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I will also drop out.
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Have an argument? Actually don't answer that I'm not really privy to that information.
Anyways hope you find greener pastures or however that idiom goes.
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No, going through some personal stuff so I won't be as active, don't want to drag anyone down.
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Lowkey and Kaben, I would like to address your characters. Lowkey, your CS is not finished, please correct the stuff about the gun (AKA, remove it), and write the emotional bond in. Kaben, your weapon is to OP, I mean, lemme just copy and paste this here:

The spear has two functions, depending on how it is used.The first, close quarter attack that strikes a fatal blow that always pierces the opponent's heart and ruins their body from within with its thousand iron thorns. The second function, is activated when thrown. Emily leaps into the air and pours her energy into the throw, launching the spear at the intended target,. Unlike the first function, it will not always hit the opponents heart, but instead seemingly split itself into multiple spearheads and bombard a wide area for massive destruction. However, once thrown, Emily will barely be able to stand since all her energy has gone into the throw.

I am not a fan of "Hey my weapon can instantly kill anything, but it makes me weak afterword" especially the "Always pierces the opponent's heart and ruins their body from within with its thousand iron thorns" That is OP as fuck. You don't even list a downside, but that's not the problem, the problem is that your character doesn't even need any skill/training to attack with this thing, because it always hits the heart, and then murders them with stuff. It's like you don't even want to try. I am not going to mention the second function, since it is equally OP (or maybe even more so)

Remember: I said not to make it so your character is a 1 man(or woman) army, but half of a team that works well (or not so well) together.

"Or not so well" does not mean that 1 of them undermines the other (which your character clearly does), so please edit your character's weapon to make it not OP.
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VarionusNW said
The spear has two functions, depending on how it is used.The first, close quarter attack that strikes a fatal blow that always pierces the opponent's heart and ruins their body from within with its thousand iron thorns. The second function, is activated when thrown. Emily leaps into the air and pours her energy into the throw, launching the spear at the intended target,. Unlike the first function, it will not always hit the opponents heart, but instead seemingly split itself into multiple spearheads and bombard a wide area for massive destruction. However, once thrown, Emily will barely be able to stand since all her energy has gone into the throw.


Cu Chulainn is such a badass.

As a side note, that NP doesn't even cost much prana. Gae Bolg = broke.
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VarionusNW said
Lowkey and Kaben, I would like to address your characters. Lowkey, your CS is not finished, please correct the stuff about the gun (AKA, remove it), and write the emotional bond in


Huh? I did remove it. In fact, I did that shit. Did you even read the CS over again?
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by TheyMostlyComeAtNight
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You missed a mention of the gun in your familiar description, maybe he means that? -shrugs-
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TheyMostlyComeAtNight said
You missed a mention of the gun in your familiar description, maybe he means that? -shrugs-


Oooooohhhhhh.
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VarionusNW said
SniP.


Yea,Gae Bulg needs nerfing like fuck! His throwing fuction even broke 6 of the Seven Rio Aias layers. But, having Gae Bulg was a really cool idea, but I couldn't think of any way to nerf it while keeping the same element. So, best to just get rid of it. But....what to use, then?
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KabenSaal said
Yea,Gae Bulg needs nerfing like fuck! His throwing fuction even broke 6 of the Seven Rio Aias layers. But, having Gae Bulg was a really cool idea, but I couldn't think of any way to nerf it while keeping the same element. So, best to just get rid of it. But....what to use, then?


A spear that could be imbued by your partners magic~?
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Derpestein said
A spear that could be imbued by your partners magic~?


THAT SOUNDED DIRTIER THAN IT SHOULD HAVE
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Derpestein said
A spear that could be imbued by your partners magic~?


Sounds cool, what's Lowkeys magic?
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KabenSaal said
Sounds cool, what's Lowkeys magic?


UUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Lightning.
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Awesome.
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I HAVE CHANGED MY WEAPON!
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'imbued by your partner's magic'
nobody understands
help
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LowKey123 said
'imbued by your partner's magic'
nobody understands
help


I know. you want sex.
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KabenSaal said
I know. you want sex.


HELP
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Reminder that only a shitty magus would resort to sex with their servant/partner.
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Rancealot said
Reminder that only a shitty magus would resort to sex with their servant/partner.


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