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That eclipse should not have happened. It's almost impossible that it did happen. Someone, somewhere, should have predicted it. These things run like clockwork. But it looks like the clock broke. Everything went wrong when that goddamn clock broke.


As the edge of the moon caressed the halo of the sun, a chill broke across the surface of the earth. Just for a split second, everyone on the planet shivered. Now, if you've never seen a solar eclipse before, you don't notice anything until the moon has nearly covered the entire sun. Remember, the sun is bright. So when the light slowly started disappearing for each sliver of the sun being covered, it was the most exquisite thing ever witnessed by human eyes. It inspired such appreciation in each person that many fell to their knees and wept for the beauty being drained from the world, colour by colour, shade by shade, emotion by emotion. The world as we knew it was being sucked dry, all that was being left was a husk of a husk, a shriveled, decomposed corpse of a 4.5 billion year old body. A shroud fell over the planet, descended from the desolate halls of Heaven, Asgard, Jannah, Shamayim. It blanketed the world in grey. For all you know, you are the only ones left, trapped in your school as your teachers standing at their windows fade from sight, their memories and soul like a lake in a drought, drying up and vanishing. It is then, in the dawn of the quiet, when the first scream of tortured souls and chained hearts pierces through the shroud seeking retribution for past transgressions and unpayed debts against no-one but life itself.




That is my dramatic introduction. Here is my standard introduction:

You are a teenage student in a school. You did not know the eclipse was happening, and so did not witness it. You must rebuild your school so that it may thrive and you may live, looking for a solution to this event, if there is one. You must defend your school from the human enemies and otherwordly alike as they seek to defeat you for many reasons. You must live, lead, learn, survive, and fight.

BEWARE OF STRONG LANGUAGE, STRONG VIOLENCE, STRONG GORE, POSSIBLE ROMANCE (if you so wish it).

The even more standard introduction is that you're character is going to fill a roll within the survivor community to help it remain steady. If you want to be a doctor or medic, be it. Everyone needs a roll to help the community survive, and you're going to have to balance the defence of your school, your job, and your life with the other students. I have kept things purposefully vague to kind of put you in your characters shoes. You still know more than they do, but you don't know very much at all.



A link to the Interest Check. Please have a brief glance at my OP in that.

I don't know if I should also tag this under 'Fantasy' or 'Apocalypse' either, so let me know.

Before I get onto the CS template, I just want to set out some rules. I know, I'm such a dick.

Rules
1. You must be reasonably literate. I try to interact with poorly written posts as much as I can when I'm in a story because it breaks my flow of understanding and visualisation (my immersion, essentially), and this story isn't just for you, but others who may want to jump in and read it. Help their immersion too.
2. Don't be a dickhead. Don't godmode, don't metagame, don't start shit in the OOC. Two strikes and you're out.
3. Any questions, comments, suggestions, (nice) criticisms, drop them here or PM me and I will try to accommodate you as much as possible.
4. Happy hunting!

CS Template
Name:
Age:
Appearance (real images only):
Year of Education:
Favourite Subject:
Personality (optional):
Background (optional):
Significant Relationships with any other Characters:
Other:

The personality and background are optional because I find that restricting my character to those paragraphs in the CS can really limit how some people would normally react in that situation. You can do it if you want, I enjoy reading them, it's just that I won't be putting too much into them. CS' are more of a formality than anything else in my opinion, but if you are more comfortable doing a large CS then by all means go ahead.

Hope to hear from you guys soon.
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Just to clarify so I'm understanding this right, the scenario is there are a group of teenagers and teachers in a school. For all they know, everyone else is dead. Something went wrong (the weird ass eclipse) and the world, for the lack of a better word: broke. Then they have to defend themselves against humans and inhuman creatures. If that is correct, what are the enemies' motives? Also, they would have to venture out of the school to get supplies, yes? They would have initial supplies but that wouldn't last long. Anyways, I would be interested in joining and I am typing up a draft right now.

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Here's my character.

Name: Jackson Romine

Age: 17



Year of Education: Junior year (11th grade)

Favourite Subject: AP Biology

Personality:
- Intelligent -
- Nerdy (loves Pokemon and Call of Duty) -
- Calm and Laid-back -
- Socially Awkward (Doesn’t have many friends, never had a girlfriend, etc.)-

Background: TBR

Significant Relationships with any other Characters: There are no other characters yet but when other people join maybe we can figure something out.

Other: Jackson is left-handed, has an intense fear of giraffes, is allergic to shellfish and penecillin. Jack’s secret is that he’s a musician, he is a skilled singer and song writer. Romine plays the ukulele and has many notebooks dedicated to his music.
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Just to clarify so I'm understanding this right, the scenario is there are a group of teenagers and teachers in a school. For all they know, everyone else is dead. Something went wrong (the weird ass eclipse) and the world, for the lack of a better word: broke. Then they have to defend themselves against humans and inhuman creatures. If that is correct, what are the enemies' motives? Also, they would have to venture out of the school to get supplies, yes? They would have initial supplies but that wouldn't last long. Anyways, I would be interested in joining and I am typing up a draft right now.


I want to somehow get rid of all the teachers in the school. Most of the staff and faculty have vanished because they witnessed the eclipse happening (which, in another nugget of meta-information, is the cause of disappearing; if you watched it while it was at totality you vanished), and will find some other plot device to get rid of the rest of them soon. The human enemies are simply trying to survive and see the school as a good place to defend and live. This is because outside the shroud of mist is almost impermeable, it's incredibly thick so you cannot see more than a few feet ahead (think The Mist). The human enemies are generally not evil, just desperate, however this does not mean all are not evil. The inhuman enemies are a completely different story. They are pure hate. They just want to kill every human being because they feel they deserve revenge for whatever happened to them when they were alive. They have no cause, no reason, they were literally just transformed into these vile creatures who hunt for fun, essentially. They would yes, but they are currently well stocked. You have enough supplies to survive currently and get order instated so that you can properly organise and train to help gather supplies.

Here's my character.

Name: Jackson Romine

Age: 17



Year of Education: Junior year (11th grade)

Favourite Subject: AP Biology

Personality:
- Intelligent -
- Nerdy (loves Pokemon and Call of Duty) -
- Calm and Laid-back -
- Socially Awkward (Doesn’t have many friends, never had a girlfriend, etc.)-

Background: TBR

Significant Relationships with any other Characters: There are no other characters yet but when other people join maybe we can figure something out.

Other: Jackson is left-handed, has an intense fear of giraffes, is allergic to shellfish and penecillin. Jack’s secret is that he’s a musician, he is a skilled singer and song writer. Romine plays the ukulele and has many notebooks dedicated to his music.


I really like the character. Accepted. Post it in the Characters tab and if I add anything else to the CS I'll let you know. Everything feels kind of bare-bones currently, so there will be some renovations to the OP. I'm having to explain a lot of things that I shouldn't be explaining if I had written this OP correctly (completely my fault for not being prepared enough), so I'll be taking a lot of things I just mentioned and creating new tabs for it.
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Name: Cordelia Chasten - "CC"

Age: Eighteen Years Old

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Year of Education: 12th- Senior Year

Favourite Subject: Human Anatomy and Physiology

Personality: TBR

Background: Born to a alcoholic father and a crack whore of a mother, Cordelia lived her childhood in fear of her abusive father's drunken rage and her mother's soulless body. She fed herself from the small amounts of groceries her druken father manages to pick up from the local store and tried to keep herself sane. Into her teenage years CC was lucky enough to get her foot in the door at a local resturant as a waitress. With the measly pay she received each week Cordelia took care of her mess of a mother and her psychopathic father. She cooked and cleaned- fulfilling her role as the less than fortunate Cinderella, but with no fairy tale Prince Charming to save the day.

Significant Relationships with any other Characters: Currently none, but if anyone is interested in having a relationship of sorts with CC I would be willing to work something out.

Other: Cordelia is pansexual, but is skeptical of relationships. She doesn't fall in love easily and does not fall for looks. She was training in Mixed Martial Arts after school for the past three years just to keep her body healthy, but fell in love with the sport and became very skilled at it.
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Name: Avi Raclaw
Age: 17
Appearance (real images only):


Year of Education: 11
Favourite Subject: Music
Personality (optional): If TBR is "to be revealed" so TBR
Background (optional): Avi's family was the richest family in the county. As a single child, growing up Avi had anything a teenager could want - video games, a car, clothes - but all he wanted was his guitar. He has been studying guitar since the age of 6, and he fell in love with it immediately. He would spend most of the day practicing, and by the age of 13 he had won the county music competition, not to mention almost every school talent show. He also studied the electric guitar, and enjoys playing his favorite music - heavy metal. Music is his love and passion. When the shit hit the fan and the sun was covered by the moon, Avi lost contact with his family and most of his friends.
Significant Relationships with any other Characters: None for now, open to suggestions.
Other: He still has his guitar at the school. Other than guitar he also enjoys fishing, archery and hiking. Is allergic to nuts, not including almonds and peanuts. Favorite animal is wolf and favorite color is green.
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Name: Cordelia Chasten - "CC"

Age: Eighteen Years Old

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Year of Education: 12th- Senior Year

Favourite Subject: Human Anatomy and Physiology

Personality: TBR

Background: Born to a alcoholic father and a crack whore of a mother, Cordelia lived her childhood in fear of her abusive father's drunken rage and her mother's soulless body. She fed herself from the small amounts of groceries her druken father manages to pick up from the local store and tried to keep herself sane. Into her teenage years CC was lucky enough to get her foot in the door at a local resturant as a waitress. With the measly pay she received each week Cordelia took care of her mess of a mother and her psychopathic father. She cooked and cleaned- fulfilling her role as the less than fortunate Cinderella, but with no fairy tale Prince Charming to save the day.

Significant Relationships with any other Characters: Currently none, but if anyone is interested in having a relationship of sorts with CC I would be willing to work something out.

Other: Cordelia is pansexual, but is skeptical of relationships. She doesn't fall in love easily and does not fall for looks. She was training in Mixed Martial Arts after school for the past three years just to keep her body healthy, but fell in love with the sport and became very skilled at it.


Name: Avi Raclaw
Age: 17
Appearance (real images only):


Year of Education: 11
Favourite Subject: Music
Personality (optional): If TBR is "to be revealed" so TBR
Background (optional): Avi's family was the richest family in the county. As a single child, growing up Avi had anything a teenager could want - video games, a car, clothes - but all he wanted was his guitar. He has been studying guitar since the age of 6, and he fell in love with it immediately. He would spend most of the day practicing, and by the age of 13 he had won the county music competition, not to mention almost every school talent show. He also studied the electric guitar, and enjoys playing his favorite music - heavy metal. Music is his love and passion. When the shit hit the fan and the sun was covered by the moon, Avi lost contact with his family and most of his friends.
Significant Relationships with any other Characters: None for now, open to suggestions.
Other: He still has his guitar at the school. Other than guitar he also enjoys fishing, archery and hiking. Is allergic to nuts, not including almonds and peanuts. Favorite animal is wolf and favorite color is green.


Both accepted, I really like CC and Avi. Post them in the Characters tab and let me know if you guys' thoughts on the story.
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Hey, I was thinking since our character's both enjoy music maybe they could be friends? Well, Jackson's only friend XD. If not that's fine :)
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Added a section to the OP discussing the school. Is there anything anyone feels that I didn't discuss enough or would like me to go into more detail about? I'm almost positive I've missed things so please let me know, I'd like to make this as easy as I can.
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Hey, I was thinking since our character's both enjoy music maybe they could be friends? Well, Jackson's only friend XD. If not that's fine :)


Sure! They could even be best friends :D
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Sure! They could even be best friends :D


Sounds good to me!
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If anyone knows anyone who would be interested in joining, let them know. Especially looking for some females as there are 3 guys to 1 girl. Might start the IC once we hit 6 characters, 5 if we get another girl.
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I was going to wait, but I have a female twin I like to play with CC that I could use here. That would put it to 5 players. If you'd prefer me not to play two characters I will just stick with Cordelia then.
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I was going to wait, but I have a female twin I like to play with CC that I could use here. That would put it to 5 players. If you'd prefer me not to play two characters I will just stick with Cordelia then.


No, if you think you can run both sufficiently, lets do it. Should be interesting.
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Okay, I will have to alter CC somewhat to make their histories fit.
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Okay, I will have to alter CC somewhat to make their histories fit.


No problem, thanks for doing it! You've helped out a lot.
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I'm going to see if an friend of mine would like to join first. I just started to think that playing two girls in a casual roleplay might be a little much to manage with my current schedule. But if they say no I will go ahead and post her CS- my posts just will be around 2-3 decent paragraphs per character if I play them both instead of my normal 3-4 lengthy paragraphs.
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I'm going to see if an friend of mine would like to join first. I just started to think that playing two girls in a casual roleplay might be a little much to manage with my current schedule. But if they say no I will go ahead and post her CS- my posts just will be around 2-3 decent paragraphs per character if I play them both instead of my normal 3-4 lengthy paragraphs.


Alright, even better. If she cannot however join, then no worries. Thanks for offering anyway.
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She cannot join now due to personal issues. You should try posting it in the casual interest checks that it is open for female(s). ^^
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I can join if you still need a girl, I saw the interest check.
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I would like to join as well as whatever you need! I can do a girl or guy. :)
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