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I hope no one minds a double post. This is to avoid my previous post from being cluttered.

@hatakekuro Like @Solace said with my troubadour, your character has to have a kindred heart in order to use light magic. Andre can be sassy and all, but he has to have some sort of holiness to him in order for him to properly use magic. To me he seems like an overly aggressive person-- maybe you can add a separate paragraph stating the "good" in him?

Okay, time for his biography. Personally, I'm not fond of bios that are long, but I'm not fond of those that are that short, either. I have no issue with the monks taking him in (as the church is bound to do that), and while it does seem cliche, I'm not going to reject it. Though Sol has continuously asked us to add in how the characters have joined the volunteers or why they have not joined them yet. Maybe add another paragraph in, and you can explain that at the same time. :)

@Bornlucky I see no major issues in your character sheet other than the fact that there are some grammatical errors. I don't have time to list them all, but putting your sheet in a word document might point them out. I see no reason not to accept your character though.
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While trying to decide what class to make for a second character I noticed this rp focuses heavily on the class system from Path of Radiance though there are still differences. Below are class options that are not available in this role play that are available in other Fire Emblem games (English games only). It might be important to note these differences on the OP or to explain that this game is using the class system from what ever game you used.



The classes I chose for the list were the ones I would allow. The rest will not be allowed. I think people can read the list and discern this simply.

I mentioned before that third tier classes will work differently than normal, but it's too early to talk about it.

I personally request that everybody focus on making their characters and getting through that process.

My first character, a relatively simple fellow, is already completed. My second character is fairly complex in his biography, which is kind of long but provides a bit of insight on Estron + the Laguz situation.
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@Innsert We didn't copy and paste directly from a list; we've pulled out and excluded classes from several games.


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The classes I chose for the list were the ones I would allow. The rest will not be allowed. I think people can read the list and discern this simply.


Can you provide some insight as to why or how you chose these classes/promotion trees/equipment choices? It's odd that youre using mostly class progressions from Path of Radiance and yet Sages cannot equip Daggers? And there seem to be no mention of Crossbows.

Furthermore, I think many of the Awakening classes add color and variety to the class list. In particular the Trickster, War Cleric, Griffon Rider, Dark Flier, and Dark Knight.
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@Innsert Basically we picked and edited the promotion trees and classes to make a little bit more sense. Why would a Sage suddenly have a dagger? It would make more sense for a Sage to have a staff than to suddenly get a weapon like a dagger or sword. I don't know why we left out crossbows, though. Maybe Sol decided that bows would be enough.

We purposely left out many (if not all) of the Awakening classes because they make the least sense to us, at least. Why would a skilled Thief or Assassin suddenly be able to use a staff? How could a Cleric, who doesn't have a lot of strength, suddenly be able to haul around an ax? As for the Griffon Rider, Dark Flier, and Dark Knight, I think we have enough mounted units on the list, so we've left them out.
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Okay I edited my app to the best of my current ability (I'm on an Ipad until saturday) I hope it's better than before
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@Bornlucky I think it's alright now. Ipads are a pain in the ass to type on. While I really don't see any issue with his history (and I see that you added in the part of him joining the volunteers), I'm going to have Sol look at it one more time.

For a second I thought Terrance didn't agree with the rebellion, and I was about to call you out on that, but I reread and noticed he didn't agree with the Emperor. XD

Nice horse picture by the way. :o Does it have a name? Or did Terrance not name it yet?
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Can you provide some insight as to why or how you chose these classes/promotion trees/equipment choices? It's odd that youre using mostly class progressions from Path of Radiance and yet Sages cannot equip Daggers? And there seem to be no mention of Crossbows.

Furthermore, I think many of the Awakening classes add color and variety to the class list. In particular the Trickster, War Cleric, Griffon Rider, Dark Flier, and Dark Knight.


Classes such as the war cleric / priest (in particular) make no sense to me, as a healer isn't going to suddenly decide and start mashing skulls with axes. I'm not a fan of the Awakening classes, so they're not in my roleplay. Take it for what you will, but what I decide is what I decided. I might expand the class list in the future, but as of now I see no chance of it happening.

There is no particular reason for my class selection, other than me not wanting them in for balance/their absurdity.
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I'm thinking the horse's name will be Flint, I may change it later.

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I may, but I couldn't think of a backstory for him I might make him in the next part where I will have a history of him for sure.
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@Bornlucky Alright, take your time. ^^
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I may, but I couldn't think of a backstory for him I might make him in the next part where I will have a history of him for sure.


No problem. I was possibly thinking about making a bard (I love Nils <3) but I think I've decided on a Shaman instead.

Unrelated and kinda related at the same time... is it bad that I base what character I want to play off of what kind of images I can find on Deviantart??? ><

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@Innsert Oooh, Shamans are awesome. I haven't seen them played before. But you can make both a bard and a shaman, if you'd like.

And what do you mean? Do you mean that you like how a certain person's OC looks like and want to use them? Either way, I see no major problem with it as long as you give them credit.
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Lol, no. I mean I'm a deviantart addict..


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@Innsert Those pictures are fantastic! High quality as well. The Shaman one looks gorgeous. You can definitely use any one you wish.

I have a feeling you'd like Zerochan and Pinterest as well. You should totally check them out when you have a chance.
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@TwilightDragon Made le edits.
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I have a feeling you'd like Zerochan


Oh dear lord... so... much... art.
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@hatakekuro I think that's better.
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I'm not in the best condition to go through all of the current character sheets right now, but when I am, I'll do my best. From sifting through Lucky's CS, I think you're fine, but I'll go through it completely at after time.
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@Solace Can't wait to hear from you! And hope you get well soon!

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I forgot to post this earlier.

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Well I changed it. I hope it makes more sense than last one.
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I still feel as if people left or something.
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