[OOC] Star Wars: Galaxy Divided

[WitchChild]

Homeworld doesn't really have to be a planet. It's really superficial so you could be born somewhere in the unknown regions or in a space cruiser.

[KabenSaal]

Name: Hannah Kabal
Species: The people of Tevintar have never really bothered giving themselves a species name, and so simply refer to themselves as 'Us'
Gender: Female
Age: 21
Appearance:

my picture

Homeworld: Tevintar, a planet somewhere in the Unknown Regions.
Personality: Hannah is a mess. She has been under the thumb of the Sith for a year, after being thrown around various criminal syndicates as as slave. This has given her a very disjointed mind, which she describes as 'A pane of glass that a Gundark has tap-danced on'.At times, she can be very distracted, running off after the slightly thing, and other times she can be bluntly evil. But, most of the tim she has a clear unfocused mind about her, and so she simply walks though life not watching anything of anything. If she does focus, then she can become very snappy, and angry at small things.
Force-Sensitive: Yes
Calling: Ex-Sith. Smuggler.
Equipment: Two blasters, several explosive charges, and a hell of a lotta Force.
Skills and Abilities: Hannah has a laundry list of Force Abilities, from the standard Light and Dark side powers-such as Push, Pull, Lightning, Choke and minds tricks- to more complicated powers, such as limited mind reading-roughly the past three minutes of thought-, Cryokenisis and the ability to become foggy, and see-though-she calls it Force Hidey. She has a very sketchy control of Pyrokenisis, and doesn't use it often, because she is scared she'd set something on fire. Which, is usually the main goal, but she is not sound of mind. Hannah also has an ability she doesn't advertise often, which allows her to manipulate the hormonal points of her target, and cause arousal, thus clogging the person's mind and making them easier to manipulate. She is also skilled in the usage of a Dual-bladed Lightsaber, and is proficient in the use of blasters, and can wield one in each hand.
History: To summarize Hannah's life would be difficult. SO many things happened to her over the course of a few years since leaving her home of Tevintar that makes her a novel, rather than a blurb. She is, however, very closed to her past and will not tell anyone she doesn't trust explicitly.

[ShadowD]

I dunno bout the "laundry list" of force powers, you could literally say that complete force manipulation is one inside it, also some of the powers seem less Force user and more mage. No clothing or amour (lol I know that one is small as your pic has clothing/armour on her), and force hidey just sounds like normal force stealth. But not GM so it's upta witch

[WitchChild]

Now that my eyes are no longer glued to the screen from watching Justice League War (Watch it btw, it's awesome) i can now review what has happened and finish up the IC.

Now, to Hannah.

Although the setup is...interesting. It feels very very lacking in the regard to history. Most people have given me a good History synopsis about their character such as where they came from, what they have gone through and where they learned their abilities and at some parts what their motivations are. Yours however is too lacking in that regard especially since she was an "ex-sith". Your history isn't even a blurp and it looks like just an excuse to have both light and dark side powers which is odd seeing that she supposedly trained in Dark Side powers by the Sith but would need to see a Jedi or the such to train in light side powers.

[NoaFuuma]

WitchChild said
Now that my eyes are no longer glued to the screen from watching Justice League War (Watch it btw, it's awesome) i can now review what has happened and finish up the IC.Now, to Hannah.Although the setup is...interesting. It feels very very lacking in the regard to history. Most people have given me a good History synopsis about their character such as where they came from, what they have gone through and where they learned their abilities and at some parts what their motivations are. Yours however is too lacking in that regard especially since she was an "ex-sith". Your history isn't even a blurp and it looks like just an excuse to have both light and dark side powers which is odd seeing that she supposedly trained in Dark Side powers by the Sith but would need to see a Jedi or the such to train in light side powers.

You read my mind. As you tend to do. :)

[NoaFuuma]

Where is the IC?! D:<

[NoaFuuma]

I may or may not have accidentally posted a dot into the IC... And you can't delete messages on this forum.... and that fact really really sucks.

[ShadowD]

Lol bad Noa

[WitchChild]

ALrighty. about 1/3rd of the ways done. I am doing intense thinking on how to keep things consistent and what direction I intend to go.

[WitchChild]

IC is up. Smugglers are to be membersof the Krayt mother.

If you have trouble thinking which arc you belong to, just PM me and we'll work something out.

[NoaFuuma]

ShadowD said
Lol bad Noa

I blame it on being high on painkillers without eating all day and drinking sugary caffeine drinks.

[WitchChild]

Well, The Ic is up. I want to see some posts and start this space opera

[NacNak]

WitchChild said
Well, The Ic is up. I want to see some posts and start this space opera

okay =3

[WitchChild]

Boopie

[WitchChild]

Soo...I am really hoping to see some posts soon.

[Sep]

I actually... forgot about this...

I wasn't subscribed to the thread.

[WitchChild]

Then do so

[Sep]

I also do not have time for it now... sorry...

You may keep/giveaway the True Empire as you see fit.

[WitchChild]

I'll keep that in mind.

[NacNak]

posted =3