[OOC] Marvel: Fight for Control

[soren]

Nom nom nom candy!!

[RainDash]

Candy! :D

[Demon Shinobi]

Kitty said
Name: Ianite Miyana Tempro (Goes by Miyana and prefers Miya {pronounced 'my-ah'} )Alias: IaniteAge: 16Gender: FemaleAppearance: Miya has long wavy blonde hair that tends to be a darker blonde underneath by just a bit. Her eyes are a bright blue that are brought out by her hair and light-olive skin tone. She stands at 5'5" and is built curvy but athletic.Equipment: Two katanas named, 'Yin and Yang: The katana's of balance'Skills/Abilities: -Agility-Hand to hand combat-Flexibility-Gymnastics-SwordsmanshipPowers: Healing/Regeneration - Can heal wounds of others as long as they aren't fatal. Regeneration only happens when the transfer of wounds takes place.Light Manipulation - User can create, shape and manipulate lightShadow Manipulation - User can create, shape and manipulate darkness and shadows.Weaknesses: -Healing/Regeneration - Takes away from her own energy and will transfer 50% of the wound to her. When she has transfered an injury to herself her healing speed kicks up and she will heal in 1/2 the time it would take for wounds to normal heal depending on the wound transfered.-Light Manipulation - Use-able with Yin sword(white sword). Or can be used to create a beam or ball of light for an attack. Not very strong when not used to surround the Yin sword in Light energy.-Shadow Manipulation - Use-able with Yang sword(black sword). Or can be used for shadow travel of short distances, under 50 feet, or encasing fists in shadows to increase damage of hits. Not very strong when not used to surround the Yang sword in shadow energy.-Both light and shadow manipulation are highly draining for her.-When things are too much off balance she becomes weaker in power. So using her powers is hard for her currently so she has to rely on strength and skill with swords to fight even if she is more for peace.Personality: TBRHistory: Miyana was born the daughter of the asgardian god of darkness and the goddess of light. This match made her into the goddess of balance. When she was old enough to begin training, she was trained to be one of the main gods of Asgard to help keep balance. When things on Midgard began to go wrong, her parents took her with them to Midgard and helped her try and regain balance. But soon her parents were somehow killed causing Miya to have to go into hiding and she began losing power. She has slight powers but mainly relies on her katanas and strength she has as an asgard to keep going while she stays in hiding.Other: She is the Asgardian Goddess of Balance.

Alright so. She seems fine to me. A bit too creative for my tastes >)>
lol jk.
No but seriously, she's fine. However, I think you should try and add a little more detail as to what she CAN do with the powers and make her limits a little more clear. The weakness are good and all, but still a bit vague, you know?
Also... About the swords...
1) From here on out they shall be known as Tensa Zangetsu White and Tensa Zangetsu Black.
^That's a joke of course...
2) I feel I should tell you that Yin is actually the Black side with the white dot in it and Yang is the White side with the Black dot in it. SO you kind of got the color and naming wrong. Unless you did that on purpose. In which case... I feel dumb TT__TT

[soren]

Wooooo we should be about ready right!? Sorry just getting excited!

[Kitty]

Demon Shinobi said
Alright so. She seems fine to me. A bit too creative for my tastes >)>lol jk. No but seriously, she's fine. However, I think you should try and add a little more detail as to what she CAN do with the powers and make her limits a little more clear. The weakness are good and all, but still a bit vague, you know? Also... About the swords...1) From here on out they shall be known as Tensa Zangetsu White and Tensa Zangetsu Black. ^That's a joke of course...2) I feel I should tell you that Yin is actually the with the white dot in it and Yang is the White side with the Black dot in it. SO you kind of got the color and naming wrong. Unless you did that on purpose. In which case... I feel dumb TT__TT

I did it on purpose I messed up with the which power went with which. The white sword known as yin will have shadow powers for it so it's like black with the white dot and the same as the black sword but switched
Also I'll edit it tomorrow

[Demon Shinobi]

YOU BETTER KITTY!

And just be a patient a little longer Soren. I'll have my character finished and the RP started by tomorrow night. I've just been really busy @_@

[soren]

Awww ok. I have to work tomorrow night

[TheRider]

EDIT:

IM AN IDIOT.

[soren]

???

[TheRider]

XD dw dw

[Demon Shinobi]

Alright so my character is finished. I hope he's okay... Guy? Constructive criticism?

Rider's character is almost finished so yeah. I'm gonna post an IC beginning and just as I promised the RP will have begun tonight lol

[Kitty]

DEMON IT SUCKS! :P
jk, also currently editing

[Kitty]

Kitty said
Powers:
Healing/Regeneration - Can heal wounds of others as long as they aren't fatal. Regeneration only happens when the transfer of wounds takes place.
Light Manipulation - User can create, shape and manipulate light. For example: move quickly using light, balls of light, beams of light, fist engulfed in light.(Think white dragon slayer magic from fairytail but no dragon attacks and to a much lesser scale)
Shadow Manipulation - User can create, shape and manipulate darkness and shadows. For example: traveling with shadows, balls of shadows, beams of shadows, fist engulfed in shadow.(Think shadow dragon slayer magic from fairytail but no dragon attacks and to a much lesser scale)

Weaknesses:
-Healing/Regeneration - Takes away from her own energy and will transfer 50% of the wound to her. When she has transfered an injury to herself her healing speed kicks up and she will heal in 1/2 the time it would take for wounds to normal heal depending on the wound transfered.
-Light Manipulation - Use-able with Yang sword(black sword). Or can be used to create a beam or ball of light for an attack. Not very strong when not used to surround the Yang sword in Light energy.
-Shadow Manipulation - Use-able with Yin sword(white sword). Or can be used for shadow travel of short distances, under 50 feet, or encasing fists in shadows to increase damage of hits. Not very strong when not used to surround the Yin sword in shadow energy.
-Her shadow and light manipulation currently is only strong enough for surrounding the swords to empower them making attacks stronger and some small attacks
-Both light and shadow manipulation are highly draining for her.
-When things are too much off balance she becomes weaker in power. So using her powers is hard for her currently so she has to rely on strength and skill with swords to fight even if she is more for peace.

I edited it to the best of my ability of how I think you wanted me to edit it, let me know how it is

[Demon Shinobi]

Seems good to me. And I'll trust you not to be OP. lol
As of now with my character, who has a last name I TOTALLY THOUGHT UP BY MYSELF, completed and an IC post made the RP is finally on it's way to beginning.

[TheRider]

Name:
Gabriel Rose
Alias:
Prism
Age:
18
Gender:
Male
Appearance:

’Gabriel’

Equipment:
NA
Skills/Abilities:
-Skilled hand to hand combatant
-trained in the art of Kendo
-charismatic speaker
Powers:
Spectrumancy: Gabriel has the innate ability to draw energy from the visible light spectrum. He can split white light into its constituent parts to fuel his powers. Most of his constructs follow a simple rule; the smaller the construct, the less Gabriel needs to concentrate to keep it up. Gabriel’s constructs will eventually release back into light after an hour of Gabriel leaving it. Gabriels constructs are generally only able to be used in close proximity, only able to draw colors to his hand to create something. He is able to give these constructs to other people to use or just let them drop to the floor, but he cannot manipulate them without using his own strength.

Superviolet
Made of wavelengths shorter than most human eyes can see, superviolet is invisible to even Gabriel unless he concentrates. Solid, but not as strong as blue or green. Used for creating invisible walls and traps, and marking targets on the battlefield.

Blue
Blue constructs are hard, strong, and smooth. It can be used in anything from the creation of large structures to armor or bladed weapons or projectiles.

Green
Green constructs are springy and flexible. The uses are as varied; from furniture to springs to help. Green constructs can also be soft, allowing Gabriel to make cushions to protect from falling and so forth.

Yellow
Yellow is most often a liquid that releases its energy back into light quickly, allowing its use as a torch or a trigger to ignite flammable materials or explosives. Yellow nourishes other constructs, extending the durability of structures or tools. Like water turning to ice, when yellow is drafted perfectly, it loses its liquidity and becomes the hardest construct of all.

Orange
Orange constructs are slick, lubricative, and heavy. It is often used in conjunction with machines and traps.

Red
Red is sticky, gooey, and extremely flammable. Red often work with sub-red or with mundane tools to make bombs.

Sub-Red
By dilating his eyes fully, Gabriel can see heat, allowing them to see (to an extent) in the dark, he can pull on the heat from their surroundings to survive intense heat and create flame crystals which turn into fire when exposed to air.
Gabriel can use multiple colours together, an example would be a giant Blue hammer that even Gabriel couldn’t lift with Green springs on one side. This would let him allow the hammer to fall and spring back up to cause damage.

Weaknesses:
Gabriel suffers from an extreme case of bipolar disorders, so much so that it can seem like he has a dissociative identity disorder. He has two distinct emotional states which are physically shown by a shift in eye colour.

His aggressive and emotional state is denoted by bright red eyes. In this personality, he is run by his heart. In this state he only has accesses to the warmer colors of the spectrum.

His other state is one run by logic and his brain. This state has access to the cold colors of the spectrum and is denoted by ice blue eyes.

He is unable to control these shifting states of personality, and as such his power can be quite limited if his mood doesn't suit the situation.

Gabriel is near powerless in the dark.

Personality: (see above)

History:
Gabriel was born under a bright red sun and an ice blue sky...an indication of things to come. His birth was simple, though his childhood was not. Bearing a bright red eye and cool blue one, Gabriel was often a thing to hide when the house was checked by the local bot squad that looked for would be heroes or just mutants to control.

As he developed into his teens, his entrance into puberty triggered the latent powers that lay dormant in his body. His eyes shifted to be completely blue and he began to process things with alarming ease. His mood then shifted, Gabriel becoming a riotous nuisance that wanted nothing more than to fulfill his needs.

His parents grew slightly worried at this behaviour and contacted the person they knew they could trust with a mutant boy that couldn't control himself. Gabriel was brought under the wing of Logan and his rag tag group...having his powers revealed and trained by Wolverine already, Gabriel looks forward to fighting with his mentor in his latest resistance attempt.

Other:
- red eyes - bisexual
- blue eyes - doesn't care for those things.

FUCK IT! Center isn't working! fuck it. Here is my guy.

[Demon Shinobi]

Mokuro... I MEAN GABRIEL!
Gabriel is accepted lol XD

[TheRider]

Shhhhh....I didn't even know about Mokuro till i googled 'anime red blue heterochromia' :P

[Demon Shinobi]

Shush Rider... How dare you for not knowing KHR >_>

[TheRider]

I read like the first 3 volumes and kinda got disinterested

[Kitty]

Who should I have bring Miya to the place so they can all meet up?