fix it so it is surname first. And... Usagi, as you have written her surname to be, actually means "Rabbit", which I find odd since you have written that the translation is "Beutiful Night Child (of the) Moon". Moon is Tsuki (月), which technically means "month", too, since the cycle of the moon is a month and ... never mind that.
... And when you write a translation of your character's name, you might want to add the Kanji, too, since it can mean different things depending on how you "spell" it. Miyako means capital, too, if written like this 都. It only means "Beautiful Night Child" when written with those three kanji, like this 美夜子.
Also... The Nickname/Alias shes has ... Is it meant to mean "Daughter/Maiden of Suggestion/Hint"? Or "Daughter/Maiden of Difference/Diversity"? Or "Daughter/Maiden of Parallax"? Or...
Njorne said
The part about it being faster than most people run I intended as a kind of escape/mobility tactic but she's restricted to only levitating a bit off the ground (flat surface) so she can't be floating through trees chasing people and over water (maybe later as she gets stronger). She would levitate a bit off the ground, such as Magneto or something would do, and this would allow her to give a sort of straight-line directional burst of speed? Like a queen in chess, she can just launch herself at a high rate of speed and reposition either in or away from the fight or something of that sort. Its not a long term travel technique where she can magically just fly 500 miles away or some stupid crap.
I am a Marvel nerd, too... I grew up reading the
old X-Men comics, when they were still good.
With that said;
Magneto can levitate 'cause most of his body is covered in metal and he uses his magnetic powers to make his armor (with him in it) levitate and can only "repel" things of metal (since he can just move it away from him). Originally, at least. When it still made sense. Just saying...
The magnetic field of flying/levitating and shielding is not really possible. First of all, magnetic fields do not protect anything from physical harm. They can protect against radiation (technically), but nothing physical. She could, perhaps, repel anything metal by making a magnetic field that makes any metal objects that touch it the same pole as the field (since two poles of the same force will repel each other), but she could not shield herself from punches, kicks or the elements... basically anything
not metal.
Going into physics, something like the levitating/launching thing might be possible, though (if we assume that a person could actually turn themselves into a magnet). Like how magnetic trains work. She would have to have something to "launch" herself with, though; something of the same magnetic pole as her own. It would be very hard to control, though.
Njorne said
There are no real Taijutsu techniques well because she doesn't have any, yes she is a Taijutsu specialist (like TenTen I guess? Or Zabuza?) but they don't exactly use fighting like Might Guy or Rock Lee, its more a proficiency with their weapon/hand-to-hand combat and since she has unique weapons I figured that was the best tab to slap it in. Later on I'll probably develop some Nintaijutsu if I can think it up.
I think what Halvtand was looking for here were some bukijutsu, which would go under taijutsu.
If you look at my character sheet, Haruka has a "kenjutsu" for her sword, which is basically just a brief explanation of how she uses it.
Haruka uses her broadsword katana, “Seidou (Path of Righteousness)” in a series of slashing, brute force attacks, molding chakra to her feet to stay standing while she swings the sword, due to the weight in the force of her swings.This is sort of what we want; a fighting style and an explanation on how she uses her weapons. ... ... Actually, I wanted that from Rex and Pasta, too... Forgot that ...
Anyways, using a sword is not just using a sword (I know you don't have a sword), there are many different styles and ways to do it, just like there are many different ways to throw a punch (hand-to-hand combat styles).
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All in all, if you want to stick with your plan of "Long range throw poison weapons person with Magnet shit", then the rest should be removed.
You can keep:
-Jiton
-Precision is Key
-Poison Specialist
-Bukijutsu (though the "Specialist" should probably go)
You need to lose:
-Sensor Type Shinobi
-Cat-Like Agility ('cause cat's a f*cking psychos with that shit (I have three cats 8D ))
-Animal Companion
-Genjutsu
You need to add:
-Some Taijutsu-Bukijutsu shit
You need to fix:
-The magnetic field of protection technique
