[OOC] A Crown of Bones

[BingTheWing]

Anyone up for Order of the Rose witchhunter?

[vietmyke]

Lots of young masters we have...

[Gelgarin]

Too true.

[Rayn Night]

And Oddly, the oldest ones are Guardians xD

[vietmyke]

I think, the oldest ones are the two non guardians/tower mages, the feral mage and the mere. That is, not including your character

I stand corrected.

[Headphones]

|| Character name || Age || Gender || Race || Homeland || Affiliation || Current location || Played by || Page

Mira Feral || 23 years || female || Mage (Geomancer) || Kain || None || Valeal || PhantomSekai || Pg.1
Emil Errant || 18 years || male || Mage (Blessings+Healing) || Valeal || None [Tower] || vietmyke || Pg.1
Genshal Hyres || 21 years || male || Human (Sellsword) || None (Lord Teron) ||Veleal/Valaria || Gelgarin || Pg.1
Tegan || 29 years || female || Guardian || Ferros || Tower || Valeal || Free Faller || Pg.2
Alaric Vestille || 19 years || male || Mage (Hydromancy) || Gorgon || Tower || --- || Saltwater Thief || Pg.2
Kotori Nomashiya || 18 years || female || Guardian || Gorgon || Tower || --- || Feisty-Pants || Pg.3
Ryan “Skye” Rakesh Paimon Blaumond || 18 years || male || Mage (Hydromancy+Aeromancy) || Ferros || Queen of Ferros || --- || Headphones || Pg.3

[Gelgarin]

I think present location might be a pretty useful criteria to note. Most of us seem to have moved around a fair bit since birth, and keeping track of who is where is a bit tricky.

[Rayn Night]

Aaaannnddddd done
Character sheet

[Headphones]

Alright I edited the table a bit after reading the sheets. Rayn, I didn't write down you character, because I believe you have your facts wrong. You have written down that your character is of age 34 and was born in Valaria. How could that be possible when Valaria was apparently formed after the war with Malfear ended?
The war with Malfear lasted 10 years and the time from its end to the role-play's present is 12 years, meaning a total of 22 years from the start of the war to present times. Your character would have already been 12 years old at the beginning of the war and 22 when it ended, if he is indeed 34 years old.
In my opinion, after reading through the provided information, Valaria has been in existence as a term for around the past year in story time.

[Rayn Night]

Aaaah yes, I misread. I will rectify this immediately

[Headphones]

Not to mention you never mentioned the war with Malfear and how it influenced your character.

[Rayn Night]

Yes, I just realized. I do not know why my mind didn't process the fact that it happened not long ago -___-

[Brand]

Rayn Night said
Aaaah yes, I misread. I will rectify this immediately

Just read your CS. Make the corrections Headphones stated earlier concerning the timeline of Valaria, and try to add a few sentences alluding to the war against Malfear, like whether or not your character participated, and you'll be fine.

EDIT: But yeah as Headphones said, going more in depth about your involvement in the war, or how it affected your character, would be beneficial.

[Headphones]

I'm glad you agree with me, Brand.
Say, wouldn't it be best if you added a table similar to the one I made on the first page? I think it would be a good idea to include age, gender, and race next to every name in the "Accepted Characters" section.

[Brand]

I'll probably do something similar.

So Bunnita, Daired, Bing and Tali still need to submit their CSs' but I think we have enough players to start. I'm fairly busy tonight with homework, but I'll probably get started on the IC either tomorrow night or Wednesday.

I'm also reviewing Headphones and Fiestypants CS now.

[Rayn Night]

Alright, so, question:

The war was 10 years long. Is that starting the time Malfear ran into the barbaric lands?

[Brand]

Rayn Night said
Alright, so, question:The war was 10 years long. Is that starting the time Malfear ran into the barbaric lands?

No, starting from the time he invaded Valeal and destroyed the Mages Tower. The timeline up to that point is flexible and up for speculation.

[Headphones]

Brand said
I'm also reviewing Headphones and Fiestypants CS now.

Mine will probably take you awhile, huh X3

[Gelgarin]

As far as tables go - I've converted Headphones' into a google doc to make it easier to read/update.

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1gXCnqisLsRgQfVRa4DEWxU2dhBbXWy_e9l_K5XHhpqI/edit#gid=0

I'm still working on it, but it should serve us OK I reckon.

[Headphones]

Gelgarin said
As far as tables go - I've converted Headphones' into a google doc to make it easier to read/update. I'm still working on it, but it should serve us OK I reckon.

Could you grant me permission to see that? It is my work, after all.

Also, Gelgarin, you never responded to my post on your introduction thread. Did you see it?