[OOC] Myriad Reality

[whizzball1]

Legend said
It wasn't necessary and felt so tacked on. Ewwww. Why is that such a hype now?

I don't even know. ;~; But I removed it from my favourites, so I won't be receiving any new updates from it. And I loved the premise so much... Things like that ruin a good story.

[Valiance]

Legend said
Mmmmaaaaayyyybe. The plot is weak, the character development is slow, the situational imagery isn't locked in, and worst of all, it's in third person.

I agree with all that except the plot thing. The plot is decent, but I'm not saying it couldn't be better.

[Legend]

whizzball1 said
I don't even know. ;~; But I removed it from my favourites, so I won't be receiving any new updates from it. And I loved the premise so much... Things like that ruin a good story.

Writers these days. Sheesh.

[whizzball1]

Legend said
Writers these days. Sheesh.

Yeah.

[Legend]

Valiance said
I agree with all that except the plot thing. The plot is decent, but I'm not saying it couldn't be better.

Wait, you're a fan of first person too?

[Legend]

whizzball1 said
Yeah.

It's not that hard to write a clean, decent story.

[Valiance]

Legend said
Wait, you're a fan of first person too?

It depends. It's just that third person doesn't work with Percy Jackson at all.

[Legend]

Valiance said
It depends. It's just that third person doesn't work with Percy Jackson at all.

No, not at all. And a hundred supernovas?

[Valiance]

Legend said
No, not at all. And a hundred supernovas?

*Supernovae. But yeah, not that powerful in the grand scheme of things.

[Legend]

Valiance said
*Supernovae. But yeah, not that powerful in the grand scheme of things.

No, Supernovas is just as valid.

Although I think that pre-RPG it wouldn't be, but post-ifunny it is. At least to me.

[whizzball1]

whizzball1 said
It's... Not... Working... *her eyes light up, and she adds harmonised order to the mix. Finally, with their combined power, the universe rights itself, and Ruby falls to her knees exhaustedly* We... We did it.

Basically, their power should have been enough to fix it, but since it was caused by Svár's harmonised chaos, Ruby had to revert that in order to let their power right the universe.

[Valiance]

Legend said
No, Supernovas is just as valid.Although I think that pre-RPG it wouldn't be, but post-ifunny it is. At least to me.

Supernovae sounds cooler though, so supernovae.

[Legend]

whizzball1 said
Basically, their power should have been enough to fix it, but since it was caused by Svár's harmonised chaos, Ruby had to revert that in order to let their power right the universe.

Ah, awesome.

Valiance said
Supernovae sounds cooler though, so supernovae.

Supernovas sounds much cooler than supernovae.

[whizzball1]

Be back in a bit.

[Legend]

whizzball1 said
Be back in a bit.

Okah.

[Valiance]

Legend said
Ah, awesome. Supernovas sounds much cooler than supernovae.

Supernovae not only sounds cooler, but it also looks 20x cooler than it sounds.

[Legend]

Valiance said
Supernovae not only sounds cooler, but it also looks 20x cooler than it sounds.

Supernovae makes me think of childbirth.

[Valiance]

Legend said
Supernovae makes me think of childbirth.

That's a problem.

[Legend]

Valiance said
That's a problem.

It sounds to much like the Latin roots. Supernovas sounds like the cool kid on the block, while supernova works in a cubicle.

[Valiance]

Legend said
It sounds to much like the Latin roots. Supernovas sounds like the cool kid on the block, while supernova works in a cubicle.

:p