[OOC] Myriad Reality

[Extra]

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Sitting around. Reading you guys' fight. Not much.

@Legend

I don't really know what game I should play in the RP....for me it's pretty hard to play any games in RPs.

[Legend]

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I don't really know what game I should play in the RP....for me it's pretty hard to play any games in RPs.

@Extra

It doesn't have to be complex; it could be like tic-tac-toe. But this will be easy because of the insane twists.

[whizzball1]

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/768922
Tell me if you think it flows well, foremost.

[Legend]

@whizzball1
I'll have to check it in a little bit.

[whizzball1]

@whizzball1
I'll have to check it in a little bit.

@Legend

izkay

[Legend]

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izkay

@whizzball1

Anything going on?

[whizzball1]

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Anything going on?

@Legend

Just writing. Well, not writing right now, since I don't want to continue until I have confirmation it's good. So I'm reading instead.

[Legend]

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Just writing. Well, not writing right now, since I don't want to continue until I have confirmation it's good. So I'm reading instead.

@whizzball1

Reading more fanfiction?

[Legend]

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izkay

@whizzball1

Two formatting errors, but that's all.

[Extra]

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It doesn't have to be complex; it could be like tic-tac-toe. But this will be easy because of the insane twists.

@Legend

Okay.

[Legend]

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Okay.

@Extra

Easy to play, not to win.

[whizzball1]

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Two formatting errors, but that's all.

@Legend

where
Yay. Did you like it?

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Reading more fanfiction?

@Legend

Well, actually, I'm trying to come up with a design for an efficient mob farm that can farm Endermen. I figured out a plan to make a three-layer farm, two layers of which will not spawn Endermen, but the third and highest of which will. Because Endermen will not teleport farther than 32 blocks, if we allow them to spawn at the top, they will not be able to teleport anywhere but within the structure. The two lower layers will only be two blocks high, except in the areas where the mobs are moved to the drop. And we can use conveyor belts instead of water so that the Endermen won't teleport in response. I'm also considering making the bottom of the drop itself 32 blocks higher than our base so the Endermen can't teleport while being killed by the punji sticks.

[Legend]

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where
Yay. Did you like it?

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Well, actually, I'm trying to come up with a design for an efficient mob farm that can farm Endermen. I figured out a plan to make a three-layer farm, two layers of which will not spawn Endermen, but the third and highest of which will. Because Endermen will not teleport farther than 32 blocks, if we allow them to spawn at the top, they will not be able to teleport anywhere but within the structure. The two lower layers will only be two blocks high, except in the areas where the mobs are moved to the drop. And we can use conveyor belts instead of water so that the Endermen won't teleport in response. I'm also considering making the bottom of the drop itself 32 blocks higher than our base so the Endermen can't teleport while being killed by the punji sticks.

@whizzball1

Look in the spaces between paragraphs. There are two instances.
It's fine.

Endermen are the best mobs.

[whizzball1]

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Look in the spaces between paragraphs. There are two instances.
It's fine.

Endermen are the best mobs.

@Legend

that's not very reassuring

yiss

[Legend]

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that's not very reassuring

yiss

@whizzball1

I'm sorry, it's fanfiction to me. I can tell you that it's coherent and has good elements to it, but not whether it's the greatest thing in the world, because I have no reference point.

[whizzball1]

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I'm sorry, it's fanfiction to me. I can tell you that it's coherent and has good elements to it, but not whether it's the greatest thing in the world, because I have no reference point.

@Legend

But I mean does it sound good? It doesn't need a reference point; it just has to sound good to the reader. A reader may have read no other sci-fi books by which to base their opinion of Ender's Game on, but if they enjoyed it, they enjoyed it. So, that said: Do you enjoy the way I wrote the montage segment? Does it give off a sense of grandeur? Completeness? Resolution?

[Legend]

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But I mean does it sound good? It doesn't need a reference point; it just has to sound good to the reader. A reader may have read no other sci-fi books by which to base their opinion of Ender's Game on, but if they enjoyed it, they enjoyed it. So, that said: Do you enjoy the way I wrote the montage segment? Does it give off a sense of grandeur? Completeness? Resolution?

@whizzball1

That's what I'm referring to. Yeah, it's fine.

[Legend]

Finally beat Super Meat Boy.

[souleaterfan320]

Hey, I'm gonna be gone for the rest of the night possibly. If my busy gets back to me, we gonna be watching mad max.

[Legend]

Hey, I'm gonna be gone for the rest of the night possibly. If my busy gets back to me, we gonna be watching mad max.

@souleaterfan320

Okay. Bye.