[OOC] Exile: A Sci-Fi RP On an Untamed World

[Chapatrap]

Rare said
Everyone is like taking my land and shits. We can talk about sharing the land.

Take a walk on the wildside and take some land outside the safe zone.

[Sovi3t]

Very well

[TheEvanCat]

Rare said
Everyone is like taking my land and shits. We can talk about sharing the land.

As an Armenian, I'm fucking cray cray about giving up clay.

FUCK YUO KEBAB! TAKINGS BACK OF CLAY!

[Jeddaven]

As a Canadian, I'm usually pretty nice, except when you fuck with my allies.

That's when shit gets crazy.

[Sovi3t]

Another Canadian!

What part you from?

[Work_U_Dumb]

In Soviet Canada Syrup eats you.

[Work_U_Dumb]

Just made my first Ic post. Hope it was good enough

[Sovi3t]

Work_U_Dumb, you would probably be outside of the station, waiting for entrance atm

[Work_U_Dumb]

oh ok. I will just get rid of that other part

[Jeddaven]

Sovi3t said
Another Canadian!What part you from?

Calgary, Alberta.

[Sovi3t]

Jeddaven said
Calgary, Alberta.

Ah, I'm from Brampton Ontario!

[Pepperm1nts]

Guys, be careful with dates. I don't want a mess of dates that ends up confusing everyone as to what day it is. It's not really important, anyway. So unless it's necessary for whatever reason (like in Vilage's post, where he is specifying it's happening long in the past), don't do it. Location of the post is enough.

@Work_U_Dumb: Maybe I'm a little confused, but did you just have some people go from space to land in one post? This is something that should probably take you two posts, at least. Not only because it takes awhile to get from space to land (and vice versa), but because when you do what I think you did in that post, it's a mess. I had to stop and go "wait, what?", and I'm still not even sure what happened there.

[Work_U_Dumb]

Should I just get rid of the bottom part.

[Chapatrap]

I love Canadians. Friendly, great people who didn't get bitchy about taxes.

[Sovi3t]

Amen

[Pepperm1nts]

Work_U_Dumb said
Should I just get rid of the bottom part.

Probably.

[Sovi3t]

Pepperm1nts said
Guys, be careful with dates. I don't want a mess of dates that ends up confusing everyone as to what day it is. It's not really important, anyway. So unless it's necessary for whatever reason (like in Vilage's post, where he is specifying it's happening long in the past), don't do it. Location of the post is enough.@Work_U_Dumb: Maybe I'm a little confused, but did you just have some people go from space to land in one post? This is something that should probably take you two posts, at least. Not only because it takes awhile to get from space to land (and vice versa), but because when you do what I think you did in that post, it's a mess. I had to stop and go "wait, what?", and I'm still not even sure what happened there.

Sorry about that, just did it for immersion

[Queen Raidne]

Nation application completed. Link. Let me know if you'd like more detail.

[Pepperm1nts]

Great app, Raidne. There is only one very small problem I spotted. You mention how your nation welcomed the refugees when the Listeners showed up. That implies your nation was a thing before the refugees arrived. The way the story is set up though, Nai Kolkata would have been the only colony at that time.

Maybe it'd work if we said that your nation existed in a very small fashion though, small enough that, at least back then, it was shadowed by Nai Kolkata.

Otherwise, I like the app/sheet. You're accepted. I'll put you on the map in the next update.

[Queen Raidne]

Heehee, whoops. Too much mead for me! Let me fix/edit that.

Thinking about it now, I made allusions to being a district that grew into its own. What do you think about me originally being a part of Nai Kolkata until Pratchapadri peaceably broke off?

EDIT: We've even got similar Indian themes going through our cultures! That could work. I think. But I can make it separate, if you'd rather, of course.