All in a Day's Work: A Superhero RP interest check and signups

[Dark Angel]

Hope this is alright, but please tell me if anything seems to OPish or vague. She's kind of like a villain at first, but can be won over.

Name: Eve/Ira (Wrath) No last name.
Age: 18
Gender: Female

Appearance:

Eve

Exactly like the image, only both of her horns are complete, and she doesn't have any hair accessories. Eve usually only wears her armor when fighting or when she is acting as Ira, other than that she just wears casual outfits, along with various accessories to hide her horns. She is rather short girl, with long black hair and red eyes which contrast with her pale skin. A set of black, pointed horns come from her head.

Personality: Eve is usually a quiet, blunt person when unprovoked. She is brutally honest, sometimes coming off as rude, and has a great deal of sarcasm to give out. Smiling and laughing are a rare occurrence for her, and she remains cold and hateful towards others. Impressing Eve is not an easy feat, as she prefers not to show any emotion except bitterness. However, she is easily angered. When Eve is angry, all hell breaks loose. She has a hard time suppressing her rage, and will snap at others, sometimes becoming violent when extremely enraged, which is how she earned the title 'Ira'. She is actually afraid of herself, and is dazed and distant when she returns to normal and seeing the destruction she caused. Has a soft spot for children and animals, and is bisexual.

Skills: She can hold her own in a fight, be it hand to hand or verbal, but relies more on her summoning. Can bake a mean apple pie.

Abilities:
Wrath: She has above an average girls strength, but prefers not to use it. When in an extremely angered state, Eve disregards her surroundings, focusing on destroying whatever it is that has caused her outburst. She often destroys objects around her and causes harm. It seems as if she doesn't have any emotion except the wish to destroy, but with enough prying she can be reached and brought back to a normal, sober state.

Summoning: Eve can summon and control a certain number of creatures, using them to defeat her opponents. However, each summons requires blood from the summoner and a reward for the summoned one. Rewards vary for each, although most are paid in sweets or something else they desire. The reward must be of equal value as to why they were summoned and how much energy the summoned spent on a task.
Commonly requested beings:
-Nightmares: A dark, wispy, figure, which shift between forms. Original form is a black mist. They envelope their prey, slowly suffocating them and causing hallucinations. Eve prefers not to use them, given they creep even her out.
- Yig: A white snake with cloudy white eyes. Most commonly requested by Eve, it changes size to either a small corn snake or a large anaconda. Good for spying and getting out of sticky situations.
-Behemoth: An extremely large, indescribable animal. Black, with glowing green and red patterns. It hulks around, its huge hands trailing along the floor. Probably the closest to Eve, given how they are both easily angered and are particularly attached to sweets.

She is slightly resistant to heat, being able to withstand temperatures well over the human body when in her Daemon Armor. In close contact she is fine, but she is vulnerable to long distance and mental attacks. Illusions throw her mind off balance, especially when enraged as she is focused on destroying and cannot think very well. By aiming at the right spot( anywhere skin shows) with a long distance weapon (Crossbow, rifle, etc), she will take damage. Her healing is the same as an average humans. She is actually afraid of herself, and is often in a shocked daze when she sees the destruction caused by herself. Because of thus she tries very hard to remain calm, taking medication and visiting her sister to relieve stress often.

Equipment:
-Daemon armor: Protects her body from most normal physical attacks, but only to a certain degree. (Cannot stop a car from harming her, but can stop the blow of a fist or side arm shot.)
- Long blade: A sword Eve inherited from her grandfather. Used for normal sword purposes, such a fighting.
-Short blade: A smaller, easily hid blade that she uses to cut herself for blood when summoning.
-Cape: Flaps majestically. Gets caught in fans.

Brief Backstory:

backstory

Being the first daughter of a rich family, Eve was expected to have a successful future and marry to a rich man. Her family often pressured her to be a perfect, prim maiden. When tasks were not done correctly, her parents shunned her, shutting her out or subtly insulting her. Then Tiffany came. Tiffany was the second daughter, and the youngest of the family. Tiffany was sickly, but always was there for Eve. It seemed as if Eve was the younger sister, with Tiffany always being the one to support her.

Everything was normal, until Eve's powers started appearing when she was 13. Strange animals started following her around, there one minute and gone in the next. Slowly, more animals began taking a liking to her, and you could either find her with her sister or with animals. One day, she noticed something strange about her face. Two stumps were coming from her head, causing her to panic. She left her estate, hiding out in the garden until Tiffany came to find her. Tiffany did not scream or call her an abomination like her parents, but instead, took her hand and told her that 'she was still her sister, and nothing could change that'. They left, seemingly disappearing. In all actuality, they had settled down in a small town by the name of Greenfield, Tiffany being enrolling into school while Eve took a part time job at small diner.

Two years later, Tiffany was injured in a squabble between two super humans, her entire lower half becoming paralyzed. Eve was devastated, realizing that her sister was never going to walk again. She deemed that people with powers like what she had seen were a threat to everyone, and vowed from that day on to stop super humans from hurting others. She does not particularly care whether you are a 'villain or 'hero', and does not regard herself as either.

[VitaVitaAR]

@DeathstrokeSW: Um, okay, looking this over... it's not a "superhuman situation". ^^; It's supercriminals in a specific city, many of which are not actually superhuman. That was just bothering me. ^^; I'm not completely sure, but there's no reasons to reject him as of now, so accepted.

@World Traveler: Um, I'm really not sure how this would work out.

@Dark Angel: Accepted! This is an antihero done right, eh-heh.

[World Traveler]

Please allow me to share what I had in mind.

My character would be a member of an ancient order who have been driven by the power of information. This organisation uses the archive of knowledge to maintain a balance in the world. They are either good nor evil in their pursuit; however, have the single goal of protecting the planet and its people from a catastrophic event. In the modern age information became even more important. In the age of heroes and villains it was the identity of those heroes and villains thats become the focus of this group. Five weeks ago a devastating betrayal resulted in a select number of heroes identities being stolen from the vault of knowledge. As a member of this organisation my character has been charged with recovering the traitor; thereby, protecting those heroes identity. My character has tracked the traitor down to Greenfield.

I will be playing both the traitor and the character chasing him. My plan would be to have the traitor rebrand himself as a villain himself with the goal of using the knowledge he stole to help rally a group of villains under his command with the promise that they will be able to finally kill their arch nemesis. The character chasing after this new villain will have to turn to the super heroes of Greenfield to assist in taking down the villain. Something they will have to do if they want to protect their identity and those close to them.

Hopefully that makes some more sense?

[Dark Angel]

Ok, thanks~ Fixed up some typos and stuff. I can start writing up an introduction.

[Equally-Cynical]

Then here is my character.

Abessus

Name: Martin Adams
Alter Ego: Abessus.
Age: Forty-One
Born as the bastard son of a town's mayor and a crack whore, he was thrown into an orphanage at birth, far away from the town of his birth. He was always feared by the schoolyard bullies, whom he would pick on, all in defense of the weaker children. Yet, for all his popularity, he was never truly popular, smart, or athletic for that matter. On his eighteenth birthday, he joined the local police, as an intern. While there, he witnessed firsthand the corruption of the city police. As a religious man, he prayed that they see justice done to them. One night, he was granted his wish; his god had answered him. "MARTIN. LONG HAVE I SEEN YOUR SUPPOSED FAITH IN ME, AND NOW I SEE THAT YOU, OF ALL MY CHILDREN, WILL BE AN INSTRUMENT TO MY WILL!" Martins powers were granted that night, given if he could survive the horrible side-effects of his powers. He was granted the power of rot, stagnation, and festering diseases, at the cost of the failure of his nerves, disabling all feeling.
[hider=Powers] Abessus has the power to rot his surroundings to ruin. While unnaturally effective and deadly, he must use sped-up regeneration to heal his ravaged organs. Every time he uses his powers, his organs also are ravaged by his powers.
Rot Blast: Clenching his fist, he causes an invisible rot to consume his foes. Slow, but painfully effective.
The Touch of Death: Touching the target, he focuses his powers on his hands, rotting the target even faster.
Ruinous Explosion: Screaming at the pain his body endures, a fifty foot radial blast of sheer rot explodes from his form. The effect is almost always instantaneous desiccation, and the ground at his feet looks as though an explosion had occurred. While extremely powerful, he must rest for a full week, to allow his liquified organs to regenerate.
Heal: He speed up his healing powers to allow a quick heal in combat.
Strenght: He has superhuman strength, to a mild degree

Weapons

Martin carries the following weapons and equipment.
Glock pistol: A simple pistol, yet armed with armor piercing rounds in an extended magazine.
Warhammer: Upon recieving his powers, he was given multiple items to aid him. One such item is this adamantium one-handed warhammer.
Armor of Faith: A suit of slim, stone gray armor, strong enough to deflect small arms fire. No helmet included.

[Raineh Daze]

The edginess is going to poke an eye out.

[VitaVitaAR]

@Equally-Cynical: Okay, I've tried hard to be nice and calm when people submit unfitting bios. I thought the setting and tone were very clear but I still tried to be nice. Sure, it's not all total cheerful lightheartedness, but it's not dark doom and gloom.

This is so over-the-top dark it's ridiculous. Did you even read what I wrote on the setting information or anything? Did you look at the tone of the stuff I worked at all? Your character is so edgy it feels like it'd be illegal to read his bio in a public place. He absolutely does not fit tonally and I will not accept him.

On top of that, his abilities are completely broken and it doesn't look like there's any way to avoid them, on top of being absolutely disgusting.