Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Digizel
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No, dialogue is always its own paragraph. Like, pick up any fiction book and that's how it'll be. Or a book on grammar or whatever that is with a section on that.


Well actually, that's not entirely true. Dialogue of a different person goes on a different line. Stylistically, there's nothing stopping you from putting it mid-paragraph if that paragraph is also about that character. As long as it's clear to the reader who's speaking, it's okay. In fact, imo, it can actually make the dialogue and narrative flow better together than if you punctuated it with a line break.

Now, if you want to publish a work, each publisher has a different house style. They might want you to make dialogue its own line, but it's just their personal styling.

Though Lugia's last post was a bit long. It probably should have been split into two paragraphs anyway. The longer the paragraph, the harder it could be for some people to read. It's not necessary, but I personally don't like writing paragraphs that are /too/ long.

Anyway, yeah sorry for my absence. I've got stuff worked out now I think. I still have a few problems, but they're not nearly as big anymore.
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That's what I meant, sorry. I was a bit unclear on how I worded that. Also, Welcome back Digizel!

Ah, true. And I didn't want to bring up the whole it has to be a one item/sentence outside of quotation marks, or it could potentially be its own paragraph again, even from the same speaker, but that's just what I learned in like, middle school or something, maybe highschool.

I don't think that the problem was it being long, but more about it not giving the eye a place to know where to pause, thus becoming disengaging or off-putting solely on how it looks and not exactly what it says.

It's cool, I get it. Things happen. Again, welcome back.
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I thought I had to wait for Digizel, I'll get to posting if not.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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You don't have to, just don't post twice before everyone else has posted, yeah? Or if I post and it's generally made clear that I was sorta refreshing the actions or something.
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This just in- moon.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Lugia
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Hey, Tobi... have you seen anyone else around here?
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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@Digizel Was here an hour ago. So yes. Basically.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Lugia
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Apparently, he's here now.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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@Digizel Hey, I don't mean to nag, but may I ask when you might be able to post in the IC?
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So how is everyone?
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Lugia
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Doing well, as usual... By the by, I'm sorry to say this, but I can't follow this into the 'advanced' section. I don't think my writing's up to snuff, as in, I can't make an advanced post for every post.
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I didn't expect you to. No offense, it just didn't seem like it was your usual.
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No, I understand, no offense taken. I just kinda wish these people would post.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Razael
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Boss @Lugia I am still to wait for @Digizel yeah? I apologize for my absence in the OOC I have a new IET so hopefully my internet will be working again. If I am not to wait for @Digizel then I am ready to help pick this back up if I am still welcome, once again I apologize for not informing any of you in advance but without internet connection it was not really a option.
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I'm not the boss here... and no, you're not waiting on him. We're at a point where basically anyone who isn't me or Tobi can post.
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Boss @Lugia I am still to wait for @Digizel yeah? I apologize for my absence in the OOC I have a new IET so hopefully my internet will be working again. If I am not to wait for @Digizel then I am ready to help pick this back up if I am still welcome, once again I apologize for not informing any of you in advance but without internet connection it was not really a option.


Oh hey man. Ah, I see. It happens. Nah, you can post whenever, as long as you're not posting twice before other people got a chance.
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Alright good, I'll get it up in a few mins
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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K, cool.
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Did I screw up?
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I wonder where Tobi went...
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