Notdeadyet,
To glom on to Lalli I have questions:
1) You stated that you have Psi powers that allow you to do a host of things- appear through the floor, control various elements, causing nightmares and the odd bite power.
2) You have a body made of mud, not really a problem if you constitute it like any other elemental power based person who transforms into their element. But like Lalli, if you are made of mud and can absorb kinetic attacks because your body is malleable, what are your bones made of and do you actually have bones?
The first two powers seem a bit disconnected, as they don’t offer a cohesive synergy in their application. i.e. if you are mud how can you appear through a floor that presumable is not porous? How do you control other elements, specifically fire and air if you are composite of two elements, water and earth? Those are diametrically opposed elements.
Like Lalli said you need to list and describe all the powers you can use/do otherwise it will appear as if you are pulling powers outta your ass to save yourself in a fight.
Your terror psi powers that you list are interesting. Not overly powerful since I presume that when you use them you are in effect making yourself weaker, which ultimately gives your opponent a distinct advantage over you.
Then we come to the marysue-ish part of your character-
Out of these ‘other powers’ the only ones that actually make any sense to the character you have presented are (4) Transformation, (7) What the f*** do you call this?, (8) Mass Manipulation, and (9) Non consistent form. These four powers fit well with the character you have established as a psi based mud elementalist.
The others really don’t make sense with the history you provided nor the core power set you established.
These are just my observations.
To glom on to Lalli I have questions:
1) You stated that you have Psi powers that allow you to do a host of things- appear through the floor, control various elements, causing nightmares and the odd bite power.
2) You have a body made of mud, not really a problem if you constitute it like any other elemental power based person who transforms into their element. But like Lalli, if you are made of mud and can absorb kinetic attacks because your body is malleable, what are your bones made of and do you actually have bones?
The first two powers seem a bit disconnected, as they don’t offer a cohesive synergy in their application. i.e. if you are mud how can you appear through a floor that presumable is not porous? How do you control other elements, specifically fire and air if you are composite of two elements, water and earth? Those are diametrically opposed elements.
Like Lalli said you need to list and describe all the powers you can use/do otherwise it will appear as if you are pulling powers outta your ass to save yourself in a fight.
Your terror psi powers that you list are interesting. Not overly powerful since I presume that when you use them you are in effect making yourself weaker, which ultimately gives your opponent a distinct advantage over you.
Then we come to the marysue-ish part of your character-
Just a small list, not ALL of his attacks.
(1) Summoning Magic May summon one of the following creatures, and up to 2 at a time.
-Basilisk Nyagna (a special snake)
-Centaur Brutus (made of stone entirely)
-swarm of "Mytes" (small insects bred to resist magic and devour flesh
-Giant Flacon Myrates
-Fang the Dragon
(2) Conjur weapon can only conjure a weapon of which he has with him. This simply saves the trouble of heathing and unsheathing a weapon.
(3) AOE effect naturally, the immediate area around Jynxs feels cold. It also pulls in a thick fog for miles about.
(4) Transformation Transforms into a "Terror Beast" which suffers no negative penalties from terror arts, as wel as boasting highly enhanced physical capabilities. Transforming back is normally fatal, however it instead leaves Jynxs exhausted.
(5) Curses Jynxs may perform various curses ranging from powerfull ruinic curses that act often as traps, to summoning clouds of acid, or controlling small shadows for a short time.
(6) Assassin's edge A move that utilizes his knowledge of anatomy. A series of physical strikes (3total) aimed to cripple a foe without killing them.
(7) What the f*** do you call this? may regurgitate many things rangingfrom animals to weapons, to usefull objects.
(8) Mass Manipulation May take in any earth (reguardless of temperature or moisture) and add it to his body to gain mass
(9) Non consistent form even though he looks human, jynxs's body dosnt always act like it. He grows extra limbs, spikes, tenticles, eyes, and more on a whim. He can also control himself as a giant mass of mud(if he gains enough mass) with no resemblance to a human body.What is a soul? You will have to define that because not all characters have souls.
Out of these ‘other powers’ the only ones that actually make any sense to the character you have presented are (4) Transformation, (7) What the f*** do you call this?, (8) Mass Manipulation, and (9) Non consistent form. These four powers fit well with the character you have established as a psi based mud elementalist.
The others really don’t make sense with the history you provided nor the core power set you established.
These are just my observations.
