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Alright, so me and CallaLily fleshed out a little bit of a background for how Avery and Fayth know each other/met. It will be placed in an edit at the end of my CS underneath a section called "Who she has met, how it happened."

I put in that Fayth arrived and got in a tussle with two betas when she arrived. Being a fierce omega of her brutal pack, she held her own. I said Carlson stepped in near the end of the fight (hope that's okay) and that Fayth agreed to join the pack after some convincing. Anyone want to be those betas she first met? We can talk about it here, or you can PM me and we can flesh it out more to give ourselves a solid starting point.
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Thx. But seriously.. how?!

Also, are there any omega spaces left or shall I make a beta wolf? Because I don't mind either.


I'd say to make a beta. However, you could make them close to promotion to omega. If you really want to spice things up, you could make them recently demoted from omega to beta.
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I'd say to make a beta. However, you could make them close to promotion to omega. If you really want to spice things up, you could make them recently demoted from omega to beta.


Oooh. Drama!
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I'm still thinking of demoting Ryan from OMega to Beta before we start. His stubborn personality doesn't seem to fit with the idea of the submissive peacekeeper.
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Does anyone have an issue with me, the alpha female, or am I just too adorable to be someone's pain the **** :P I also need more connections and special relationships with you guys. Carlson and I already agreed that we ''just lead together, but are not a couple''. I don't want to feel left out :P
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Does anyone have an issue with me, the alpha female, or am I just too adorable to be someone's pain the **** :P I also need more connections and special relationships with you guys. Carlson and I already agreed that we ''just lead together, but are not a couple''. I don't want to feel left out :P


Hrm...

Well, Ryan got traded from his Topeka pack to your Greyville pack. I wonder if there is any animosity or history there?

Maybe he's a hostage to keep Topeka from moving west into your territory?

Maybe it's a mutual exchange and someone you care about is now in Topeka?

Or Mori was the one who brought Ryan out west while she wandered, not liking how Topeka was biting people left and right to boost the pack's numbers and getting him out after f*cking some people up?

And on a side note, how does Mori feel about Ryan dating a non-werewolf? And his aggression whenever someone suggests "changing" Ryan's boyfriend to keep pack secrecy?
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Hey Gurl, you be way too cute to be on anyone's radar. @Manticore
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Does anyone have an issue with me, the alpha female, or am I just too adorable to be someone's pain the **** :P I also need more connections and special relationships with you guys. Carlson and I already agreed that we ''just lead together, but are not a couple''. I don't want to feel left out :P


I think Mori and Fay would have a hell of a relationship. The ferocious aspects of their personalities could absolutely clash.

Perhaps Mori doesn’t quite trust Fay? The sharp wit of them both. Their cunning could make for an interesting cat and mouse game of getting Fayth to reveal more about herself.

Feel free to add some more ideas/things we can do!
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Or Mori was the one who brought Ryan out west while she wandered, not liking how Topeka was biting people left and right to boost the pack's numbers and getting him out after f*cking some people up?

And on a side note, how does Mori feel about Ryan dating a non-werewolf? And his aggression whenever someone suggests "changing" Ryan's boyfriend to keep pack secrecy?


I like that one. It's totally Mori's style to save wolves from abusive leaders. So yeah, we can go with that :)

And about Ryan dating a non-werewolf... I don't know actually. She would definitely have a problem with his agressive behaviour, as she wants her family to be at peace with each other, but I'd say she would be ok with it. Well, she would definitely keep an eye on them, but wouldn't bother him about it every chance she got.

All in all, I think they could get along pretty well. Unless you want it otherwise :P

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I think Mori and Fay would have a hell of a relationship. The ferocious aspects of their personalities could absolutely clash.

Perhaps Mori doesn’t quite trust Fay? The sharp wit of them both. Their cunning could make for an interesting cat and mouse game of getting Fayth to reveal more about herself.


That's exactly what crossed my mind the first time I read Fay's CS! :D I guess Mori cannot really tell, whether she likes Fay or not, because they are both somewhat alike - they both had brutal fathers. And perhaps Fay would often tease her with the fact that she wasn't born a werewolf, she wasn't even properly trained - and here she is playing alpha :)
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I like that one. It's totally Mori's style to save wolves from abusive leaders. So yeah, we can go with that :)

And about Ryan dating a non-werewolf... I don't know actually. She would definitely have a problem with his agressive behaviour, as she wants her family to be at peace with each other, but I'd say she would be ok with it. Well, she would definitely keep an eye on them, but wouldn't bother him about it every chance she got.

All in all, I think they could get along pretty well. Unless you want it otherwise :P


Alrighty then!

I'll rewrite the CS to reflect that. My thing is I want to have a point of conflict with Mori over something. If everyone is happy and healthy together, then the story stalls and peters out.

I don't imagine them having a knock down drag out fight about their relationship, but I think it's something we could use to add some drama to the pack :P
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I'll rewrite the CS to reflect that. My thing is I want to have a point of conflict with Mori over something. If everyone is happy and healthy together, then the story stalls and peters out.

I don't imagine them having a knock down drag out fight about their relationship, but I think it's something we could use to add some drama to the pack :P


That's a valid point there. Hmm...what if they became really good friends after Mori saved Ryan from Topeka, but then their relationship had to change due to Mori becoming an alpha. So maybe Ryan still treats her as his best friend, and expects her to be ok with whatever he does. So Mori is kind of torn apart between being his friend, and being a leader. Still not enough conflict? :P That's all I can think of right now, but I might get a better idea later.
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Would anyone like to work out a relationship with Avery? I know that since she's a human, the werewolves might not know her. Also, I'm almost done with Sierra, but I decided to go back and work through her History.
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That's exactly what crossed my mind the first time I read Fay's CS! :D I guess Mori cannot really tell, whether she likes Fay or not, because they are both somewhat alike - they both had brutal fathers. And perhaps Fay would often tease her with the fact that she wasn't born a werewolf, she wasn't even properly trained - and here she is playing alpha :)


They are definitely alike. Fay would probably tell a lie about her father. Being the omega of one of, if not the most brutal werewolf clans isn’t likely to win her trust points with other packs. Especially one known to put their own members into another clan just to betray them.

She isn’t one to hate on people for not being pure of blood, but her father wouldn’t let a turned human be of a high rank. However! She’d definitely tease her for it if she saw it as a point of sensitivity for Mori.

Fay may have her own ideas, craftiness, and ability to lead. But, definitely an irresponsibility and lack of desire or connection with her own kind.
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Would anyone like to work out a relationship with Avery? I know that since she's a human, the werewolves might not know her. Also, I'm almost done with Sierra, but I decided to go back and work through her History.


Sure. How would you like to tie together with Ryan? And that's not just meant to be a Y/N, I'll defer to you on this one lol
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They are definitely alike. Fay would probably tell a lie about her father. Being the omega of one of, if not the most brutal werewolf clans isn’t likely to win her trust points with other packs. Especially one known to put their own members into another clan just to betray them.

She isn’t one to hate on people for not being pure of blood, but her father wouldn’t let a turned human be of a high rank. However! She’d definitely tease her for it if she saw it as a point of sensitivity for Mori.

Fay may have her own ideas, craftiness, and ability to lead. But, definitely an irresponsibility and lack of desire or connection with her own kind.


So I guess we can only work on Mori's suspicion of Fay's intention. In that case, we can say Mori actually wants to throw Fay out of the pack - simply because she doesn't trust her. Of course, she cannot get that idea pass the Carlson as he doesn't have any issue with Fay. So like you said, they would play a cat and a mouse game, with Mori trying to dig out any kind of dirt on her to prove the pack she's rotten.
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Again, our characters would work at the same bar, which is the werewolf hangout. Maybe they have semi-casual conversations together in the bar?

As for my other character, who isn't up yet, I could think of a couple of ways they would know each other. Since they both have farming backgrounds.

Speaking of which, here She is.


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Sierra D. Lovett

Age
Twenty-Seven

Appearance
Sierra has light brown skin, and long arms and legs. She has brown short cut hair for maneuverability, though if she grows it out it looks fairy curly at the ends. Her skin is rough and calloused, both from fighting werewolves and taking care of the farm. She is 6'0-as height runs in her family-, which makes her taller than most women. She weighs 145lbs, and has brown eyes.

Human, Werewolf, Or Hunter?
Sierra is the fourth generation of Hunter in her bloodline.

Were You Born Into It?
Sierra was born into being a hunter.

History
Sierra grew up like any normal child, with the exception of her intense weapons training. Throughout her life, she has had the knowledge of werewolves. Hunting has kept her strong, and it has kept her family together. Sierra knew weapons and strategies better than she did most of her close friends. And until she was fifteen, she savored this life.

Her family kept a farm, with a two story farmhouse and a large red barn you'd see in movies, where they raised animals, planned attacks, and kept their weaponry. One night, a week after Sierra's fifteenth birthday, her family heard of a nest of werewolves that they decided they would take care of. They left Sierra alone at the large farm, because of the danger that this mission could hold.

Only one of her family members returned. Her older grandfather, who told her of the unexpected numbers in the pack, and the planned counterattack. Sierra was heartbroken, and after that, she was almost never the same. Instead of being a cheerful, fun-loving teen, she grew a hard shell. She decided that she would spend her free time training, and taking care of her grandfather.

When Sierra turned twenty, her grandfather fell ill. She did her best to save him, but he didn't want to be saved. So when he died he left Sierra with a small amount of money, and a ton of grief. Sierra was alone with her farm animals, in a house that was far too big for one person.

Later on in life, Sierra discovered more hunters like her. She joined up with them, and was able to start making new friends.

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Weapons: Silver Bow /w Arrows & Dagger
Clothing: Cloak & Armor
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So I guess we can only work on Mori's suspicion of Fay's intention. In that case, we can say Mori actually wants to throw Fay out of the pack - simply because she doesn't trust her. Of course, she cannot get that idea pass the Carlson as he doesn't have any issue with Fay. So like you said, they would play a cat and a mouse game, with Mori trying to dig out any kind of dirt on her to prove the pack she's rotten.


Sounds like much tension.

I like.
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Ok. Will do -- sorry if I take forever making my CS.

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I had multiple drafts open; and my laptop somehow shut down.

But that rage doe..

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@Trinais I suppose we could figure out how Fay and Ryan feel about each other/how they met.
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