@Angel EyesFirst off:
she's beautiful, we get it. Moving on..
I see she's a social butterfly, but that's .. okay. I guess. It doesn't really add diversity, but that's okay, if you want to play her like this.
Oeyo is a rather versatile shinobi who can be useful offensively, defensive, and supplementary. Not only is she a very capable medical-nin who also uses water-based medical jutsus, but thanks to her clan's hiden jutsus, she is an Empath and becomes a viable sensory nin as well.
So essentially.. she can do anything?
- Offensive
- Defensive
- Support
- Can heal
- Can sense presences
- Can sense emotions too
Where as most others have 1, max 2 abilities. I propose you remove this. I know this doesn't actually influence her IC abilities too much but it might give others the idea that it's ok to make a jack of all trades that can do everything. Why is she a chunin? Might as well make her a 1 man cell this way. Adding to that, anyway, is
She is incredibly smart, generally allowing her to outsmart and manipulate her foes as necessary, all the while evading and avoiding her enemies attacks with her speed and dexterity. She lacks physical strength and durability, but makes up for her physical flaws with a strong mind, water mantis claws, and telekinetic-like jutsu(albeit still being very limited with its usage). However, because she is a hemophiliac she has to be careful of certain weapons.
So on top of her all-round capabilities she's also incredibly smart. I want to warn you RPing someone that is above average levels of smartness generally leads to metagame (say, I RP a genius. Someone with an IQ of 200+. As much as I want to, I'll never be able to replicate his thought processes inside my own head because, sadly, don't have an IQ of 200+. Therefore, I will simply replicate this effect by knowing things he's not meant to know, playing it off by saying, he's super genius dood, I told you.) Now I am not sure what levels of smart she is, or if you can replicate that yourself (I guess you could) but on top of all her abilities she's also smart. I get that she is not as strong due to that, but let's be fair, saying ''I'm not strong'' and then pulling out a technique that makes up for that anyway is kind of weird.
Description: The Soyokaze clan is a fairly well-known, though small clan in Getsugakure known for being Empaths, utilizing their clan's hiden empathic techniques for a variety of purposes. Human emotion can mainly be traced back to, physiologically, four neurochemicals: norepinephrine, serotonin, dopamine, and GABA. A balance of these chemicals can be found in any of a person's moods, and they drive basic human instincts like harm-avoidance, novelty-seeking, and reward-dependence. The Empaths of the Soyokaze clan have a special connection to this chemical equilibrium. This in turn, allows them to feel and sense the emotions of others, communicate with others in a telepathic-like fashion, project sensations and emotions onto others, empathic reflection, empathic links, etc.
It sounds.. interesting. I'm not 100% I got it right, but I'm 99.99% I got it right, so I'm just gonna check. With this hiden, she will be able to project emotions on others, i.e make them feel some type of way (get it). No, but really. If she wants to make someone angry, all she has to do is.. well, perform a jutsu and BAM they feel angry? Feels kinda stupid and annoying to RP with if I may be so free. Say I want to make my character really jealous. She simply goes ''oh no'' and does a jutsu, making them non-jealous. That's kinda annoying even if it's legit.
Also, telepathy is kinda a Yamanaka thing. I get that you want to have a Yamanaka. But if you do, then just make it a Yamanaka, and don't take canon hidens, and add stuff on to it. Yamanaka's are strong enough as they are, and we accept telepathy because they are canon. In your case, there's no actual explanation that explains why sensing other's emotions suddenly allows one to communicate on a mental level. It feels kinda like you made the hiden, then went 'Oh and I want telepathy' and added it in there without explanation.
【Ninja techniques】
A rank techniques:
Mystical Palm Technique
B rank techniques:
Medical Water Release: Water Scorpion
C rank techniques:
Medical Water Release: Water Jellyfish
Medical Water Release: Water Mosquito
Chakra Levitation Technique
OK, OK, OK, OK.
Chakra levitation? Why? It seems useless and doesn't add anything to your character. Except for the fact where
all your characters can fly. In the anime only powerful people can fly (I'm sure you know this) like Onoki, Pain and Naruto in whatever the hell that fire-mode thing is called. Kurama mode? Either way, currently the way you're doing it, everyone and their mother can fly. It makes the technique obsolete.
Furthermore the technique is game-only. Meaning we don't know the full extent of it, meaning we want it to be a custom jutsu if you want to use it so you fill in the blanks. I just don't see why you'd need it, but okay.
Jutsu name: Empathy
Rank: B
Range: Long
Description: The Empaths of the Soyokaze clan are highly sensitive to the emotions of others around them. By focusing in on and tuning into an individual(s) nearby, she can pick up on and feel their emotions, as well as the emotions of animals. This can even be used as specialized form of sensing, using not the chakra of the individual, but the chemical and electrical impulses they give off while feeling a particular emotion. By projecting a field of her empathic chakra, he is able to pickup on these impulses. This aspect of her empathy allows her to track individuals. However, asymptomatic individuals are able to evade this form of sensing as they do not show any change in their emotional or mental states. This is the baseline technique of the Soyokaze Clan. Though even without focusing, a weakened state of mind or an inexperienced user may find themselves overwhelmed by the emotions of others around them or they may even absorb and act out against their will to the emotional whims of others.
Yeah okay. Watch every person in the cast suddenly become devoid of emotion. Welp, I know who I'll be pitting against this character, but yeah, this is ok. Sensing technique that uses emotional chemistry. I dig.
Jutsu name: Empathy; Sensorial Touch
Rank: B
Range: Physical Contact
Description: This particular technique allows Oeyo to project sensations and emotions onto others by making physical contact with them. She can make them feel what she is feeling, or project selective emotions onto them. She can use this technique to nullify pain and allow others to feel and understand each others emotions through her(using herself as a medium). Additionally, she can project specific sensations into others such as sexual arousal, feeling high, vertigo, body aches, numbness, pain, mental headaches(the kind someone gets from excessive crying), drowsiness, etc.
I'm gonna say no. Why? Because if you're fighting the mother of all evil, and you can simply go ''lol no, now u feel happy!'' and suddenly she is happy, that's kinda annoying. I'm sure technically this makes sense (actually, not really, because I'm not sure how your character can do this..?) but for the sake of roleplay and plot protection I'm gonna say no unless you change it somehow.
Jutsu name: Empathy Reflection Technique
Rank: B
Range: Medium
Description: This is a useful and defensive jutsu that works like a reversal. A person's jutsus are often tied to their emotions. By tapping into a person's emotions right before they use the technique, she can redirect/reflect the jutsu back towards them as if she used it herself. This works by her tapping into the emotion that fuels their jutsu and then quickly reversing it after its been used. (For example, she could redirect an anger fueled fireball jutsu thrown at her by channeling into the individual's anger and briefly taking control of the fireball as if it was her own anger fueling it). This technique doesn't work however against certain jutsus, physical objects(like senbon), dojutsus, and will likely fail if there was no emotion used behind the jutsu.
Okay, lol, this makes no sense. So, she takes control of the other persons emotions and suddenly all the chakra in the fireball reverses and flies back, doing a complete 180? Makes no sense, doesn't work in Narutoverse and it lacks explanation as to how. Emotions isn't what makes fire, chakra is.
Jutsu name: Empathic Communication
Rank: C
Range: Long Range
Description: By connecting with the emotions of another, she is able to form an empathic link with them. In doing this, she is able to communicate with them telepathically over long distances. Additionally she can form an empathic link with multiple people and use herself as medium to convey the thoughts of the party. However, maintaining the link becomes a strain and the more people she connects with the more chakra she exudes.
Sounds familiar.
Spodes note: This feels like a Mary Sue who is so special, she unlocked Ninshuu (that's literally what your KG does). The rest has been said.
This feels like a Mary Sue who is so special, she unlocked Ninshuu (that's literally what your KG does). The rest has been said.
