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You made me think the IC started. :/
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Yeah it was mean wasn't it :3 That aside mind if I have my character worship a goddess that's not the god of light or from the pantheon?
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Yeah it was mean wasn't it :3 That aside mind if I have my character worship a goddess that's not the god of light or from the pantheon?


Your character can worship a lump of goat cheese if they wish to
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Cheesus! O_O!
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And I await critiques!


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Does this match your idea of what she looks like? Brunette, amber eyes.. I wasn't kidding when I said I had a lot of pictures saved.
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I will be darned lol. That's quite close actually lol.
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If you want it, take it. I'll remove it after so it looks like I was just complimenting you or something. :p that way 'you found it.'
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no need since I didnt find it :3 keep it there ^_^
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Suit yourself :^)
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Will do :3 Picture aside any coments on the char itself or rather herself?
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I don't know really, never really liked assassins for characters.
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Well she is an ex-assassin, now she is mostly a military scout/infiltrator :3
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I think you did well making her bisexual because that's a new one in the RP. I like the touch of not being able to have children, too. Being a slave thing is also cool. She certainly went through a lot in her life, almost seems like a Micheal Bay movie at some point, take that as you will.

I think, atleast in terms of equipment, you would do well to remove terms such as 'a good amount' since this is subjective and to anyone this could mean between 1 and 100. But I am not Fat Boy Kyle and I cannot approve or disprove of your character, this is just opinion since you asked for it.

@Fat Boy Kyle is slavery legal in Vahili? If so I have an idea for a character, if you'd allow me to have 2.
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And I await critiques!



Awesome character! I think the only thing I'm weary about is this: "Karen could throw daggers up to 40 meters with pinpoint accuracy and still posses enough force to penetrate the skull of the target." Forty metres is a fair distance, and if you're using small knives I can't imagine that they'd have much force behind them by the time they reach the target (if they reach the target). I could be completely wrong though, so I'll let y'all discuss it; I'm sure there's someone here that knows a lot more about throwing shit than I do :P

+Also, Partisan made a good point about the amount of knives
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Well for the Michael Bay thing there is one hting I think about when I hear his name: EXPLOSIONS!
well I will change the equipement numbers then ^_^. And from what I read the slavery seems to be legal only in Southarbour for shipbuilding and pitfighting, but then again we all know people will find a way to abuse the system :3.
EDIT: I read on the internet that 45 meters +- is the optimal distance for proffesional throwers. Could aways change it a lil down though what do you thing about 35?
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Number of daggers edited, throwing range edited too~
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@Fat Boy Kyle is slavery legal in Vahili? If so I have an idea for a character, if you'd allow me to have 2.


It's an incredibly grey area. No is the easiest answer. Slaves are only technically legal in Southarbour, which is why many places send their criminals there. Slave soldiers are legal anywhere, but can only be sourced from Southarbour. Most citizens of the Kingdom disagree with slavery, and its only because Southarbour depends so much on them that the trade has been allowed to remain there. You'll probably find illegal slaves all over the place though.


As for character limits, I'm going to say players are allowed a maximum of two for now. So feel free to make another.
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I read on the internet that 45 meters +- is the optimal distance for proffesional throwers. Could aways change it a lil down though what do you thing about 35?


Like I said, I actually have no idea. But I wanted to flag it up just in case. If no one else has a problem with it then you don't need to change it.

EDIT: I see you've changed the distance already :P
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*shurgs and looks around* Well I guess we can wait for a while before approuving her. :) that beign said I think I will watch 13th warrior now. I got the urge to do so while writing Karen.
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