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Basically same deal as detailed in the Interest Check.





If people want to start discussing ideas for general plot ideas/direction feel free, if nothing is suggested I'll probably set up a typical "Veteran Magical Person recruits new people, then they go on fighting witches until something bad happens" scenario.

The RP will be at a Low-Casual level, that way some detail and focus can be invested in post but you're free to really focus on the characters, the plot etc. and not worry about typing enough about say the temperature and colour of a doorknob in order to have an acceptable post. That way we get all the details/info that's actually important and can focus on the RP itself rather than minimum word requirements.



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Suzuka, Suzuhara

Nickname: "Su"
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Personality: Suzuka suffers from a serious lack of confidence in her own abilities, and a tendency to avoid her problems rather than face them directly. Outdoorsy, quiet and introverted, she's the kind of girl who'd spend hours watching water flow down a creek, for no real reason at all. While she agrees with the concept of books, she's never been as into them as others, and would much rather look at a pleasant painting or listen to calming music. Actively seeks friendship, but has difficulty communicating at times due to her lack of confidence.

Wish: "I just want to disappear..."

Bio: There exists no record of Suzuka's existence before her becoming a Magical Girl, even in the memory of the one who formed a contract with her. She has been a Magical Girl for two weeks, so while she's hardly on the same level as a veteran, she at least has a very rudimentary understanding of what her duty is and how to use her magical abilities. Has been travelling since she made her wish, and was guided here by the one who gave her the power of magic.

Magic/Abilities: Suzuka's primary magical ability is her Hiding Technique, better known by the name "Invisibility." Using this ability, she is able to cloak herself in magical energy to evaporate completely from sight and render herself or targets of her choosing completely undetectable. She is also capable of an Escape Technique, or "Short-Ranged Teleportation."

Besides her more personal abilities, she is able to use some fundamental magic using her ability to create a magical "Cloak" that covers objects or individuals. Like most magical girls, she has a personal weapon (In her case, Knives) that she is able to create and manipulate using magical power.

Weapon: Knives

Other Details:
-Like all Magical Girls, Suzuka has an extraordinary amount of room for growth and expansion of her abilities. She is yet to develop a "Finishing move", but such a technique could very well appear in the near future, and she would not be surprised.
-Has yet to come into contact with the cast of characters.
-Apparently, she is faster than most other magical girls.
-You can click her appearance picture to see a larger version. How nice!
-I changed the format a little, to make it less superfluous. It would be great, if I didn't just end up putting a bunch of random stuff at the end like this.
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Im copy/ pasting this character from my cs list in my sig. (Feel free to poke about. I welcome your critiques and feedback) and editing it to match the cs you asked us for. This char was for another rp, but that RP unfortunately never got going so i never got to use the character.
NAME

Marry M. Youngblood


AGE

16


APPEARANCE


5'4 and 95lbs.

WEAPONS


Her assortment of staffs^^^, and her signature staff(Below)

SPECIAL ABILITY

Transform/ summon, and can teleport through mirrors.


WISH

[i]"Its my wish, that everyone could sweat a few more drops, cry a few more tears, and bleed a bit more blood. That they could give just a little bit more of themselves, before they died."

PERSONALITY

Violent, sinister, dark. Blood thirsty


WITCH NAME

Bloody Marry


WITCH APEARANCE

(Ill draw this one and post it on devianart.) Tall, thin, floating, ghost like thing, covered in mask, and mirrors. They have very long arms, with monstrous claws on the end.

WITCH NATURE

Violent, Merciless, Vengefull

WITCH ATTACK

Besides claw attacks, she will form an orb of unsettling energy and hurl it at people. The orb will physically push you, and cause massive hallucinations. Can also push/ pull you into a mirror to fight there.

MINIONS

flying lockets, keys, and notebooks.


What you asked for but I didnt include due to copy/ paste

Gender identity

I didnt quite get what you meant is different between that and biological sex... Either way, Mary is female.


Other Gear

Hand mirrors, and a creepy glowing red eyed glare.


Reason for joining pact

see Wish above. But bassically, for the sake of bloodshed and carnage.


Bio:

Stereotypical "woe is me i was bullied, now im out to settle an emotional score with blood" deal.
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With all those negative emotions, you're really going to witchify rather quickly. Not that that isn't cool~!

As for Witch Name, that isn't the sort of name Witches have. Witch names are, well, actual names.

Oh, and that's a pretty weak wish, so your magical power probably wouldn't be that high.
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Tatsua Aiisen said
With all those negative emotions, you're really going to witchify rather quickly. Not that that isn't cool~!As for Witch Name, that isn't the sort of name Witches have. Witch names are, well, actual names.Oh, and that's a pretty weak wish, so your magical power probably wouldn't be that high.


Nah this character is more the less just an angry person, not an all powerfull witch. XD
I actually made them with the thought of "scarier than they are dangerous."

Her witch name isnt her normal name because, she transforms to become a witch. Without transforming her only power is intimidatiom and running through mirrors. After transforming she can do the witch attack and has claws.
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Turning into a Witch is the magical girl equivalent to dying, and there is no coming back from that without a wish made by the strongest magical girl ever to exist.

Negative emotions are going to cloud your Soul Gem, meaning you'll "die" faster.

Witches have different names than the Magical Girls they once were, and the names most certainly aren't "Bloody Mary."
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    [*]No comming back- Didnt intend to. It was supposed to be a final fight for your life thing.
    [*]Died faster- check
    [*]Cheesy bad name- oops. It was like 2 am cut me some slack! Haha!


Well that seems to cover about all the basses. Im pretty satisfied with this character. ^_^
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Also, one last thing, what does your wish have to do with your magical powers? I can't really see a relation...
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Again its more for intimidation. Her powers arent realy all that grand accept for tge mirror trick. Her thing is to be more intimidating than actually dangerous. Its a wish that, if somebody hears her say, will likely lead people to believe she is demented.
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Again it wa really really late, and i had been off work for less than an hour. Cut me a tad bit of slack yeah?

What do you intend to get at poking my character like this anyways? Do you think i should change it? Are you just trying to get me to leave the rp? Or is this all supposed to be humprous and im missing it because were talking text based which makes communicating sarcasm and essential body language practically impossible?
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Again its more for intimidation. Her powers arent realy all that grand accept for tge mirror trick. Her thing is to be more intimidating than actually dangerous. Its a wish that, if somebody hears her say, will likely lead people to believe she is demented.


Generally speaking, magical abilities will have something to do with the wish you made. For example, Sayaka from the show wished somebody into good health, and she gained regeneration abilities.

Im copy/ pasting this character from my cs list in my sig. (Feel free to poke about. I welcome your critiques and feedback)

Again it wa really really late, and i had been off work for less than an hour. Cut me a tad bit of slack yeah?

What do you intend to get at poking my character like this anyways? Do you think i should change it? Are you just trying to get me to leave the rp? Or is this all supposed to be humprous and im missing it because were talking text based which makes communicating sarcasm and essential body language practically impossible?


I'm literally just doing what you asked, I'm not sure why you're randomly taking offence to something that isn't any different from any other CS Review. I'm doing what I can to help make your character fit into the universe better using my expansive knowledge of the source material. If I wanted you to leave, I would tell you that to your face.
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No NO NO NO NO! Im not taking offense im just curious. An i was thinking that you just critiquing like i mentioned, but i figured you woulda given me a singular list of greivances. Haha dont worry! Your advice is being taken in notes. So that if i make anothet character like this, i dont make the same mistakes.

Im sorry if my last responce seemed edgey. Trying to rp an put lunch together at the same time.
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Also, ive never actually heard of much less seen the show this is based upon. (I know the shames.)
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Well, if you ever wish to watch the series, the best way to approach it would probably to watch the three movies. The English dub is horrible though, just so you know.
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@Notdeadyet: You'll need to get rid of the 'transform into a witch' power and replace it with something else.
For Magical Girls that current power is the equivalent of having the power to kill yourself on command, it's what happens when you die. Like say in walking dead you turn into a walker when you die, it's just what happens.

Don't feel bad about Tatsua having issues with your character though, she also was trying to give me crap in the Interest Check for allowing characters to be made/accepted that weren't 16 year old girls.

@Tatsua: Accepted.
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Ill scratch that and come back t you later today with something different. XD it looks like this character fits a general idea f this rp but is not cut out for this. Ty both for your input. Ill correct and come back with something better.
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Tatsua having issues with your character though, she also was trying to give me crap in the Interest Check for allowing characters to be made/accepted that weren't 16 year old girls.


Because it's not possible in the universe you're placing this roleplay in. I'll stop mentioning it though, if only because I know you'll just kick me from the roleplay if I continue to stress it. (Oh, and 16 year old girls would be just barely within the realm of possibility. Any older and they don't qualify.)

Some quick questions,
1: Is Kyubey in this? Or is it just another Incubator?
2: Will you (the GM) be playing as the veteran of the group, or are you expecting a player to?
3: Will there be NPC magical girls, without spoiling anything?
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Tatsua Aiisen said Because it's not possible in the universe you're placing this roleplay in.


Fictional Universe, which I made a fictional alteration to. I really don't see how it's that different from a retcon of characters.
Especially when the shows excuse was as weak as "Girls are more emotional" when there are many guys who are very emotional, and many girls who aren't that emotional. It would make more sense just to say anyone within ______ emotional hormone level as a requirement rather than restrict it by their genitalia.

Tatsua Aiisen said I'll stop mentioning it though, if only because I know you'll just kick me from the roleplay if I continue to stress it.


I don't kick people for having a different opinion. I only kick people if there are halting progress in the RP, were warned to stop and kept doing it anyways.

Tatsua Aiisen said Some quick questions,
1: Is Kyubey in this? Or is it just another Incubator?
2: Will you be playing as the veteran of the group, or are you expecting a player to?
3: Will there be NPC magical girls, without spoiling anything?


1: Considering the Retcon it's only appropriate it would be another Incubator. But since Incubators rely on logic alone and lack any emotion they will probably act essentially the same way.

2: It's open to anyone atm who wishes to make a Veteran character. But if no one wishes to then I will be providing a Veteran Character.

3: NPC magical girls will be provided as needed by the RP. The direction we take might demand I make several, it might demand I never make any.
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My CS will be up soon.

notdeadyet said
Im copy/ pasting this character from my cs list in my sig. (Feel free to poke about. I welcome your critiques and feedback) and editing it to match the cs you asked us for. This char was for another rp, but that RP unfortunately never got going so i never got to use the character.5'4 and 95lbs.Her assortment of staffs^^^, and her signature staff(Below)[i]"Its my wish, that everyone could sweat a few more drops, cry a few more tears, and bleed a bit more blood. That they could give just a little bit more of themselves, before they died."(Ill draw this one and post it on devianart.) Tall, thin, floating, ghost like thing, covered in mask, and mirrors. They have very long arms, with monstrous claws on the end.Violent, Merciless, VengefullBesides claw attacks, she will form an orb of unsettling energy and hurl it at people. The orb will physically push you, and cause massive hallucinations. Can also push/ pull you into a mirror to fight there.


People have prolly already said this but...

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Witches are what happens when a magical girl dies. Either they go completely insane with hysteria and sadness and depression so that their soul gem gets corrupted or your soul gem gets destroyed. Witches names are strange but are actually names, most of the times. Charlotte, Kriemhild Gretchen, etc.

They don't come back. They die and give birth to a new, evil entity that kills shit. Then other magical girls kill them.

Them those girls become witches.

Then more girls come and kill them-

notdeadyet said
Also, ive never actually heard of much less seen the show this is based upon. (I know the shames.)


Oh. OOOOOH.
That's why! You haven't actually watched Madoka Magica.
I suggest doing so, because the generic magical girl really can't be used for this. Because of soul gems, incubators, witches, etc. Having an angsty girl is a no no unless you want them to die fast, because soul gems get corrupted by dark emotions like sadness and when they corrupt completely...
Witch. Death.

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Yeah your characters going to die and fast, sorry. Magical Girl Derpy flies away on a broom to kill other magical girls for land.
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