[OOC] Myriad Reality

[Efficacy]

...Really?

@Source

sorry :[
I wonder how long it'll take Dark to drop the charade without Storm at him.

[Legend]

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sorry :[
I wonder how long it'll take Dark to drop the charade without Storm at him.

@Efficacy

I know the answer.

[DarkwolfX37]

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I know the answer.

@Legend

Which is?

[Legend]

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Which is?

@DarkwolfX37

I try to not discuss the IC in the OOC.

[souleaterfan320]

Yo dark, did you see my results from that quiz thingy?

[souleaterfan320]

Also, id like to do something ic wise involving my arc. If anyone is interested, let me know. It'll happen at the base.

[DarkwolfX37]

Yo dark, did you see my results from that quiz thingy?

@souleaterfan320

Yep.

[DarkwolfX37]

Critique me harshly.

My Hider

A young human found himself walking through the slums of Millennial City alone. Normally he would avoid such places, or be with his partner Zee, but today's circumstances decided otherwise. The machine shop he needed was here, and angels were rarely around due to somewhat higher influence of demons. Besides, today was Zee and his monthly day away from each other. Having just finished with his errand, Kain thought back to the day before as he walked.

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One spirit and one human were at a table in the alley of their home. An angel stood before them, a sword in hand and malevolence in his eyes. His white wings served as a beautiful backdrop to the menacing expression he wore. Kain and Zadkiel, known to Kain as "Zee," stood facing each other, ignoring this threat as they conversed.

"I'll handle this one. You focus on taking your turn." Zadkiel said.

"No way. I've been needing actual combat to make sure I've really mastered my new technique. I'll fight him."

"No, I'll fight him."

This back and forth quickly devolved to bickering and name calling, slowly turning the angel's motivation from completing his righteous mission into simple anger.

"Enough!" he called, finally at his limit. "I will retrieve the mantle of the holy Zadkiel, regardless of whether I must kill you both or just it's holder! Prepare yourselves!"

Zadkiel began to step forward but was cut off by Kain throwing a knife, Zadkiel's soulshard, at the angel. It flew past, missing it's target, and the angel began to laugh. That is, he began to laugh. This was quickly cut off as Kain teleported to the soulshard, still in mid-flight, and grabbed it just as it began to leave the range of his reach, immediately using it to cut into the back of the angel's neck.

"Yes! Perfect execution, and perfect execution!" Kain exclaimed as the angel fell to the ground. "Too bad that he didn't move, I might as well have been practicing on a target." He sat back down at the table and viewed the chessboard. "Damn. I can't see a way out of this. I think you win.

"You know, for someone who wants to know everything, you sure pass up a lot of chances to learn things. Now we don't know if he was working on his own or if there are others after us." Zadkiel began to reset the board. Soon the spirit and human began to play again.

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[souleaterfan320]

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Yep.

@DarkwolfX37

Wadiya think?

[Etcetera]

Also, id like to do something ic wise involving my arc. If anyone is interested, let me know. It'll happen at the base.

@souleaterfan320

Remember what we talked about before. There is no plan, there is only do.

[Etcetera]

Critique me harshly.

My Hider

A young human found himself walking through the slums of Millennial City alone. Normally he would avoid such places, or be with his partner Zee, but today's circumstances decided otherwise. The machine shop he needed was here, and angels were rarely around due to somewhat higher influence of demons. Besides, today was Zee and his monthly day away from each other. Having just finished with his errand, Kain thought back to the day before as he walked.

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One spirit and one human were at a table in the alley of their home. An angel stood before them, a sword in hand and malevolence in his eyes. His white wings served as a beautiful backdrop to the menacing expression he wore. Kain and Zadkiel, known to Kain as "Zee," stood facing each other, ignoring this threat as they conversed.

"I'll handle this one. You focus on taking your turn." Zadkiel said.

"No way. I've been needing actual combat to make sure I've really mastered my new technique. I'll fight him."

"No, I'll fight him."

This back and forth quickly devolved to bickering and name calling, slowly turning the angel's motivation from completing his righteous mission into simple anger.

"Enough!" he called, finally at his limit. "I will retrieve the mantle of the holy Zadkiel, regardless of whether I must kill you both or just it's holder! Prepare yourselves!"

Zadkiel began to step forward but was cut off by Kain throwing a knife, Zadkiel's soulshard, at the angel. It flew past, missing it's target, and the angel began to laugh. That is, he began to laugh. This was quickly cut off as Kain teleported to the soulshard, still in mid-flight, and grabbed it just as it began to leave the range of his reach, immediately using it to cut into the back of the angel's neck.

"Yes! Perfect execution, and perfect execution!" Kain exclaimed as the angel fell to the ground. "Too bad that he didn't move, I might as well have been practicing on a target." He sat back down at the table and viewed the chessboard. "Damn. I can't see a way out of this. I think you win.

"You know, for someone who wants to know everything, you sure pass up a lot of chances to learn things. Now we don't know if he was working on his own or if there are others after us." Zadkiel began to reset the board. Soon the spirit and human began to play again.

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@DarkwolfX37

Possessive "its" has no apostrophe. You added a comma where there should be a semicolon after "move." The tone is fine, but it doesn't match your style.

[souleaterfan320]

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Remember what we talked about before. There is no plan, there is only do.

@Etcetera

Kind of hard when no one replies.

[Etcetera]

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Kind of hard when no one replies.

@souleaterfan320

Because you don't talk to anybody.

[souleaterfan320]

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Because you don't talk to anybody.

@Etcetera

Mierno literally said ' hello, all.' not one person responded.

[Nimda]

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Mierno literally said ' hello, all.' not one person responded.

@souleaterfan320

Yeah. As I said,

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Because you don't talk to anybody.

@Etcetera

Talk to a specific person or else everyone will be busy with their own ordeal.

[DarkwolfX37]

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Possessive "its" has no apostrophe. You added a comma where there should be a semicolon after "move." The tone is fine, but it doesn't match your style.

@Etcetera

I've been having trouble writing recently and I don't know why.

[Nimda]

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I've been having trouble writing recently and I don't know why.

@DarkwolfX37

Strange. Hopefully everything's alright.

[souleaterfan320]

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Yeah. As I said,

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Talk to a specific person or else everyone will be busy with their own ordeal.

@Nimda

Thats not fair to the person, then. Mierno addressed everyone in the room informally with what he said, therefore, he was talking to all of them. And, if I remember correctly, a certain someone told me to post as if this whole Rp were real, am I wrong?

[souleaterfan320]

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I've been having trouble writing recently and I don't know why.

@DarkwolfX37

Same.

[Efficacy]

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Thats not fair to the person, then. Mierno addressed everyone in the room informally with what he said, therefore, he was talking to all of them. And, if I remember correctly, a certain someone told me to post as if this whole Rp were real, am I wrong?

@souleaterfan320

wait
did you post
well, this is embarrassing