AlienBastard said
I'd like to see more info, the picture gallery of military personnel and vehicles fails to explain the concept of the faction to me and it seems that for the past couple weeks it's almost entirely what you've worked on. Sure they like war and are likely militaristic due to their origins, but I know nothing of their society like why they're a elective monarchy or how their culture has developed.I am aware you app is a work in progress, but you need to progress your app in other areas outside of military before I can do any early acceptance.Everything is in check; while technology has no information the culture and military sections explain well enough what their tech is like and I am aware of the .1c propulsion which for your guys is fine due to their unique circumstances.The only area that i'd like to see filled out more is their history section, however I know the basics of it through chatzy enough. However you probably should fill out the history section so other players know that some people from their fleet deserted while they were at Eridani around 2310 or so.Accepted.Too WIP to accept for now; however the properties of the planet you have will be official.The desert world is now named Setekh!While you have many unfilled out sheets for organizations and characters, the baseline factions and worlds are enough information to start IC with; accepted.Also the water world is officially named Esylium now.While currently your lore is incomplete, especially in regards to military and tech [I know some bits about their capabilities from what I gleamed off the app sheet and what I know from OOC, however] you're accepted.The population count of the city you have seems a bit small; feel free to up the numbers to a couple million if you want.And as a note, feel free to make the plants any color you like; Isotope's genetic engineering of plants has opened the door for more radical modification of plant life. Not to mention already today there's plants that glow in the dark.Accepted; the AI is made in a way that's not ridiculous or post-singularity and everything checks out.The ships seem a bit advanced in design; although this may due to the deisgn more than actual advancement.We can work out the details on the history later, since the attacking of the palace will have fun consequences that I need to think through. However the titan-like's name I am going to modify a bit if it's okay with you. [Yumogesi is my proposed name]Will wait before accepting since your app is still too WIP to accept.Looks good to me, although the early accounts of the history seem a bit dubious with the any weapon aspect; genetic modification has advantages, but a guy with a rifle is going to take down a super human who is bare handed unless the weapons used were like, swords or something. Other that that, accepted.Seems fine to me outside the warp gate control; of which I mentioned earlier.Just mind the internal consistency principle; other players can use similar tech if they choose to do so.Other than that, semi-accepted; i'll wait until the warp gate control aspect is taken out. Uranus being used as a spot of activity is okay by me.A faction on a gas giant- who would've expected that?Accepted; however this means now that repulser magnets can be used by other players on other gas giants; but they must have gravity similar to earth's in order to work right.A break way state of the belt state. Belt state ain't going to like this one.I suspect there probably has been some unpleasant conflicts in the intervening time.Accepted as I feel the military and culture gave good info on the technology.
TachyonBlade said
Whoops, I should have clarified the duel to the death stuff...
