The chakra nature. Jiton. I don't really have any problem with you using this. But keep in mind that this kind of Kekkei Genkai is a combination of two (or more) chakra elements. My best guess would be Doton/Raiton with perhaps a little hint of Katon in there...

Background: “The other members of her father's group allegedly slayed her father as retribution for his heinous act...”

Today: “Miyako has promised her mother if she ever comes across him in her travels he will pay for the crimes he committed...”

So... The guy who, as far as Miyako knows, has been dead for sixteen years will get what he deserves if she ever finds him. Please explain.

Also, not a big fan on the large scroll collection. It feels like your character sits on a lot of info that would not have been accessible to ninjas of other villages. Please tell us your intentions of this info.

Skills and stuff... (yes, I know the hatter was on your case for this as well...)

Kekkei genkai
Poison specialist
Sensor.
Cat-like speed and agility.
Possible summoner.
Weapon specialist. (Yet no taijutsu techniques)
And genjutsu... (fairly powerful)

I don't know if you thought about this while writing, but this is a lot of stuff. You might be able to get away with half of it, but just barely. All of it? Don't see it. Please read the approved characters and see if you can find a suitable level for yours.

Jutsus:
I like your jinton jutsus, they feel balanced and appropriate for their ranks. It'll be fun to see how they work out in the game. My only question is about your B-rank. You say that the technique can be used to generate a speed faster than people can run... Could you give us some more info on this?

The taijutsu part is a little thorn in my side. You have no jutsus there, and yet you claim the character is a specialist in this area. What's worse: “the massive disc-shaped ones that are completely round featuring a fully sharpened edge on all sides evenly which makes these impossible to wield by hand without resulting in self-harm”
So you're hurting yourself every time you use this weapon? Not counting you jiton here (because you have no jutsus that lets you fling shurikens without touching them), that sounds like the worst weapon ever designed.

Apart from this I agree with what the hatter has said. Except I don't hugpansexuals... I don't find any kind of kitchen implement very arousing...
I think your problem is that you haven't quite grasped the concept we're looking for here. Please re-read the OP and the approved characters to get a handle on this.

Okay, first things first, I suppose. I really don't like doing this (mostly because everyone else loves your design and I used to do the same thing myself (making Css pretty)), but please fit your character sheet to the format I have submitted. The point of a character sheet is for it to be easily accessible information on the character, not a pretty thing.
Please write the name of the nature transformation/chakra nature/whatever you want to call it, instead of only putting an image. The same goes for the “Loyalty” section (one of the images is broken, anyways).
As fun as theme songs are (I always give my characters one, just for myself), they are not to be submitted in the sheet. Sorry. You are free to post is as a separate thing, though.

About the missions... She could have taken missions in Kiri, but I very much doubt that they'd send a genin with a heart deficiency out on A-rank missions, which are for Jounin. No B-rank, either, since those are for experienced chuunin. That single S-rank one is completely out of the picture.
It would be possible for her to have a few (but certainly not twenty) C-rank missions to her name, as these are meant for experienced genin and new chuunin. D-ranks are fine.

Name: Haruhi Suzumori

Japanese people write their surname first, and since you keep refering to her as “Haruhi” and “Haru” later on in the sheet, I assume that that is her first name.
Small detail, but it counts.
Also... Haruka and Haruhi are gonna be confused about names all the time, since they are both called “Haru” for short :-P

Personality:
History:

I'm sorry to say, but I could barely read through this due to the bad grammar and spelling mistakes. English is not my first language (very far from it, in fact (my fifth, in fact) and as such, I have a hard time reading it when it is not correct. I can accept a few typos and a “there” instead of “their” once or twice in a sheet, but this, I cannot accept.
Please fix the spelling and grammar and I will give you a proper review of this section.
This does not mean that I did not read it, I just want to add. I did. And I do have some issues with it, I just want you to fix the grammar first.

Weapons or Items

Standard Shinobi Tools

No... Just no. There is no such thing as “standard shinobi tools”. What is “standard” differs from person to person. Sasuke carries ninja wires with him; are those standard? Some, such as Haku and Anko, use senbon; are those standard? Do you have soldier pills? Bandages? A water flask? Kunai? Shuriken? Makibishi? Nutrition bars?
If you do, how many do you have? Five of each? Ten of each? Twenty of each? Where do you keep it? In your pockets? In a backpack? A satchel?

Your custom weapons are fine, though. I don't mind those. I have something like the second one attached to my belt, though ;-P

Skills/Abilities

Special Traits

Please take a look at the other sheets for what to do here; write and explanation of the trait, like everyone else.

Cannon Jutsu

Kage Bunshin is a Konoha ninjutsu. Kiri ninja typically use Mizu Bunshin if they want solid clones.

Chidori is an A-rank technique, takes bunches of chakra to use. It was also invented/created by Kakashi and as such would not only not exist yet, but it would be highly unlikely that anyone outside of Konoha would have learned it.

“Chakra Enhanced Strength” was invented/created by Tsunade, a Konoha ninja.

Custom Jutsu

These seem fine, although I am wondering what the point of coating the whip-thing in chakra is in the Heavenly Shark Rain technique?

Name:
Koutaishi, Aaron

Nickname/Alias:
"Cherry Tree Guy" - Known as

Gender:
Male, but he hides his gender

Age:
17 year

Age Appearance:
Despite being 17 years old, Aaron hides his body and rarely speaks. His main way of communication is by writing to other people by the use of paper or if they understand sign language that too. With his body hidden, he carries around a carousel along with a hat, to hide his face in the shadow it provides from blocking out the sun. His face on the other hand is covered with a scarf that is slightly bigger than his size, easily covering everything except for his eyes, which are a light amethyst purple.

Sexuality:
Aaron hasn't really explore his sexuality as his missions as a Ninja seemed to always be in the way of his free time and he had never honestly had a chance to 'experiment'. But from what he knows he consider himself homosexual as he finds himself often looking at other guys or fantasizing every once in a while.

:
As a Ronin, no village will ever be his home, but he is living in Gobigakure for the moment

Birthplace:
Born in Konohagakure, The Land of the Fire, Aaron had a relatively peaceful life sheltered within the walls of Konoha.

Organization:
Aaron's loyalty isn't placed anywhere, nor is it placed within a group of people. He can only trust himself to keep only himself alive./hider]

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[hider=Ninja Information]Clan/Bloodline:
Koutaishi Clan - Paper( 紙) Release

Rank:
Chunin ranked Ronin ninja

Chakra Nature:
Doton and Suiton Chakra Nature

Body Type and Shape:
His body shape is mostly a Ectomorph with slight curves to his waist that makes him look feminine in clothing that are tight on him.

Height:
He is about 6'0 ft or around 190 centimeters

Weight:
135 lbs or 61 kg

His Hair:
Aaron hair isnt really maintained often, but it has that cute messy hair look to it. This is because he keeps his head in a hat most of the time when he is traveling and rarely has the chance to do anything stylish to his hair so he just leaves it like that. His hair color is simply a dark hazel color, that is natural for him.

Clothing:
His clothes as a ninja isn't fancy, all he really wears most of the time besides is usual clothing are his cloak, carousel, and Rice Hat. But when everything hits the floor and his secrecy is mostly not needed, or he needs to drop it for easier combat, his casual clothes could be thought as slightly tight fitting casual pants, and a long sleeved shirt v-neck.

Background:
Born in Konoha, Aaron lived a good life there. It was perfect in all ways, in Ninja Academy he was one of the top students who easily made it through scaling the basics as if it was nothing. Teachers were amazed by his surprising potential as a ninja, as he was able to remain ahead of the class and even before graduation of the Ninja Academy his skills could be defined as a experienced genin compared to the other students. His skill in Ninjustu easily surpassed his peers, and his adept ability in Kenjutsu only gave him more of an advantage over them.

Once graduation took progress he moved into his own little group of other students along with a Jonin, and to begin off they started a sparring match. His two other team mates facing each other, before him facing his Jonin teacher. His sparring match with his teacher no doubt was short, but he managed to hold him off from a barrage of attacks from him for a good minute before he was knocked out, with a heavy fist that penetrated his constant parrying. This no doubt awed his teacher, but he remained composed, and treated Aaron as if he was a normal genin. On the team his team mates knew that he was different from the two of them and often avoided him even during training, leaving Aaron to himself. This loneliness dug into Aaron's personality making him a shy guy when meeting people and often is nervous to meet other people he doesn't often see.

However, the only person who would care about Aaron would of been his teacher, as he sparred with Aaron often, improving his Kenjutsu skill and refining his Ninjustu skills as well under the careful watch of his teacher. Over time he became better to the point where on rare C-rank mission, he often soloed with the permission of his Captain and dealt with other objective, while his team mates and teacher did theirs. This soloing did not go unnoticed as other teams, were probably told when his teacher gloated about him to the other team's captains. That was when they noticed the strength of Aaron, and this was when he started to become a recluse. The unwanted attention of how he got so strong annoyed him, as people asked everyday day and night. The annoyance grew to the point where he confronted his teacher once, but his teacher obviously now didnt care about him and only about the new fame he got from his skill. He thus honed his skills in silence detaching himself from his teacher, basically his only friend, that he thought he had and trained relentlessly for the Chunin exams.

Once the Jonin exam came up, his 'team' had the same idea about joining the Chunin exams so, he joined them, what else would he have done? The first part of the Chunin exams were tricky but manageable as he quickly answered the questions, finishing mostly before anyone else. After the first test was done it was noted that the first part was about information-gathering and that answering these question at genin level was quite difficult to the point that they thought it was impossible. But, Aaron knew he wasnt normal like everyone said, so he might as well stick out. The Second part of the Chunin exams were fairly easy as his skill from his bloodline which allowed him to use Paper Ninjutsu to sense everything and allowed him easy access around the forest the Chunin exam were based around. This allowed him take some scrolls for himself, oh and did he mention that he too soloed this part of the Chunin Exam as well? He made it fine, and so did his team mates sadly but the third round of the Chunin exam would be interesting. The third part of the Chunin Exam was the most fun section of the exams in Aaron's part as he wouldnt have to face the stupid Genins from his village.

The Battles in the third round, were difficult facing enemies that were tricky with Genjustu or with surprisingly fast Taijutsu. But he overcame his problems with his skill in Ninjutsu and Kenjutsu. His victory in the Chunin exams were not a surprise, as his potential to becoming something greater hasnt stopped after he became a Chunin Ninja. As a Chinin he had to do very little to prove his worth as a Jonin, and his skill in Kenjutsu was enough to say as his skill with the sword surpassed many people in the village. Not to mention his Paper ninjutsu was a unique type to have the was completely useful that would benefit the whole village with the potential Aaron had. But their were some problems, the elders had doubted with making Aaron a Jonin and decided to see how Aaron would feel doing several Jonin missions.

After several months of doing extremely challenging Jonin mission, for the village he took a break as the stress from these mission were taxing on him but he managed...barely. The break consisted of about a month or two, and Aaron stayed within the village. Inside the village he began to branch out his skill in his Paper Ninjutsu and not before long he had mastered it, and developed a new way to use it. The 'Paper' style the had mastered would be useful latter in combat for its versatility. Not long after this, he realized what was he doing in this stupid village? He hated everything this placed had to offer, there was no friends in here that he could call to, his family is nonexistent as after he became a Chunin, they abandoned him not long after due to some arguments that was brewing for several years around his parents. So, he decided to pave his own path to hopefully find a place to call home despite leaving the potential position of being a Jonin he hoped to find somewhere were he would at least have people who would respect him and maybe... have someone to love as well?

Today:
(Where is your character today and how does (s)he fee about it?)

Personality:
(What is your character like?)

Hands of the Deftness: Aaron's hand has grown accustomed to wielding a Katana and Projectiles as weapons, and can parry attacks more often. This also mean he can deflect, counter or destroy some techniques due to his high skill in Kenjutsu if it is superior that the technique.

One-Handed Seals: Being often to use a katana with one hand, had given Aaron the problem of not being able to use ninjutsu but, after dedicated years of practice through Academy to Chunin years, he had mastered using only a single hand to preform seals for ninjutsu.

20/16 Vision: Aaron's eyesight is better than most people and can see better in most circumstances allowing him to study objects from afar in better detail than a regular person who would need to go closer. This however can also be a negative as it increases the potency of Genjutsu that is made through eye-contact or Ninjutsu that blinds people.

Chakra Sponge: Aaron is up to the brim with his chakra, to the point it seems that he has almost no limit. Is it probably because of his natural affinity to the forest and land themselves? He would never know as he always felt that he had an indescribable amount of chakra, the only problem he had with that was that if he would have the stamina to even make a dent in his chakra pool.

Katana-

Nap Sack-

Ninja Bag-

Kami Goukyou (Paper Strength)
Rank: "D", "C", "B", "A", "S"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A technique which utilizes one own chakra to strengthen their paper. The more one learns into this technique, the stronger one is able to make their paper.
Description: By combining ones own chakra within paper, they are capable of strengthening its form. The more attune one is with paper, the stronger it becomes. A vital step when attempting to draw out the full potential of ones paper.

When the user learns the D rank of this technique, they are capable of making their paper as strong as stone. At this stage, they are capable of cutting flesh.
When the user learns the C Rank version of this technique, they are capable of making their paper as strong as iron. At this stage they are capable of cutting through stone.
When the user learns the B Rank version of this technique, their paper is as strong as steel. At this stage they are capable of cutting through iron.
When the user learns the A Rank version of this technique, their paper is as strong as titanium. At this stage they are capable of cutting through steel.
When the user learns the S Rank version of this technique, they are capable of making their paper as strong as damascus steel. At this stage the piece of paper is capable of cutting through titanium

When using Paper Strength, the amount of defense it gives applies to the overall techniques

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Kami Toguchi (Paper Door)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates a single, large piece of paper from a pile of papers
Description: By simply using the paper release on a paper cube, the small box will rapidly unfold, creating a barrier. This can be used to block a doorway or as a simple shield in battle.

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Kami Kusari (Chain Letter)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: By connecting paper together and projecting it in a straight line, the user is able to create a rope or chain of paper, capable of restraining an opponent or acting as a grappling hook.
Description: By grabbing hold of a piece of paper, the user channels chakra through it and connects it to other paper nearby. By doing this, the user is capable of forming a long chain of paper that can be used however they see fit within their range of paper manipulation. This is most effectively achieved through the use of holsters, though their utilization isn’t necessary.

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Name: Kusari Souki (Chain Recall)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user is capable of recalling their chain back into a neatly stacked pile of paper or back into its holster.
Drawback: The longer the chain, the more time it takes for it to retract.
Description: A follow up to the “Chain Letter” technique, the user is able to recall the length of paper back into a neat pile. This technique can be utilized to reel in a captured opponent, pull the user to a safe location, or simply recall chain once it has served its purpose.

Kami Bunshin (Paper Clone)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Compiles sheets of paper into a clone of the user.
Description: After forming hand seals, the user forces chakra into several bunches of paper. Then, the paper will quickly swirl together and form a replica of the user. This clone is like any other elemental clone.

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Keihatsu Ryuu: Battōjutsu no Kamae (Art of Drawing the Blade Posture)
Rank: "E"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: The basic stance used for all of the Busōsen (Arms Flash) techniques.
Description: Picture User stands in a long "L" stance. The Forward foot is pointing towards the opponent while the back leg is perpendicular. The weight is evenly distributed between the 2 legs. The sword and sheath is attached to the belt on their hip. Their free hand holds onto the edge of the sheath, while their main hand readies itself near the Tsuba of the Sword. The main hand shoulder should face the opponent.

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Keihatsu Ryuu: Battōjutsu (Art of Drawing the Blade)
Rank: "B"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: This technique is the basic concept of Busōsen (Arms Flash) which deals specifically with the rapid drawing and sheathing of a sword.
Special: ---
Drawback: Missing the strike could result in the user being completely vulnerable.
Description: The user stands in the Keihatsu Ryuu: Battōjutsu no Kamae (Art of Drawing the Blade Posture). Grabbing the handle of the sword near the Tsuba, the user thereafter steps forward with the front leg while unsheathing the blade in a horizontal attacking motion across the body. So swift is this technique that it is akin to a "flash", taking no movements to perform. However, the concentration of such a quick strike is evident; upon sheathing the sword, the user must sacrifice a movement to do so. This technique may be performed with a knockback attack, knocking an opponent into the distance of 10 meters into a prone position

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Keihatsu Ryuu: Hanabira Surasshu (Petal Slash)
Rank: "C"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: A simple Battōjutsu attack followed by an inward strike before sheathing.
Drawback: Missing the first strike could result failure in the technique and leave the user vulnerable
Description: A continuation of the Keihatsu Ryuu: Battōjutsu (Art of Drawing the Blade), before sheathing the user then turns their wrist 180° making the blade face inward and perform an inward horizontal strike before sheathing the blade, this strike takes up a movement.

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Yaibasattou (Blade Rush)
Rank: C
Skill: Taijutsu
Special: ---
Effect: In Description
Drawback: Leaves back exposed, if the enemy can get to it that is. Heavy on chakra usage. Can only be used 5 times a day
Description: The user gathers chakra into their bladed weapon of choice and then dashes forward for about 5-10 meters with the blade pointed outward. The chakra is released in a burst that flies outward from the blade in a cone shape. Aside from the impact of the blade, the chakra involved causes the enemy to be knocked backward, breaking through most defenses. Even if the strike is blocked, the force of the chakra will usually push an opponent back, leaving them open.
Limit: Must have a bladed weapon equipped

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Taibu Yaibasattou (Greater Blade Rush)
Rank: B
Skill: Taijutsu
Special: ---
Effect: In Description
Drawback: Leaves back exposed, if the enemy can get to it that is. Heavy on chakra usage. Can only be used 3 times a day
Description: The user gathers a significant amount of chakra into their bladed weapon of choice and then dashes forward for about 10-20 meters with the blade pointed outward. The chakra is released in a large burst that flares outward from the blade in a cone shape. Aside from the impact of the blade, the chakra involved causes the enemy to be knocked backward, breaking through most defenses. Even if the strike is blocked, the force of the chakra is enough to break bones and destroy an opponent's defenses.
Limit: Must have a bladed weapon equipped

Some secret stuff