> Can't wait for the next episode of tales
Story of my life. My Skype avatar always is Rhys. Always use the Rhys-meister.
> Since you're now reviewing posts, would you mind rating mine good sir? I would like to buckle down on any Mistakes I've made after all.
I'm not particularly reviewing them, but I do think yours is fine. A few mistakes here and there, you totally ignored the one guy's character, aside from that, just random capitalization in sentences and spacing errors. This may just me being picky, so I wouldn't be bothered by it if I were you.