[OOC] Moonlight Sonata: Eternal Melody

[azarhiro]

hey @nerminator. Your joining this thing too?

[azarhiro]

@Cynder nice character

[nerminator]

hey @nerminator. Your joining this thing too?

@azarhiro

Yeppers, Just like hang man, in order to win all you need is a certain vowel that you require to win the game Me

[azarhiro]

I.....see . Well welcome aboard?

[nerminator]

well thank you,

[Entropsy]

I.....see. Well welcome aboard?

@azarhiro

[Simon Cowell voice] It's a no from me. @nerminator I'm gonna assume the character you posted, Jack, was a joke. That being said, jokes are great and welcomed here--hell, I love snark! It's what gets me up in the morning. Even GM's char, Blake, needs to be taken with a spoon of salt and a sense of humor. Cynder and I have discussed Jack, however. The joke that's being made with him might strike some readers as distasteful. Moreover, as GM put it, "[you've"] completely let character development shoot over [your] head". While parts of the character may be humorous and played off as as satire, Jack's complete characterization is just one big attempt at a joke, which will make it very difficult to play him seriously in this actually serious roleplay and make interacting with him difficult for other players. Not to be harsh, Nerm, but from what we've seen of other rp's you've been in, you don't exactly write in a way that makes us think you can keep up with MS's rules.

Particular Rule Entro's Referencing?

-Third person, past tense, A+ grammar and spelling, a few sentences at least.

So, @nerminator has been voted off the island.

[nerminator]

Can we talk this over?, I haven't even finished my CS yet, thats why I put the big WIP in the top, right now your judging a half built character, Can you atleast let me finish my CS instead of just rejecting me?, let me learn atleast Try to meet up with the expectations, and then you can be Free to judge away. PS I was also planning on adding a lot of character development, I wouldn't stay a lazy gamer for the entire RP

[Cyndyr]

Can we talk this over?, I haven't even finished my CS yet, thats why I put the big WIP in the top, right now your judging a half built character, Can you atleast let me finish my CS instead of just rejecting me?, let me learn atleast Try to meet up with the expectations, and then you can be Free to judge away. PS I was also planning on adding a lot of character development, I wouldn't stay a lazy gamer for the entire RP

@nerminator

I'd love to do that, I'm a very patient person. Unfortunately, this RP is more about quality than quantity -- generally, we can tell if someone is going to make the requirements or not, even if their character sheet is not finished. There's really not much to talk over, however, and your character is still going to be rejected, especially if you have to note outside of the sheet that there will be development or not. A person should be able to tell if a character is serious or not, in this case, none of us really can. And I'm going to be up front and honest here, your character carries some content that could be borderline offensive if portrayed incorrectly. Is that a bad trait? Not necessarily. As writers, we must be willing to tackle stereotypes and content that can be seen as offensive, otherwise, all books and stories would probably suck. However, in order to do that, we have to write in style and execute it properly. From what I'm seeing, it maaay be very difficult with the angle you're taking it from. Bottomline is that we're rejecting you, because we have seen some of your other content and your character is not up to the "quality vs. quantity" standards that this RP carries. Sorry, but we're judging you now on past content, repeating mistakes and what we've seen so far from your character that was submitted.

[Entropsy]

Can we talk this over?, I haven't even finished my CS yet, thats why I put the big WIP in the top, right now your judging a half built character, Can you atleast let me finish my CS instead of just rejecting me?, let me learn atleast Try to meet up with the expectations, and then you can be Free to judge away. PS I was also planning on adding a lot of character development, I wouldn't stay a lazy gamer for the entire RP

@nerminator

My word is final, bucko. Don't argue with me on this. There was absolutely zero character outside of stereotypical neckbeard in that WIP anyways, so there wasn't much sense in posting it, yeah? There wasn't even an image that might need to be saved. And, y'know, "xxxpusislayerxxx"? Nah man. If it was something you were going to change, why'd you write it in the first place? That WIP is one big eyesore of an offensive joke. AND it's not just the character. We have our requirements and we decided that based on what you've shown us so far, you won't be able to meet them. GM's gonna post in a few minutes or she already has, so refer to that if you don't want to take me seriously. Edit: Cyn has all the patience and I have zip, apparently

[Silver Fox]

*watches conversation before looking at past rps and errors, scribbling a black marker before scooting away* ...I'm being watched. Ninja mode activate <.< >.>

[Entropsy]

*watches conversation before looking at past rps and errors, scribbling a black marker before scooting away* ...I'm being watched. Ninja mode activate <.< >.>

@Silver Fox

You're fine, friend. We have a few black-listed members, but you're not one of them. ^^'

[Silver Fox]

<Snipped quote by Silver Fox> You're fine, friend. We have a few black-listed members, but you're not one of them.

@Entropsy

Oh good. I was about to punt my phone for failing me again. *does happy dance*

[azarhiro]

Well I'm generally a forgiving person but honestly Entropsy and Cynder have very good points.....*silently thanking the magical floating spaghetti monster in the sky he used a question mark*.... sorry dude but I guess your gone. But honestly your character was ridiculous and well....if I wasn't doing a serious RP or if it was one on one I'd probably be ok with it but for something like this......I think it's best to just throw him out...maybe you can convince them to let you make a new character and try to follow the rules + be more serious and get them to see you as a better RPer?

[Entropsy]

<Snipped quote by Entropsy> Oh good. I was about to punt my phone for failing me again. *does happy dance*

@Silver Fox

Have a consultation fox pixel: Don't fear me, kiddies, I'm still truckloads of friendly and relative harmlessness. If anyone else is having concerns like Silver, worry not, because we're not concerned about anyone at this point. You're all safe. That being said, if we see something we don't like IC, we'll still warn/reject players for it.

[Kirah]

I'm trying to finish Oberon, I just got back to the hotel and am trying to work on the suggestions I got today at the conference, so hopefully I can finish him tonight. I won't have time tomorrow though, super sorry! This conference is great though!

[azarhiro]

Aaaaaaagggggghhhh!! Someone force me to work on my second character! Please I need motivation.

[Silver Fox]

Aaaaaaagggggghhhh!! Someone force me to work on my second character! Please I need motivation.

@azarhiro

*huggles pixel fox* Go Go Go! You can do it! *cheers*

[Entropsy]

Aaaaaaagggggghhhh!! Someone force me to work on my second character! Please I need motivation.

@azarhiro

If you do, make it a girl or make it gay. There's too many guys and they're nearly all hetero. And join the group chatzy you NERDS.

[Silver Fox]

<Snipped quote by azarhiro> If you do, make it a girl or make it gay. There's too many guys and they're nearly all hetero. And join the group chatzy you NERDS.

@Entropsy

But I'm on my phone.... And.. Yuumata: *waves rainbow flag* taste the rainbow! Stop being goofy you stupid cat <.< Yuumata: Pfft. Someone doesn't like skittles. >:3 *is smacked by a newspaper*

[YamiCuoreLaroux]

<Snipped quote by azarhiro> If you do, make it a girl or make it gay. There's too many guys and they're nearly all hetero. And join the group chatzy you NERDS.

@Entropsy

Do we need any other characters? Because I might make a second one if there's space for one.